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The Lost Boys

Lost in Stereo

"Yeah, see you tomorrow."

With that the two boys turned to leave and were soon swallowed by the darkness of the woods around me. I decided to go to sleep immediately seeing we would probably have a long days walk tomorrow I wanted to get a good nights rest.

I snuggled into my sleeping bag and watched the fire die down slowly and I think I fell asleep soon after.

Next thing I know I feel sick and dizzy, so I lean my hot cheek against the cool tiled wall. There is loud music in the background and the bass is pumping and I can feel it vibrating through my stomach. This makes me want to throw up even more. I am in a dimly lit corridor and feel my way forward until I reach a door.

When I open it a cold neon light momentarily blinds me, I blink a few times before I realise I am in the girls restroom. Judging from the slutty dressed girls that reapply their makeup in the mirrors and the pumping beats that are still audible in here, I think I am in some sort of bar or club.

By now I am beyond the point of freaking out when I switch into this other world, I just try to cope and adjust. My bigger problem now is to find an empty stall quickly before I have to throw up. Luckily there is one but I get some ugly glares and curses when I push past the girls waiting in line to get into it and slam the door shut.

I make it to the toilet in time and empty the contents of my stomach into it. Urgh, I hate puking my guts out and I cough and spit for a few minutes after I'm done then I push myself up from the floor, flush the toilet and stumble out of the stall to the next available sink.
I don't think I'm drunk though, it feels different, like I'm having a horrible cold or so, my headache is killing me at the moment and my vision is distorted.

I take a few handfuls of water to rinse my mouth out and splash my face when I notice red drops falling from my face into the sink I look up to check in the mirror and find that I have a nosebleed. I also find that I look like a zombie, strands of my hair are struck to my wet forehead and I have dark bags under my bloodshot eyes my skin is sickly pale and the fact that by now there is an alarming amount of blood running from my nose down to my mouth doesn't help the case. To be honest I also feel half-dead right now.

I take a ball of toilet paper and press it onto my nose then I leave the restroom, I don't feel well at all and I need to go home. Problem is I don't know with who I came here, so I start to stumble amongst the people on the dance floor looking for familiar faces but I don't recognise anyone. People start to stare at me wide eyed and shocked. I probably look like a horrible drug addict that has gone completely off the rails.

The pain in my head gets so intense probably triggered by the loud music that it effects my sight, everything goes blurry and I nearly loose my balance. Suddenly somebody comes up to me and takes me by the arms shaking me slightly to get me to focus, he talks to me and I can hear him, I just cannot comprehend what he says, it is like a foreign language to me although I am sure he speaks English. I know his face but I can't remember who he is, he shakes me again and he gets a scared look on his face, that is the last thing I see before my legs buckle under me, my head tilts back and darkness surrounds me, I think I just passed out.

Notes

Comments

Awww, I'm glad to hear that. That was my point with leaving it. <3
And I totally understand. I admire you for finishing it, really, and having the will to do so and just considering how the readers might feel if it wasn't. I'm glad you did wrap it up; like I said, while there were some things I wondered about, it was still a good ending by letting us know essentially what was going on and letting us know what ended up happening to Mel.
So no worries. :)

Nanook Nanook
1/6/17

@Nanook
You have no idea how happy your comment made me. I fully understand your reasoning and I had planned this story to be longer and more detailed but as time went on I felt there was not a lot of interest from the readers and somehow that made me loose my confidence. So I brought the story to an end pretty quickly just so I wouldn't let you guys hanging with an unfinished plot. (Cause that drives me crazy when it happens to me). Anyway thank you so much for your review it made my day ☺️

T-what T-what
1/6/17

Hello.
So I just stumbled across this story. Don't ask how I found it cause I honestly don't know. XD
But oh my god. This story... I can't believe it didn't get more recognition. It was seriously... amazing.
Not only was there a unique plot line, but you kept it going, leaving us on edge with what was going on with the main character, and just... wow, it was seriously so awesomely written. You're a really great writer, and a creative person for working with this concept.
I had a feeling from the beginning that it probably dealt with death (just from the whole Peter Pan in general conspiracy theory, which may have inspired you, maybe not... where Neverland is seen as a heaven type of thing, and that's why they never grow older). But, wow, you definitely changed it up a bit by making her still be alive in the process, like not making her already dead and in a type of heaven. And that made it unique with switching back and forth between the realities.
The only thing that I'm left wondering about, is what was Mel's past? Why was she no longer with Alex? How did her relationships build with each of the people? Although I guess some of it can be assumed, I would have liked to have read more into that, just to show how connected she was with them, and why it was even more significant in her other reality. But that's really it. And I mean, I guess with the way the story works, with us reading alongside her not knowing, it kind of made sense that it went this way. But idk, may be something to consider to write about someday. Although, don't get me wrong, it's amazing as is and I understand if you don't want to mess that up.
But yeah, I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know that I really enjoyed this, even two years after you posted it. Great job with it. This is the first story in a long time that's made me cry. A sad ending, but happy at the same time since she was finally at peace.
I again can't believe this story didn't get more recognition, you deserve more and if I had read it while you were updating, I definitely would have commented frequently and gave feedback. Unfortunately, that didn't happen, so I'm hoping my long comment now makes up for that, lol.
I will definitely have to check out some more of your stuff. <3

Nanook Nanook
1/6/17

@thetrekkie
Awwwww, thank you. Well I had a couple of filler chapters in my mind and I know there are a few loose ends in the story that I should have resolved but honestly, it was the best I could do at the moment. So yeah. Bye and love you. X

T-what T-what
9/21/14

WHAT THE HELL D: I didn't expect that at ALL! Kinda sad that it's over but I'm really happy that I was able to read this :)

thetrekkie thetrekkie
9/21/14