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The Boy Next Door

I'm Sorry..

I'm sorry I haven't been able to post an update lately, even though I don't know how many of you are even reading this story. I just want you to know that I really love writing this and I've actually had this story idea for quite a long time. I usually write during my hundreds and hundreds of sleepless nights on my journal, when I just suddenly feel the need to express my feelings, with this story in result, and other sad stuff.

I'm at an All Time Low now, not the band, even though that'd be really cool. But I'm not.. Okay as of lately. I can't go one time without crying while hearing Therapy, not to mention the amount of anti depressants and sleeping pills I've taken the past few weeks, when dreamless sleeps feel like they're better than actual reality. It's just that things have been rough, but every storm that comes also comes to an end right?

I promise to keep up after everything's 'alright' eventually. Well, I hope so

-M

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Comments

Great job with the chapter! It was cute! :D
I love Halloween. :D It's seriously my fav holiday as well, next to the Fourth of July. :)
lol, that joke was so random, but I found it funny as well.
Hmmm... not much else to say but I did enjoy the chapter. One thing to note:
You clearly have succeed in making me do the things I never thought I'd do in my high school years, Alex."
"succeed" should be "succeeded"
Since it's explaining a past action, although... that may have just been a typo and you may already know that, lol, not sure.
But yeah, other than that, chapter went by pretty smoothly. :) Can't wait for the next!

Nanook Nanook
5/29/17

Oh gotcha, yeah, I'm confusing stories then, whoops. XD
:)

Nanook Nanook
5/27/17

@Nanook ahaha Alex's not a player in this story, I mean he sleeps around and all but this one is his first real relationship. Also, thanks for the offer! I definitely need to be more careful and do a double check before posting it but once the story's finished I'll go through each chapter and edit it!

Straight-up Hustler Straight-up Hustler
5/27/17

Oh, haha, I can understand that confusion then. XD Yeah, if you need a reference like that, just feel free to message me. I'd probably suck at configuring but I can at least tell you if it's a long or short distance, lol.
Great job with the new update! It was really cute. :) Love that they're together now and everyone is on board with it. :D
I'll just point out two things, they may be typos or lost in translation things, lol.
"To be honest, I'm not that surprise.
It should be "surprised", you just missed the ending there.
"You'll always be my Ginger Princess." Alex responses
Instead of "responses," it should be "responded." But side note, thought it was cute when he said that to her.
It was also cute when he wanted to get to know her better. Something that surprised me: this was Alex's first relationship? Wasn't he a player, though? Maybe I'm thinking of another story... or by relationship, maybe you mean like the first real one... just clarifying. Maybe I'm just getting that factor confused with another story. I tend to read a lot. XD
But overall, solid update and can't wait for more! Love that they're coming more frequently. :)

Nanook Nanook
5/25/17

@Nanook I tried adjusting with the us metric so I tried to use feet instead of metres ahahha I thought it was a lot....

Also, thanks for the feedback! Glad you enjoyed it, and hoping you'll like the next one I just updated also ;)

Straight-up Hustler Straight-up Hustler
5/21/17
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