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Life isn't a fashion statement.

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Alex's POV

I groaned loudly as I woke up and looked and saw I was literally hugging the toilet and the smell of gone off beer filled my nose which made me gag loudly and throw up in toilet. "Feeling rough?" Jack asked as he walked in the bathroom with a glass of water and some painkillers.
"Rough is a understatement." I muttered and spat in the toilet.
Jack flushed the toilet for me and sat on the floor next to me.
"Have some painkillers it'll help with your hangover." Jack said quietly and handed me the painkillers and the glass of water.
"Is Quinn and Beth still here?" I asked and rested my head on the toilet since it was cold and I was really hot.
"They went home about 2 hours ago." Jack said.
"What is the time then?" I asked.
"You've been asleep all day Lex, I thought you was dead." Jack said seriously.
"Feel fucking dead right now. My head hurts so bad." I said and Jack moved and I felt home pick me up and walk over to the bed and gently placed me down.
"Do you think you can eat anything?" Jack asked and I shook my head as I got comfy in bed.
"No, it'll just end up in the toilet." I said and Jack chuckled and climbed into bed and cuddled into my back.

"Why you not suffering?" I asked quietly.
"Because I wasn't stupid and had drunk loads of shots and mixing my drinks unlike you, you party animal."Jack chuckled.
"I like my parties, just not the hangover part." I said and Jack kissed my cheek.
"Get some sleep." Jack said quietly.
"Planning to don't you worry." I muttered and fell asleep.

Notes

Comments

I don't think so! It's well written, nothing much happens but it doesn't have to be super dramatic all the time. I like it :)

T-what T-what
10/15/17

Hey lovely, seems like your stories reflect how you feel. You are definitely not wasting your time if it helps you to express yourself and be assured there are a lot of silent readers out there that enjoy your writing. Stay strong!

T-what T-what
4/30/17

I adore your stories. They are always so creative. I have been seeing marked improvement in your writing. Keep chugging along my dear. I will read what you write. Keep doing the best you can.

Carebear Carebear
3/6/17

so I have no idea if you will understand this (since you have dyslexia and all that), but I would like to suggest that you should have a beta to proof read your stories. Because trust me, I think almost all of your plotlines are really creative and good, but since some people aren't aware that you have dyslexia they'd probably assumed you're not that good at writing and stuff. I'm a grammar nazi myself, but since I know about your condition I can bear with it, while other people can't.

I salute you though, you don't let your condition stop you from writing so... keep it up!

You just need a beta to make your stories greater than they already are.

EarthToSofie EarthToSofie
12/23/16