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An Essay About All Time Low

Summary

I wrote this essay for my English class. My teacher said it could be about whatever, so why not make it about ATL? Well duh, that's what I did. It's personal narrative, so it uses "I" and "me". I know this isn't fanfiction, but it still has to do with ATL. I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it? It'd be greatly appreciated. Judge it as hard as you want, criticize it harshly; I won't take offense to it, just heed the advice you provide. ^-^
Thank you if you take the time to read this. ~~
xx Torie

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@fullfrontalfan1338
Hahah I always have these songs stuck in my head, and many more! It's funny when you start getting them mixed up and sing a line to Weightless, and then a line to Jasey Rae. Or a line from Circles and then a line from Time Bomb. Or am I the only one that does that? Haha x)

justXanotherXsoul justXanotherXsoul
6/8/14

I always have those lines stuck in my head every single one you mesmerizedmentioned in this.

fullfrontalfan1338 fullfrontalfan1338
5/26/14

@IfIWereATurtle
Haha well I'm glad you liked it! This was written 6 months ago for my English class. I got an A on it so I guess the form was okay in the end! ^-^

justXanotherXsoul justXanotherXsoul
4/18/14

I don't really have any critcism on the form of your essay because I'm not so good in english.
But I wanted to tell you that this made me smile because I know what you're talking about, I feel the same way (:

IfIWereATurtle IfIWereATurtle
4/7/14
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