Don't You Go and Carry On With Your Life - Comments, page 3

So. I am just putting this out there. I don't think the baby is really Alex's. I don't trust Tay at all. She seems shady and gives me a bad vibe. Alex is an idiot and deserves to suffer for a bit. Vic cracked me up. Anywho, I like this story. :o)

@T-what
I feel bad for Jack too! I kind of want to feel bad for Alex, but I can't bring myself to do it yet.

Urgh, Alex is such a dickhead in this story, poor Jacky, first being cheated on and then quickly replaced and thrown away. :(

@Twat
lol I know it wasn't meant to be criticism, I was just worried that this story wasn't going in the direction you hoped. Your comments are helping me see the story from a readers point of view instead of just my own! So please keep me updated on how you feel about the story!!

@Jalex95
Wasn't meant as criticism, the contrary actually, I'm looking forward to you turning it around somehow. :)) <3

@Twat
Okay, maybe you'll see it in later chapters.

I like this story so far, still I don't see Alex being emotionally affected by the divorce and having a lot of feelings left towards Jack he has seemed to have moved on quite comfortably.

@Jalex95
No worries lol :)

@Ellsxo_
Hahahaha I didn't notice that after three chapters. Lol Thank you so much!!!

Hey! I noticed you said:

**Title credit: Don't You Go by All Time Low**

but your title says:

Don't You Do and Carry On With Your Life

I wasn't sure if you were aware or not! :D

@Twat
Sorry it's a little confusing! Alex doesn't necessarily feel nothing for Jack he's just angry that Jack is divorcing him. So now he's continuing his relationship Tay because he thinks it's the right thing to do since she's pregnant and Jack is leaving him.

In your summary you talk about Alex wanting to rekindle their love, well in these first chapters it seems like Alex has no emotions for Jack anymore, I wander what changes that? Can't wait for your update!