Find a Place for Me Again
Prologue
Most musicians would go for the girls in front of the lens. I chose to fall for the girl behind it. I met Mackenzie, or Kenzie as me and the guys called her, when she took our first shoot when we signed to Interscope. I was in love with her average beauty that left me breathless. She made coming home even more amazing.
"Hey, Kenz, I'm heading out to get more milk, do you need anything from the store," I tried to wake my girlfriend of two year enough to see if she needed something.
"Hm, no I'm fine. Come back to bed, Alex," she groaned as sleep kept it's grip on her.
"I have a meeting with Matt later," I told her, "I'll back in a few minutes."
I was about to reach the store, going through my green light. My last thoughts were of Kenzie before my car was t-boned by a driver running his red light without slowing down.
"Hey, Kenz, I'm heading out to get more milk, do you need anything from the store," I tried to wake my girlfriend of two year enough to see if she needed something.
"Hm, no I'm fine. Come back to bed, Alex," she groaned as sleep kept it's grip on her.
"I have a meeting with Matt later," I told her, "I'll back in a few minutes."
I was about to reach the store, going through my green light. My last thoughts were of Kenzie before my car was t-boned by a driver running his red light without slowing down.
So I just read what you have of this, and I'm sad to see it was never finished. :(
It's a bit rushed at some parts, but I really like the concept of it. It surprised me that you had him gain his memory back kind of quickly; I thought for sure the twist was going to be he was going to lose it again or something. I found it a bit odd how that was kind of the plot for the first half, and then this second part kind of diverted from it. But I really like what you have of it, it's really sweet. :)
If you ever choose to finish it, I will be here to read. Although I think a final chapter wrap-up would totally work for this, if you're struggling for inspiration. Just a final update to conclude it.
You're a great writer, and so, I just wanted to leave a comment letting you know that, and to show that people are still stumbling across this and reading it. :)
7/11/16