Teenage Dirtbag - Comments

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

I love this story, the plot and everything, I just have one thing that annoys me.
But other than this its fine, and I don't expect you to change anything I just have a habit of getting annoyed by everything so don't take it personally...
erm its just that so many people and stories, including this one abuse being "in love" when they aren't actually in love...they just really like each other or just like each other. I'm only 13 but I can say that being in love and liking each other is EXTREMELY different. The story is fine, but uh just keep this in mind whenever you're writing. But honestly, I really love your story and plot.

@Jagk Skellington
Thank you so much!

I love this story Alex is just too cewt okai bye

@antivist
Haha, I'm glad you still like it despite the stuff that's been happening with Jack :) I promise things will get better for him soon! Thanks for giving me some feedback anyway, I could really use that!

Eeeeek, this is making me sad now, like, I feel sorry for Jack and he's not a jerk, he's just confused, but everyone keeps treating him like he was a fool.. ;__; And I'm still fangirling over this story, yes, I'm being a creep, k, bye. c:

@folieahdude
You too! :)

@Nienkev94
im sure its gonna be amazing, have fun man! :)

@folieahdude
Awesome! Yeah I can't wait either :) it's gonna be great

@Nienkev94
prague and cologne maybe, damn cant waittttt