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Be Careful What You Wish For

Chapter 4: A Blur Amongst the Trees

Not being able to get any sleep has turned into somewhat of a bore. Jack may have the time to work on anything in those hours, but he’s too tired to do anything really productive. In fact, he’s already binged watched two shows from start to finish. Currently he is just looking himself up on Tumblr. So far it’s not that bad. Most posts are just pictures of him and the band and... Wait. Is that written porn? Yeah, maybe he should stop this before he sees anything worse. Nah. He can go a bit further.
Just as he scrolls past another short story about himself, his phone goes off. Well, at least he doesn’t have to look at this stuff to keep him preoccupied; hopefully. He picks his phone up off the table to find a message from Alex.

Alex: I just got this amazing idea for your sleeping issue. How about I come over later to tell you about it?

Jack: Sure? I don’t have anything planned.

Alex: Alright. I’ll come over once I finish watching this documentary about space.

Jack: K.

Well, that didn’t fix his current predicament. It will probably fix it in an hour or so, but Jack doesn’t really want to wait that long. With a sigh, he turns on Netflix and begins to watch yet another show.
It doesn’t take long before his eyes become droopy. He didn’t think that the first episode of this show would be more subtle. It’s all introductions to the plot and characters but without the piece that pulls you in. Or maybe that comes in the second half of the episode.
Snap.
What was that? It sounded like a picture being taken.
Snap. Snap.
Is Jack just imagining this? Or is this just another part of the curse?
Snap. Snap.
“That one looks perfect.”
Jack is unable to stop himself from falling asleep...

Eyes open and look around. Where is he? He’s never seen this place in his dreams before. He’s among trees and lots of nature. Huh. Yeah, this is definitely new. In fact, this feels different too. It feels... real?
Snap.
Jack turns to the sound of the camera to find a petite girl facing away from him. Or at least, he thinks it’s a girl. The figure is entirely blurred, and Jack can’t make out anything about them besides they seem to have brown hair, are wearing a grey shirt, and appear to be wearing jeans.
He wants to question this figure because this is most likely the girl that he has been seeing in his dreams, but no words fall off his tongue. He goes to move, but his legs don’t budge. It is at this point that Jack realizes that he’s levitating. How is this possible? Is this another dream? No, it feels too real to be just a dream. He looks down at his hands to find that they look like blue flames. His eyes go wide as he finds that his chest and legs also appear to be made of some kind of energy. There is no way that this is just another dream. He always looks the same in those.
As if on cue, the figure grabs hold of her head before slowly falling down to the ground. Jack wants to reach out and help her, but he still is not able to move a muscle. She takes a glimpse of him, and Jack wishes more than anything that he could have finally see her face right now, but it’s just as blurry as the rest of her.
A strange sensation overcomes Jack, and he feels himself starting to drift away from this place. He doesn’t want to go though. He has to find out who she is! The words that fall off of her tongue send him back though, and he awakes in the same spot that he feel asleep.
Desperately Jack tries to fall back asleep. Maybe if he can go back there, he can figure this all out for once and for all. Maybe this nightmare will finally stop!
He can’t though. He keeps trying, but his mind is too awake now. Now out of all of the times, he has to be awake now? Why? Why must it be now?
Jack continues to try though and doesn’t stop until Alex gets there.
As soon as Alex enters, he starts talking. Jack can’t really hear him though because he’s honestly not paying attention. He follows Alex over to the couch and sits down next to him.
“So what do you think of that plan?”
“Huh?”
“Weren’t you listening?”
“No, not really.”
Alex’s face grows to one of concern. “Jack, are you alright? You look kind of pale.”
“You wouldn’t believe what just happened to me.”
“Try me.”
“I fell asleep, but instead of what normally happens, I found myself somewhere different. I was in the woods, and there was this blurred out figure taking pictures. I figure that they’re the girl that I’ve been seeing, so I tried to ask them something, anything, but I couldn’t talk. I tried to move, but I couldn’t move either. I was made out of what looked like light blue flames. Then the figure grabbed their head and fell down to their knees in what looked like pain. I wanted to help them. I really did, but I couldn’t do anything. Then they said something. I don’t know what it was, and I can’t remember it either, but the next thing that I knew, I was waking up here.”
“That’s some dream.”
“No, it wasn’t a dream. It felt too real to be a dream.”
“Are you sure? Dreams can be-”
“Yes, I’m sure. Ugh, I knew you wouldn’t believe something like that.”
“No, I believe you. If you were listening to anything I was saying while I was coming in, you would know that.”
“How so?”
“My big plan is to literally just take you to see a psychic.”
“A psychic. Really?”
“Yes, really. Don’t tell me you’re doubting psychics now with everything you’ve experienced.”
“I mean, seeing into the future versus casting a curse on someone...”
“Jack, just let me to take you see someone. They might be able to help, and neither of us know anything about anything that you’re going through.”
“Alright, but what if it doesn’t work?”
“I don’t know. Maybe we can find some occult specialist or some witches online. We just need to do something.”
“Alex?”
“Yeah?”
“Thank you.”
“Don’t mention it.”

Notes

Wow. It's been forever, but I have a new chapter for this. I also have up to chapter 15 planned out per chapter and the rest of the story planned out as well. (I don't know how many chapters will come after 15, so I didn't plan those out.) I also know how this story ends too.

The only thing that I can think of to point out in this chapter would be that I changed how Ghost Jack looks. Before I had him look more like a ghost, but I decided that what I wrote in this chapter looks cooler.

Comments

@ALoveLikeNever_14
I actually didn't plan on showing more of a reason of why she is the way she is, but it ended up getting written somehow. lol. I can see her reasoning for stuff, but she is still a bitch about it all. At least the have the summer together. I just love how Rose was taking lead with that. lol.
I'm currently trying to decide on if I'm going to add one scene or not, and then I should be able to plan out the next chapters better. The next one is easy, but I'll need to watch the pacing if the one scene is added. This week I have to write up the first draft of my short story for my writing class, so I'm probably just going to plan out the chapters this week.
And no problem! I actually find it so interesting to go back to my old stuff. I keep all of my old stories and ideas in case I want to reuse them or just look back. Fan fiction is what got me really back into writing as a sophomore, so no matter what, it's always going to have a place in my heart.

QueenDes QueenDes
6/6/17

Finally! I was waiting for them to finally meet and now they have! But Selene's aunt is a total bitch. You're right about her now deserving a name. She can't just keep them apart! Ugh. Thank you so much!!!

@ALoveLikeNever_14
I actually haven't heard of that game. I've been playing a lot of FFXIV since around October. The early access is on the 16th, so I've been getting ready for that. I'm pretty good on everything though. I have one more job that I'd like to get to max level, but that's about it.
That Town of Salem sounds very interesting though.
And I hate her aunt too. I actually don't even have names for them tbh. Like, they don't need names. People like them don't deserve them.
I might write up the next chapter sometime tonight. I just need to draw up the next fur pictures for my project. This time it's silly cartoons of the four of them, and I'm very tempted to share them before they get colored. The designs are quite silly.

QueenDes QueenDes
6/4/17

@QueenDes
Would that game be Town of Salem? Just a thoughtfull question. And I seriously hate her aunt right now! Doesn't she know how much suffering she is going through?! Ugh.

@ALoveLikeNever_14
Glad you like it! I've been busy lately since the expansion to the game I play is coming out soon, but mostly I really need to work on what I'm making for the band. I'm seeing them at the end of July, so I have to make sure that it's printed and ready by then. I might share what I'm working on with my brother when I get more of it done. :)
Just one more hurdle, so soon. The prologue will actually happen, so keep that in mind. lol.

QueenDes QueenDes
6/2/17