Throwing Stones at Glass Houses
Chapter 14
Meanwhile
Stella's POV
I opened Vic's door remembering that he told me to just come in. I walked through the front door and locked it behind me. "Vic," I called out. "Up here," he shouted down. I walked up the steps. "Vic," I said again walking into his room. "Hey," he said looking for a t-shirt in his draw. I bit on my lip hard. Vic looked at me, "Like what you see?" I bit on my lip even harder and nodded my head yes. He laughed a bit and grabbed a shirt from his draw. He slipped it over his head. "Have you been crying,"Vic asked walking over to me. He wipped my eyes. I winced a bit. "What happened to your face," he asked me touching the bruise on my cheek. "I-I fell," I said looking away. Vic's hands clenced in fists. "Who did this to you," he asked walking to his window. "Alex," I said quietly. He looked beyond pissed. I was about to speak up and say something."Well who's this pretty girl," a guy said walking into Vic's room passed me. He cut some of the tension in the room. I blushed. "Aw, I made her blush," he said looking over at me. "What's up Mike," Vic asked. "I'm going to the store. You two behave alright," he said walking out of Vic's room. Vic waited until his brother pulled out of the driveway to attack me with a kiss. He put his hands around my waist and lightly pushed me against the wall. We made out for a little bit. Panting for air I pulled my lips away from his. He was breathing heavy too. Vic pecked at my cheak a bit. I giggled, "Vic stop." He continued kissing my cheek. I felt his lips moving further downward. I bit my lip. "Vic," I said my voice faltering. His lips moved back to mine. I felt his hands work there way back to my back. I continued kissing him. His hands went under my shirt going upward. I felt my stomach tie in a knot. "Vic," I mumbled through the kiss. Vic lifted me up and sat me down on his bed, still kissing me. Vic climbed his way on top of me. I knew what he wanted, but I know hes not going to get that. Vic's tounge touched my lip. I wasn't used to this. I had never had a boyfriend so I had never experienced it. "Vic," Mike said walking into Vic's room. Vic pulled away from me. "I didn't see anything," he said walking out. Vic and I laughed. We basically hung out for the rest of the time making sure not to have a heavy make out session especially with Mike there. After an hour or two, Mike dropped me off at home.
Stella's POV
I opened Vic's door remembering that he told me to just come in. I walked through the front door and locked it behind me. "Vic," I called out. "Up here," he shouted down. I walked up the steps. "Vic," I said again walking into his room. "Hey," he said looking for a t-shirt in his draw. I bit on my lip hard. Vic looked at me, "Like what you see?" I bit on my lip even harder and nodded my head yes. He laughed a bit and grabbed a shirt from his draw. He slipped it over his head. "Have you been crying,"Vic asked walking over to me. He wipped my eyes. I winced a bit. "What happened to your face," he asked me touching the bruise on my cheek. "I-I fell," I said looking away. Vic's hands clenced in fists. "Who did this to you," he asked walking to his window. "Alex," I said quietly. He looked beyond pissed. I was about to speak up and say something."Well who's this pretty girl," a guy said walking into Vic's room passed me. He cut some of the tension in the room. I blushed. "Aw, I made her blush," he said looking over at me. "What's up Mike," Vic asked. "I'm going to the store. You two behave alright," he said walking out of Vic's room. Vic waited until his brother pulled out of the driveway to attack me with a kiss. He put his hands around my waist and lightly pushed me against the wall. We made out for a little bit. Panting for air I pulled my lips away from his. He was breathing heavy too. Vic pecked at my cheak a bit. I giggled, "Vic stop." He continued kissing my cheek. I felt his lips moving further downward. I bit my lip. "Vic," I said my voice faltering. His lips moved back to mine. I felt his hands work there way back to my back. I continued kissing him. His hands went under my shirt going upward. I felt my stomach tie in a knot. "Vic," I mumbled through the kiss. Vic lifted me up and sat me down on his bed, still kissing me. Vic climbed his way on top of me. I knew what he wanted, but I know hes not going to get that. Vic's tounge touched my lip. I wasn't used to this. I had never had a boyfriend so I had never experienced it. "Vic," Mike said walking into Vic's room. Vic pulled away from me. "I didn't see anything," he said walking out. Vic and I laughed. We basically hung out for the rest of the time making sure not to have a heavy make out session especially with Mike there. After an hour or two, Mike dropped me off at home.
So I originally found this on Mibba, but came over to this site once I saw it wasn't finished on there (and seeing you said you had a profile on here in an author's note), to see if you maybe finished it on here...
You didn't, which is a bummer. :( But you did get one more update up on here in comparison to Mibba, so that's something.
I really like what you have of this story, and bummed that you didn't continue/finish it. Especially after reading this last update; I had a feeling what all was between her and Vic was kind of rigged, but wasn't sure. Now... :O
I'm just wondering why Alex hates her so much. I mean, at first I thought it was because he liked her, so he teased her, but then he just started getting awfully harsh and then like almost took advantage of her... like WTF. I also can't believe Jack would be friends with him after seeing him hit his sister, just because he seemed "alright"... that was a bit weird.
But I think you're a really great writer, other than those missing factors. Some of those you were probably leading into explaining more and just didn't get to, which is really unfortunate.
If you ever find yourself wanting to write for this story again, I will be here to read. I also subscribed to it on Mibba too, although this seems to be the most up-to-date version. But regardless of which platform you post on, I will read. :) I think it's a really intriguing plot line and I would love to see how it all ends.
Hoping this comment will maybe inspire you to continue. If not, just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed this and just wanted to show you that people like me are still stumbling across your story. :)
4/16/17