Best Mistake - Comments

@PurpleOctober
No problem!

@Daydreamers
:o......whoa. thanks for sharing!

Hey, this is on the top of the popular page. Just some information I figured you'd like to know

Can't wait for the sequel!

Ohhh, gotcha, that's understandable.

Aww, sad to see this one ending. Loved the ending though. I look forward to the sequel! :-)

@Nanook
Haha yeah my laptop is fried so I've been having to write this story from my phone, and it doesn't have that great of an autocorrect feature, so a lot of misspelled words fly under my radar

Aw, this was so cute! Great final update to it. I'm wondering what you'll have in store for the sequel, hmm... *thinking face emoji*
I love Edge of Tonight, the song is so sweet and definitely fits well in here. :) lol, I loved his comparison of on a scale from zero to Beyonce. XD That was corny but I loved that.
One thing I spotted towards the end:
He laughed nervously and I noticed the pink tinge coating his cheeks abs he kissed me again.
'abs' should be 'as'. Simple misspell. XD Idk if you worry with that or not but just thought I would note it.
But yes, overall, great final update and can't wait for the sequel. I'm not sure how the notification/update system works with posting sequels, but hopefully I'll get one when you start posting for it. :D

This part was genuinely just all round adorable. I loved it. <3

Love ittttt! I love how in detail you were with the birth. You described it pretty well from my experience of giving birth so well done for that! Can't wait for more!

Aww, this was so cute. :) Alex cried at the birth, awww... :') And lol when she wouldn't let him look when she was giving birth. XD
I'm not sure if you've had a kid, but you made it very convincing, lol. Usually when a story involves a birth, they just say about it and then it happens. Like, no details with the pain or anything, but you made sure to describe that, so kudos. That makes you a better writer in comparison. :)
One thing I had a question about that seemed a bit odd was how the baby opened its eyes right away. I feel like usually they stay closed and it seemed like Will's were just open right away. They kind of like creek open a bit but it just seemed like they were wide open, going by how you described it. So maybe the description should be more specific at that part, to ward off confusion.
Also something to look into would be the eye color. I know for most caucasian babies, they're actually born with blue eyes that change as they grow older. I found it a little odd how his eyes were described as green right away, but maybe that does happen, I'm not entirely sure, but just something to consider in case you haven't.
But yeah, great job with the update otherwise! Just some checking I wanted to do, sorry if I'm being annoying. Just want to bring to light some questions.
I really can't wait for the next though. I'm excited to see what's in store for the sequel. :)

You're welcome! And oh, haha, wasn't really sure when you would be wrapping it up. Glad to hear you're doing a sequel though. :D Sorry for just now finding it and leaving feedback; I guess the sequel will give me more of an opportunity to do so, lol.
And thank you! I appreciate that. :) Thanks for understanding.

@Nanook
Thank you so much for your feedback! I use to write those stories that were drowning in cliche, but I guess as I got older I realized how silly they were. Cringe worthy :O
I'm glad you're enjoying it though. There's only about two more chapters to it, but I am planning to write a sequel, so stay tuned for that.
And the college stuff, I totally feel you. Anytime I have a day off I try to update at least twice. But good luck with your semester! :)

Awww... this story is so cute! :D I stumbled across it last week and just finished catching up with it and wanted to leave some feedback. I really enjoy what you have of it so far, and probably would have binge-read it sooner if I wasn't dealing with college stuff...
But anyway, I'm really enjoying this plot line. I think Alex and Whitney's relationship is so cute; I love how she's a fan but not obnoxiously so. She's dedicated but not one of those fans that would die without being with one of the members, lol. Like I've seen those stories when Alex falls for a fan at or around the time of a concert, but this happened in a more realistic way, I think. Like, he wasn't in love with her at first sight or none of that cliche stuff, and I liked how that was different. And he also wasn't initially on board with her news, but then he came around and they kind of worked through it in a realistic way... and they built up their relationship and fell for one another. :') While it may be questionable if the real Alex would get himself in the predicament he did in the first place, it's believable for the most part. lol. :)
I also enjoy the main character's backstory. Again, avoiding cliche, we're not dealing with a character that happens to originate from where Alex is from, or even from Baltimore originally... she moved there after living somewhere else and they seemed to meet just out of chance. That could arguably be the cliche factor but I didn't mind it.
So I will be here as you continue on with your story, because I'm really enjoying it. I think you're a really great writer! And OMG, it leaves off where she's about to have the baby! Excited to see what you have in store for this once the baby gets here. :) Think they have the perfect name for him set as well. Can't wait to read more, and I'll be sure to leave feedback as I continue reading, when I can. :)

@Carebear
Oh my lord, someone understands my struggle <3

Woohoo! The baby is coming. I am so excited. The whole drug/dragged thing is cracking me up. I am a southern woman and we have tons of weirdo things we say. It is perfectly acceptable to say that my little brother drug out all of his legos. You may also hear that the wedding dragged on and on. It just depends. We are also fixing to do everything. My personal favorite it near to. I was near to killing him. Funny stuff.

@PurpleOctober
That's probably it. Most likely because I'm from England, I've never heard people say drug that way, only for drugs. To be honest your story is the only place I'd seen it being used. First I thought it was a mistake but then you used it more haha. It's cool, I googled right after I commented to find out a bit more on it and does seem to be a southern thing,It's interesting to learn these things, drug sounds off to me haha.

@RHSK143
Yeah, I've just always heard people say drug instead of dragged. I even took dragged into consideration, but it just sounded off to my conditioned ears haha. But thanks for bringing that up! It may just be a backwoods southern thing, who knows haha

Aww I agree very cute.

Actually I've been meaning to say that I've noticed that you use drug as a past tense of drag. I'm not sure if that's right or not as it's actually meant to be "dragged", hope you don't mind me bringing that up. It could be a language thing. Or how you've been taught.

Oh goodess, they are so cute, I can't stand it. <33

Stay Awake is one of my favorite All Time Low songs too! :)