Teenage Dirtbag

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.