The New Girl

Something to note at the very beginning of chapter 15: the very first sentence is written more in Alex's POV, even though you switched to Ellie's. lol. XD
But yay, two more updates! I love how natural they are around each other, like a real couple. :D That first note though, I laughed when I read hairy baby. XD Like girl...
But seriously who is doing all of this? It is really weird. I'm just waiting for the twist. I'm a little concerned with who/what it may involve. :/
And I wonder if she is pregnant or just sick. While she may have been told about being infertile, it doesn't hurt to take the test and at least definitively answer that. While there is only a small chance it is still possible. It irked me as she kept refusing, lol. I want to knooooow.
I feel like the person is Lisa but is that too predictable? Idk. The only other person I would maybe guess is Jack, because the last I remember reading, he still wasn't too fond of her. Although I hope it's not, but idk.
Great job with the updates! Can't wait for more! :)

But aren't you seeing the contradiction with that? "The whole getting older part is what she dreads. She just wants to be older" lol. I guess I can kind of see what you mean, but again, this explanation still contradicted a bit. If she's dreading it, why would she want it? Usually people want something they look towards positively. Know what I mean?
Or maybe... do you mean she hates the process of getting older? I think that might be what you mean and that's why I was getting confused because that wasn't stated as clearly. So you might just want to clarify that she wants to skip time and the struggle of growing up, but doesn't oppose one day being older in age and having accomplished things. I think that better explains it. lol. I think the struggle I was having was trying to connect it with the lyrics. And while I don't fully know what Alex's original intent with them was, I think he was generally referring to hating getting older and also being older, which is why I was getting confused with your explanation, because I already have a predetermined meaning behind the lyrics myself.
So basically, the problem here I think was interpretation. lol.
And ohhh, gotcha. Wow, she's just conniving. :(
And I understand. I personally don't mind longer chapters, but it's whatever you feel like writing.

@Nanook
Hey! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Basically the whole

"I’m stuck in this fucking rut. I’m so over getting older. I wish I could just be grown up and be married and happy and settled. I hate being a teenager!"

is her saying she hates getting older. Never knowing how many time she'll get her heart broken, how long it'll take to find the man she marries or has kids. The whole ordeal with going to school, college and then having to find work to follow whatever career she chooses. She's sick of getting older and just wants to be older now. The whole getting older part is what she dreads. She just wants to be older, settled knowing that she's finally stable and happy for life. I'm sorry it didn't make much sense!

Basically Lisa has been feeding Isobel lies, making it out to be like she's heartbroken and upset when in reality she couldnt care less, she just doesn't want Alex to be near Ellie but i'll make that clearer in following chapters.


I skip over a few of the sexy parts mainly because sometimes I can't be bothered writing it all out, step by step but sometimes its just because it makes the story too long and from reading experience it can get boring to read all the time.

Glad you like it!

OMG yay! You updated! Great job with the new chapters! :)
lol, I was actually thinking about it and I'm glad you brought it up... I hadn't thought about it, but then yeah, I was wondering why they had to travel farther to see his parents. XD That may just be what you want to add in chapter 12, what you added at the beginning of 14. Just so it isn't delayed, but that's up to you.
One part I wanted to point out in 13:
I’m stuck in this fucking rut. I’m so over getting older. I wish I could just be grown up and be married and happy and settled. I hate being a teenager!
If she's so over getting older, why is she wanting to grow up? This section just kind of contradicted itself, so you may just want to take out the 'I'm over getting older' part. I see what you did there, but yeah, it kind of just made things confusing. But the rut part made sense, you can keep that. :)
But wow, of course Lisa had to show up and make things awkward. It's a bit weird how his mom was so accepting of her being there; usually, parents side with their kids, no? So I found that kind of odd and to be frank, a bit uncaring. But I guess it could be considered caring because Lisa was heartbroken... idk. But then that's being a bit rude towards Ellie. :(
Looking forward to more cute and loving moments with Alex and Ellie. They are seriously so sweet together. BTW, I notice you skip over a lot of their sexy parts, but then some you don't? XD Is there a reason why? I'm just wondering if you're waiting to show that connection between them. It doesn't seem as sentimental, but then maybe once you do, it will be? Sorry if this is an awkward thing to ask, lol. Maybe you're just not comfortable writing some of those scenes. But I just found it interesting how you did with them in the car, but then not in the actual motel (just wondering about your mode of writing here, honestly).
But I seriously love this story and hope that you start regularly updating. I'll have to take some time out of my days to read. :)

Aw, yay! I'm happy to hear that. That would be awesome if you did; like I said, I'll be here to read. But take your time, really. :)
And lol, that's awesome! Dedication at its strongest, lol, idk how you did it. :O
And you're welcome, I'm happy you got on and were able to see it. :)