Baby, I Will Be Your Everything - Comments

This is getting so complicated! What's up with Jasey and Alex? On a side note I'm pretty sure you mixed up fetus and uterus. ;)

Mine, too. It's one of my favourites on here. And poor Jack, everybody is being mean to him. At least Alex is being nicer than before. I don't get his parents decision, like what is that supposed to help? And as we can see, it doesn't stop them from doing it, they do it in the car instead.
parents are so dumb sometimes!

This is literally my favorite fic on this site at the moment. Oh my God, I swear.

It's so beautifully written, and I just want to snuggle Jack sometimes.

I read this story in one night and have been waiting for an update and I'm so glad you're back!! This is so well written. I have experience with someone close to me suffering from drug abuse and you capture it perfectly. I can't wait to see where this goes and I can't wait for happy Jalex!

You're back yeeeeesss...also I actually really like that chapter, I actually never met anyone or read a story about anyone who suffers from drug abuse and it's really interesting to see this perspective or how it's difficult and it fucks up your life. I really don't know anything about drugs, I only have one character who does drugs but it was a short period and I never really had the time to write it or to do some research, so yeah I'm glad you wrote this even if it's not happy and I want to both yell at Jack or Alex it's well written and indeed really important since it's a big part of Alex's background.

you're back!!! i'm so happy

Omg. It has been so long, I missed this story so much! I would wish for them to stop fighting finally.

I love this story, omg. I read it in one night and saw it hasn't been updated and was like NO I NEED MORE.

can't wait for the update :)))

Thanks for the Ps, I was getting scared. At least Jack and Alex are a little better...I think.

OH MY GOD
OH MY GOD
I'VE BEEN REALLY BUSY AND I HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO READ THIS
IM DYING
i really need to stop typing in all caps

ALEX IS SO MESSED UP AND JACK IS SO SAD BUT I LOVE THIS DRAMA SO MUCH
THEY'RE SO SCREWED UP AND PERFECT

i love this story with all my heart it is honestly one of my favorite fanfics in the universe
i always check all the time for the next update because IT'S SO GOOD

okay im rambling
i just love this story <3

@Carebear
I'm glad you enjoy it and I wanted this story to be more realistic than fairytale so I'm very happy to see comments about liking where it's going and such. :) thanks for sharing your thoughts!

I thought that was great. Relationships aren't perfect fluffy bunnies. ( well unless you would like to write me one that is. That would be good too. :) ) Alex has every right to be scared. You don't do smart things when you are that scared. He will get there. I really enjoy this story. I was glad to see the update.

@Costati
Of course I'd mention you! I'm so glad you mentioned that because it sparked new ideas that made much more sense to me so THANK YOU. I wrote it out to be pretty harsh and as realistic as I could so thank you for taking the time to tell me your thoughts on it! I love reading your feedback! :)

@ComeOneComeAll
AW I'm so happy you thought of reading the new chapter as a reward! I'm sorry it was kind of sad! But I updated since you've read last and I hope it makes up for it!! I'm glad I gave you some motivation because YOUR STORIES GIVE ME LIFE lol and I'm so happy to know that you updated!

I really love Alexs character too because he is really messed up and his asshole side is going to be coming out more now and Im excited! I also really love how sweet and cute Jack is I just want to hug him!!

Thanks so much for all the love and compliments<3<3

@JalexanderBarakarth
yay! Thanks for commenting :)

i'm so excited for moreeeeeee ahhhh i love it

A A A A AAAAAAAAAAA
OKAY
THIS IS PATHETIC BUT I WAS SAVING THIS CHAPTER AS A REWARD TO READ AFTER I WROTE THE TWO NEW CHAPTERS FOR MY STORIES BECAUSE I NEEDED MOTIVATION
I JUST FINISHED THE CHAPTER FOR SHUT UP AND KISS ME NOW
i was DYING but it made me write so much faster! lmao

i was surprised and not suprised with alex's reaction, i knew that he was gonna freak out but I didn't think he would demand an ABORTION
it is an option for some parents but ALEX NOOOO IT'S YOUR BABY

i feel like it might take a little while for him to come to his senses and agree to keep the baby but i guess it's all understandable and realistic because it's so suprising

even though he reacted poorly i really really love alex's character a lot
he's so messed up but perfect and so sweet to jack
and jack's character is perfect and adorable

you're the best writer ever oh my god i love this story soOMUCH <3
even if what's going on in the story is happy or sad the story itself just brings me so much joy lmao
I LOVED THAT CHAPTER AND YOU, YOUR UPDATES GIVE ME LIFE

Woooow when people assume you're gonna get rid of it...It's just the worst. I guessed it wasn't gonna be love, chocolate cakes and flowers but honestly I had no idea It would have gone this bad. But honestly props to you because It was well written and really realistic. Most of seventeen years old in this situation would have react this way and it was accurate but really I loved how you truly handled all the emotions and with the flashback it makes everything so much better.

By the way Thank you for mentioning me.

i adore this story. i kinda figured alex's reaction but still

Wow, I didn't expect Alex's reaction to be so harsh. But like demanding an abortion in my opinion is way worse than just breaking up with the person. I know he was overwhelmed by the news but what a dick move!