What Did You Expect From Me? - Comments

Why do I have a feeling Brooke is lying about their mom just to get Mackenzie back to Baltimore and hopefully away from Alex for a while? I hope I'm wrong. I like this story so far and hope you keep up with it. :-)

oh my god oh my god OH MY GOD. YOU CANNOT JUST LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Hmm... I like this. Found it on the stories homepage, and decided to check it out. :)
I notice the last comment was left nearly a year ago, though... maybe you're coming back to it, or maybe others just haven't been on to leave feedback? Idk, but I hope you stick to updating this, I will be here to read. :)
With this last chapter you have posted, I couldn't help but laugh out loud when Brooke called Mackenzie out, asking her how she could be with Alex. WHEN BROOKE GOT ENGAGED TO HIM, and DIDN'T EVEN KNOW HIS AND MACKENZIE'S HISTORY. C'mon! XD Like I couldn't with that part, but glad Mackenzie called her out on her irony. XD Like girl's just having karma come back at her. Not to mention the fact that she cheated on Alex, OMG.
One thing I'm wondering about... what does they'll "always be happy together, somewhere in Neverland" reflect back on? I mean, I can see the song association, but just wondering the history with them there. It seems cute. :D
But um, yeah, just wanted to leave feedback and let you know I like what you have of it so far. Rooting for Alex and Mackenzie. :) Really cute how he calls her MJ. :')
Interested in seeing what more you have in store for this. :)

@tabbyjb
Maybe it will. Maybe it won't. I haven't decided the exact ending yet. Loll.

And thank you, everyone, for commenting. It's giving me motivation to continue writing. Even only if it is the same few people.(:

i love this story! it better ends with them running away to elope haha

I am loving this story so much.

Hell yeah!

Alex u naughty boy but fight for love. This is reallY good x

Oh this should be gooooood !