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Dark affairs

Desire

WARNING: This chapter contains awkwardly written smut. I re-worked it a few times but I guess it's as good as it's going to get. Writing stuff like that is definitely not my forte, I'm sorry.


" Jack, please let me love you," he whispers against the others lips.

A few things happen almost simultaneously. My head snaps up to look at both boys with wide eyes just when their lips crash into each other, Jack pushes the door closed with one foot and grabs me and pulls me towards him as his hand wanders under my blouse and around my waist his other arm is slung behind Alex's neck to keep him in place. They kiss feverishly for a moment then Jack's lips wander down Alex's neck and said boy tilts my head upward staring into my eyes, mumbling, "oh Mickey," as he proceeds to kiss me.

This is crazy I think but my knees almost give in when I feel myself being pressed between the boys bodies, hands roaming my skin and lips caressing my neck.
A wave of emotions sweeps me away and my mind gets fogged up by incredible pleasure.
This is so wrong, it registers in my conscience but as soon as this thought enters my brain it is pushed away by these immense sparks that ignite and course around my body like an electric current.

There is pulling and pushing as we stumble around grabbing and kissing each other as we make our way to the bedroom, bumping into walls and furniture on the way there but none of us cares. I run my hands along Alex's toned abdomen when Jack pulls his shirt over his head and elicit a shaky moan from his shivering lips. It's obvious where this is leading to and there is no stopping this now, we're in too deep. The floodgates have opened.
It feels like just after you board a roller coaster, the tension when you are slowly pulled up to the highest point, your stomach flips with anticipation and for a moment you wish you would have stayed behind but you know it's too late to get out and you might as well enjoy the ride because no matter how scary it may seem, you know you end up safe back on the ground.

We fall onto the bed in a heap of tangled limbs. My blouse is ripped open by Jack and he buries his face between my breasts. I arch my back towards him as my lips get occupied by Alex's. I hear Jack groan beside me and I glance sideways to see a rose tattooed hand rubbing my boyfriends bulge through his jeans. Seeing the guys kissing and touching each other is so intense, it's shocking but also insanely hot and this realisation makes my cheeks redden in shame.
Jack fumbles with the buttons on my pants and I lift up my hips to help him taking them off, I'm still lip locked with Alex so I let my hands slide down his naked torso and pop the button of his jeans. My fingers slip under the waistband of his boxers as I pull his zipper down and I can feel him shiver, exhaling a gasp into my mouth. Jack finishes what I started and pulls Alex's pants down too.

It's time to get my boyfriend naked! I break the kiss and sit up and face Jack, his eyes are black like charcoal and he slightly pants as he stares into my eyes searching for a sign that this is okay with me. I just lean forward and tug on his shirt, he lets me pull it over his head and when his face reappears from the fabric I catch his lips in a passionate but also reassuring kiss. I'm in love with Jack and nothing is gonna change that. We are in this together and that makes it right.

We part our lips and I push against his chest, he understands and lets himself fall back into the pillows where Alex crawls over and continues the kiss. I open Jack's pants, softly brushing against his crotch while doing so and I can hear a strangled moan from him that is muffled by their locked lips.
I pull the material down with some struggle but when he lies there in nothing but his boxers I crawl back up his legs and start kissing around his naval and down his happy trail while I keep massaging him through his underwear. His moans are getting more desperate and he fidgets on the bed while pulling Alex closer and intensifying their make out.
It's his birthday so I intend on concentrating on his pleasure tonight. I pull his boxers down far enough to let his erection spring free. I grab him while my teeth scrape along the skin over his hip bones and I suck a blossoming pink hue into it.
I stop and admire my work but quickly continue when I hear a whine from my boyfriend. He hates being teased once he is gone that far but I can't help but slowly kiss my way closer and closer to where he wants me. He growls impatiently and thrusts his hips upwards in frustration and Alex tries to calm him by rubbing his lower stomach. I decide he has suffered enough and slowly inch my mouth down his throbbing member.
There is a distinct sigh followed by a chant of "fuck, fuck, fuck" when I start bobbing my head while I steady his writhing legs with a strong grip on his thighs.
I can feel Alex's hand slide past my face when he holds out two fingers to me. I stop what I'm doing for a second and take his fingers into my mouth to coat them with thick saliva. Alex hums in approval while working hickeys into Jack's neck.
I return to my mission and Alex's hand disappears behind Jack.
The second Jack jumps, nearly chocking me in the process and yells, "shit, Alex!"
I know those fingers have reached their target.
A couple of minutes of this dual stimulation and the birthday boy starts to shake uncontrollably.
He jerks to an upright position crying , "no! Stop or I'm gonna come!" We all sit on the bed for a second staring at each other then Jack pulls me close whispering in my ear. "Mickey, tell me when this is not okay with you." I nod in confirmation.
He sits back on his heels and his dark eyes are fixed on mine, "on your hands and knees, now!" He demands with a husky voice.
Jack is very rarely dominant in the bedroom, he is too playful for that and the fact he needed to make sure I tell him when to stop just shows what a sweetheart he is.
I don't hesitate and get on all fours on the bed my backside turned towards my very aroused boyfriend. He lowers himself as well and I shudder with pleasure when his tongue starts lapping at my bud. My arms nearly give in but I keep myself up and look to the side to see Alex watching us almost hypnotised his jaw falling slack. He snaps out of it and we make eye contact, I tilt my head and beckon him over and he quickly scrambles to kneel in front of me.

Alex on the other hand is always down for little games so I look up at him and smirk and he glares back but his grip is soft when he takes a hold of my hair and pushes my head down so I come face to face with his dick.
I swirl my tongue around the tip and place little kisses alongside. I need my arms to hold me up, I can't grab onto him so I let Alex take the lead and guide me. When my nose hits the hair around his base I tighten my throats around him and he moans as his head falls back and his thighs shiver.
"Fuck, you're so good, so fucking hot, Mickey." He mumbles between gasps.

I nearly scream when suddenly Jack pushes himself inside of me his fingers still circling my clit. My legs and arms start shaking with tiredness and stimulation.

He is building up a rhythm as he is moving in and out keeping his hands curled in a firm grip around my hip bones as he bends forward to kiss along my spine.


It only takes a few minutes until I reach my climax, starting a chain reaction. As I contract, Jack loudly moans and after a few quick thrusts he comes inside of me. Alex shakily warns me, "Mickey, I- I'm .." so I tighten my mouth and suck a tight seal around his shaft and with another bob of my head he comes undone. I ride him trough his high swallowing his load before we all fall back into the sheets trying to catch our breath.

Notes

Comments

Aw, you're very welcome! You deserve it! :D
And oh, gotcha. Those are often the most promising ideas, so I'm glad you went for it! :) And that it worked out, sweet. :D
Awesome, I will definitely check it out. I occasionally check out the main stories page once I'm done reading updates, so I'll probably see it. :) But if not, feel free to always let me know in a message when you post it. :)

Nanook Nanook
6/14/17

@Nanook
Oh my, thank you gurl! I'm actually blushing! So much praise!
But you are right I looked back and was surprised how long this story had gotten!
A lot of it wrote itself because I had almost the whole storyline in my head. I was thinking myself that there should be a sequel but first I'm off to another story that has been spooking around in my head. It might take a while but it would be cool if you would look out for it. :)

T-what T-what
6/13/17

@Newyork_xo
Awww, thank you so much, I guess it wasn't an ending that pleased everyone but I hope you can live with it. I don't know if Jack has really forgiven Alex but it had been years and he wouldnt kick out a friend in need. I also thought the epilogue practically screamed 'sequel'. Let's see if I can come up with a plot for this. ;)

T-what T-what
6/13/17

Awww, it's over. :((
But this was a cute ending though! It was a bit sad at the beginning, but then things just got a bit more uplifting and that made it more happy. OMG, I can't believe she had a kid! I wonder who the father is? :O
But I guess it doesn't really matter, if the kid has both of them in his life. :) Interesting ending to the story, I definitely did not see that coming. But I loved it and I'm glad it ended somewhat happily. :D
Overall, amazing job with this story. I feel when I made suggestions, you really took them into consideration, and that makes you an even better writer for trying to improve and taking feedback. The plot line was unique to anything I've read ATL fan fic wise, but I wasn't expecting less, given the uniqueness to your other stories I read. :) I was a bit hesitant with reading at first (mainly because I never really read Jalex anything), but that relationship was just put in moderately and you had Mickey's POV weighing it all, which provided a great balance for someone like me who's not used to reading Jalex fan fics, lol.
If you choose to do a sequel, I will definitely read it! But if not, I thought you did a great job with wrapping this up, and I want to thank you for sticking with it and giving us an ending. So many fan fics are left abandoned and it's really disheartening. And you managed this 52 chapter one in five months! Girl, that is an accomplishment, and you deserve major kudos. Many fan fics I've read have taken years to get that many chapters, if even that many at all; many stories, less chapters than that in years. So seriously, great job with sticking with this. That also makes you an awesome writer, you're very dedicated. :)
If there is not a sequel, I really hope you consider writing another fanfic, because I would be interested in checking out anything new as well. :)
Overall, job well done! I enjoyed reading!

Nanook Nanook
6/13/17

Okay, for starters, I really enjoyed this story and I am sad to see it go.

The beginning of this last chapter was pretty upsetting. I didn't think Alex really would completely ditch Mickey and Jack and the entire band. But I guess I was wrong! It's nice that Jack was finally able to move forward and create a new business venture that combined his two favorite things, Mickey and music.

But the ending! Alex comes back! Divorce. A baby?? Who's the daddy!!??!! Jack seemed to forgive and accept Alex back into their lives a liiiiiittle too quickly if you ask me.

I hope you'll consider a sequel so we can find out what happens to everyone in the future. Well done story. Hope to read more from you. :-)

Newyork_xo Newyork_xo
6/10/17