So I made it clear I despise this story. Well, I'm going to work on another story with restinpeace and hopefully she can teach me how to actually write xD

So since you guys actually cared that I was ending this (??????) I'm going to write a continuation, of them on the run. The story will be called the runaways, but probably wont be up for like another month.

Fixes will be

1. I'LL ACTUALLY MAKE IT MORE THAN FIVE SENTENCES A CHAPTER
2. LONGER CHAPTER
3. LIKE WOWOWOWOW IM GOING TO MAKE IT SO ITS AN ACTUAL CHAPTER AND NOT JUST A SUMMARY
4. From 3rd person point of view. maybe? IDK
5. LIKE ITS GOING TO BE A DECENT LENGTH
6. LIKE GUYS THATS THE REASON (main reason) I ENDED THIS
7. Better ideas? Like I'll actually have a plan
8. YO DESCRIPTIVE WRITING
9. IM SERIOUS ABOUT THE CHAPTER LENGTH
10. MOTHER FUCKING SPELL CHECK MAN
11. I'LL GO BACK AND PROOF READ MY CHAPTERS
12. Their personalities will be more like real life Jack and Alex, although Jack is going to actually take things seriously xD
13. I'm going to explain the plot much better
14. It will tie in more of the monsters and the aliens
15. I'm going to beg you guys for feed back
16. more romance (smut)
17. the story is gonna be hella long
18. FUCKING
19. CHAPTER
20. LENGTH

The reason it wont be up for like a month is I was taken off anti depressants completely and were trying new meds. I'm too depressed to do anything but school and sleep. I also want to improve my writing a little bit first. TBH writing frustrates me and I'm trying to work on it.
I need a little writing help (and practice) so if you have anything that may help please message me.

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