Light in Your Eyes

@QueenDes
All I did was is looked up what it was. I never taken Japanese before I only learned some from watching anime in Japanese with subtitles.

I notice that no one ever comments, but I've been reading these, and I love how often the updates are. I suck at updating so *claps
The thing I want to say about this chapter is if you've had any Japanese lessons. When you put "no" at the end of a noun it becomes possessive like Nyssa's. No is a particle. Just don't put no separate when writing a sentence because it's the particle then. I started learning Japanese because I'd love to go and my cousin says it's amazing. I just haven't been working on it. You just have to be careful because hiragana, katakana, and kanji don't always translate well into romanji. That's how I could tell this was google translate since I didn't recognize the phrase. I normally just say Arigatou and add gozaimasu to make it formal. Plus I would make it have -san since that's the most common ending.
Im not trying to be mean or anything. Just one Spirited Away fan to another.
Love the story though!
And sorry if there is any misspellings. I'm typing on my phone. Also, this is only what I know as a beginner so I only noticed that one part. I'm sorry if this did sound rude though. It's not suppose to be, and I'm only commenting because my cat told me to go ahead by looking at the screen and back to me. Anyway, I really hope Jack remembers soon. So far this is the only part I don't like because I hate it when characters lose their memory.