Just Two Kids Stupid And Fearless
If you could wait 'til I get home, then I swear to you that we can make this last
"How was New York?", Alex picked up me and Taylor from the airport when we got home.
"It was fucking crazy!", I still couldn't take in all my experiences from The Big Apple.
"We shopped, partied and had girl talk.", Taylor said a bit calmer than me. The club's in New York was much better than them in Baltimore. They were wilder, louder music, more people, and tons of alcohol. The stores was bigger, and had a bigger selection. I was in love with that city, and wanted to return as soon as possible.
We met a couple of new people we became friends with for the night, and it was a special guy who really liked Taylor.
"Taylor actually met a guy she didn't diss.", I said. "He was really into her."
"Fuck no, he wasn't!", she shouted from the backseat. "You're fucking blind. He was so turned on on you, I bet he wanted to bang you.", I teased her and she glared at me.
"He was a total asshole. Glad I didn't let him go where he wanted.", she said. "He had the worse pickup lines ever."
"But you thought he was cute.", I stood up.
"He still sucked Bieber's balls.", she said and Alex started laughing.
We dropped Taylor off, and went straight to Alex apartment. It was clean as usual, and it smelled Alex. This was more my home now, than my parents house, and I was here a lot more than there. I had really missed it, even though we were only away for four days, but I think Alex was the biggest missing.
"Have you eaten dinner?", I asked him. "I'm starving."
"No, I was waiting for you.", he said and we went to the kitchen. I opened the fridge, and it was almost empty.
"We need to grocery shop.", I said and Alex looked in it behind me.
"I know, but I think we have some pasta.", he said and looked in the lockers.
"And cheese.", I filled in. "Mac'n'cheese is it then.", I took out the cheese and filled sauce pan with water and put it on the oven. Alex came up behind me again, and put his hands on my hips.
"You know you look really sexy when you cook.", he said in my ear.
"We haven't even started.", I corrected him, smiling.
"You're sexy all the time, no matter what.", he kept going and kissed my cheek.
"Stop.", I blushed. He smiled and kept kissing me down the cheek, to my neck. "I've missed you too.", I giggled at him.
"Not as much as I missed you.", he stopped kissing me and warped his arms around my waist while he leaned his chin on my shoulder. I turned my head around and kissed him soft. He turned my whole body around and kissed me. He leaned me on the oven, where it wasn't warm.
I put my hand on his neck and tried to pull him closer. His hands on my back walked down to my jeanspockets as he always did, and he kissed me harder. I twisted my fingers in his hair and pressed his body harder against mine. He licked my underlip and I opened my mouth for him. out tongues fought about the dominance, and this time he won. His hands left my pockets and slid up under my top, and he tried to take it off. As soon as it went off, I forced him to take his t-shirt off too, and I knew where he wanted to go. His tongue was still playing with mine in my mouth, until I kicked it out and let mine slid in his mouth. It didn't last long until Alex started to kiss down my neck and found my weak spot. He bit me gentle and then sucked. I moaned and I felt his smile against my skin.
I was in his game, and I searched for his jeans button. I found it and started to squeeze them off. He stopped kissing my neck and went back to my lips, while he took off my jeans too.
I felt something really hot on my back, and I broke the kiss right away to see what it was.
"Fuck!", I yelled when the hot water which had boiled over from the sauce pan ran down my back to my legs. "Shit that hurts.", I took up my top from the floor and tried to dry it away.
"Are you okey?", Alex said as he moved the sauce pan from the oven.
"Yeah.", I said and took on my top again. "Can you pour the pasta in it?"
"Sure.", he said. "Can I see if it left any mark?", I turned my back to him and he lifted up my top. "It's a little red. Does it hurt?"
"Not so much.", I lied, it was a fucking hell. I pulled it down again and Alex hugged me from behind.
"It's fine.", I said and forced out a smile.
"I know it sucks to talk about this, but I'm leaving for the tour in 3 weeks.", it felt like someone stabbed me with a knife in my stomach when he said it.
"Yeah, I know and I really don't wanna talk about it.", I mumbled and looked down at floor.
"We have too.", he started. "It's for 8 weeks, and I'm sure you can come to me, and I can come to you on my free days."
"Great. Then we have that clear.", he just ruined this moment, and I felt low.
"It doesn't mean we will fall apart babe. I'll call you every night, I swear.", he took my hands and I looked him in the eyes.
"We have never been apart more than 4 days since we met at the concert, and it was first now. Only that was horrible, and I missed you like hell. We see each other everyday, and now it just feels like you're gonna be gone forever.", I said and felt how my tears started to come. "It's not that that I don't want you to go. I do, you have fans, and you're living your dream. I know how it feels to see your favorite band perform, it's a great feeling. I'm not trying to make you stay, just so you know, but I'm really gonna miss you."
"I know, baby. I'm gonna miss you too.", he hugged me and my tears started streaming.
"It was fucking crazy!", I still couldn't take in all my experiences from The Big Apple.
"We shopped, partied and had girl talk.", Taylor said a bit calmer than me. The club's in New York was much better than them in Baltimore. They were wilder, louder music, more people, and tons of alcohol. The stores was bigger, and had a bigger selection. I was in love with that city, and wanted to return as soon as possible.
We met a couple of new people we became friends with for the night, and it was a special guy who really liked Taylor.
"Taylor actually met a guy she didn't diss.", I said. "He was really into her."
"Fuck no, he wasn't!", she shouted from the backseat. "You're fucking blind. He was so turned on on you, I bet he wanted to bang you.", I teased her and she glared at me.
"He was a total asshole. Glad I didn't let him go where he wanted.", she said. "He had the worse pickup lines ever."
"But you thought he was cute.", I stood up.
"He still sucked Bieber's balls.", she said and Alex started laughing.
We dropped Taylor off, and went straight to Alex apartment. It was clean as usual, and it smelled Alex. This was more my home now, than my parents house, and I was here a lot more than there. I had really missed it, even though we were only away for four days, but I think Alex was the biggest missing.
"Have you eaten dinner?", I asked him. "I'm starving."
"No, I was waiting for you.", he said and we went to the kitchen. I opened the fridge, and it was almost empty.
"We need to grocery shop.", I said and Alex looked in it behind me.
"I know, but I think we have some pasta.", he said and looked in the lockers.
"And cheese.", I filled in. "Mac'n'cheese is it then.", I took out the cheese and filled sauce pan with water and put it on the oven. Alex came up behind me again, and put his hands on my hips.
"You know you look really sexy when you cook.", he said in my ear.
"We haven't even started.", I corrected him, smiling.
"You're sexy all the time, no matter what.", he kept going and kissed my cheek.
"Stop.", I blushed. He smiled and kept kissing me down the cheek, to my neck. "I've missed you too.", I giggled at him.
"Not as much as I missed you.", he stopped kissing me and warped his arms around my waist while he leaned his chin on my shoulder. I turned my head around and kissed him soft. He turned my whole body around and kissed me. He leaned me on the oven, where it wasn't warm.
I put my hand on his neck and tried to pull him closer. His hands on my back walked down to my jeanspockets as he always did, and he kissed me harder. I twisted my fingers in his hair and pressed his body harder against mine. He licked my underlip and I opened my mouth for him. out tongues fought about the dominance, and this time he won. His hands left my pockets and slid up under my top, and he tried to take it off. As soon as it went off, I forced him to take his t-shirt off too, and I knew where he wanted to go. His tongue was still playing with mine in my mouth, until I kicked it out and let mine slid in his mouth. It didn't last long until Alex started to kiss down my neck and found my weak spot. He bit me gentle and then sucked. I moaned and I felt his smile against my skin.
I was in his game, and I searched for his jeans button. I found it and started to squeeze them off. He stopped kissing my neck and went back to my lips, while he took off my jeans too.
I felt something really hot on my back, and I broke the kiss right away to see what it was.
"Fuck!", I yelled when the hot water which had boiled over from the sauce pan ran down my back to my legs. "Shit that hurts.", I took up my top from the floor and tried to dry it away.
"Are you okey?", Alex said as he moved the sauce pan from the oven.
"Yeah.", I said and took on my top again. "Can you pour the pasta in it?"
"Sure.", he said. "Can I see if it left any mark?", I turned my back to him and he lifted up my top. "It's a little red. Does it hurt?"
"Not so much.", I lied, it was a fucking hell. I pulled it down again and Alex hugged me from behind.
"It's fine.", I said and forced out a smile.
"I know it sucks to talk about this, but I'm leaving for the tour in 3 weeks.", it felt like someone stabbed me with a knife in my stomach when he said it.
"Yeah, I know and I really don't wanna talk about it.", I mumbled and looked down at floor.
"We have too.", he started. "It's for 8 weeks, and I'm sure you can come to me, and I can come to you on my free days."
"Great. Then we have that clear.", he just ruined this moment, and I felt low.
"It doesn't mean we will fall apart babe. I'll call you every night, I swear.", he took my hands and I looked him in the eyes.
"We have never been apart more than 4 days since we met at the concert, and it was first now. Only that was horrible, and I missed you like hell. We see each other everyday, and now it just feels like you're gonna be gone forever.", I said and felt how my tears started to come. "It's not that that I don't want you to go. I do, you have fans, and you're living your dream. I know how it feels to see your favorite band perform, it's a great feeling. I'm not trying to make you stay, just so you know, but I'm really gonna miss you."
"I know, baby. I'm gonna miss you too.", he hugged me and my tears started streaming.
So, I just read what you have of this story and its prequel, and I really like what you have of both. At first, it was a little rough getting into it; it seemed kind of rushed at first, especially with all of the drama of how they got together and then broke up in like a day when they first met, but I have to say, after the time passed and they got back together again, this story just really started getting good. Some of the grammar is a bit off, but as you continued the story I noticed your improvement and that's awesome; that means you have definitely progressed as you have continued writing this.
I'm sad it was never finished, though. One thing I found a bit odd was that you continued with this installment after giving the first one an epilogue, due to the fact that means we already know the ending for Wendy and Alex, but... I kind of like how you did that. I don't believe I've seen an author do that before, kind of go back and fill in the time in-between in the sequel.
And this story is seriously so cute. Alex and Wendy's love is seriously so genuine; again, while it was a bit rushed at first, as I got into the second half of the first installment and this sequel it was just, wow, I just love their relationship. It's been a while since I've seen such a connection between the two characters and I seriously enjoyed it.
And I also liked the fact that as I got to the end of what you have so far, that you made it realistic. Alex understands she's not ready for a baby and is ready to sacrifice that. This is actually the first time I've seen this in a story, where it's being both considered and followed through with, along with the fact that both characters are for the most part peaceful with the decision. Hell I'm even peaceful with the decision, which really surprises me, because every other story where this has happened, I haven't been. And that's really weird for me, so kudos for pulling that off and making it convincing, and not making it so heartbreaking. I mean it is still a heartbreaking thing, but it's more understood that it's the best decision. Although the two characters being fine with it probably is what makes me as a reader somewhat okay with it. I'm happy you took that route as opposed to creating severe conflict, which is what I typically see with this idea. It was a nice change.
And, wow, this is a long comment. To sum up, I think you're a great writer and I really hope you're still writing on your own time, at least. I'm sad this wasn't finished, but I wanted to leave a comment letting you know my thoughts and just how much I've genuinely liked what I've read so far. Seriously, great job. If you ever choose to continue someday, I will be here to read. This story is too good to let go. I think these two characters should have more of a conclusion in this installment. But I guess overall I should be happy, considering with the last installment, we know that they end up together. So at least that's been told.
But still, if you continue, I'm willing to read. :)
7/5/16