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What Did You Expect From Me?

Summary

Mackenzie Jace Geller skipped town the night of her high school graduation. She left her friends and family behind without a warning. Six years later, Mackenzie returns home due to a family emergency and she is greeted with not so great news regarding her first love. He is getting married. Mackenzie thought she was over him when she left six years prior, but what happens when she is forced to stay in Baltimore for an unspecified amount of time? Will Mackenzie eventually be able to return to her new life without an issue, or will she be forced to remain in Baltimore to clean up the messes she made when she was seventeen?



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Why do I have a feeling Brooke is lying about their mom just to get Mackenzie back to Baltimore and hopefully away from Alex for a while? I hope I'm wrong. I like this story so far and hope you keep up with it. :-)

Newyork_xo Newyork_xo
8/16/17

oh my god oh my god OH MY GOD. YOU CANNOT JUST LEAVE ME HANGING LIKE THIS PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON

LoveRiot LoveRiot
8/16/17

Hmm... I like this. Found it on the stories homepage, and decided to check it out. :)
I notice the last comment was left nearly a year ago, though... maybe you're coming back to it, or maybe others just haven't been on to leave feedback? Idk, but I hope you stick to updating this, I will be here to read. :)
With this last chapter you have posted, I couldn't help but laugh out loud when Brooke called Mackenzie out, asking her how she could be with Alex. WHEN BROOKE GOT ENGAGED TO HIM, and DIDN'T EVEN KNOW HIS AND MACKENZIE'S HISTORY. C'mon! XD Like I couldn't with that part, but glad Mackenzie called her out on her irony. XD Like girl's just having karma come back at her. Not to mention the fact that she cheated on Alex, OMG.
One thing I'm wondering about... what does they'll "always be happy together, somewhere in Neverland" reflect back on? I mean, I can see the song association, but just wondering the history with them there. It seems cute. :D
But um, yeah, just wanted to leave feedback and let you know I like what you have of it so far. Rooting for Alex and Mackenzie. :) Really cute how he calls her MJ. :')
Interested in seeing what more you have in store for this. :)

Nanook Nanook
8/14/17

@tabbyjb
Maybe it will. Maybe it won't. I haven't decided the exact ending yet. Loll.

And thank you, everyone, for commenting. It's giving me motivation to continue writing. Even only if it is the same few people.(:

earthtojuless earthtojuless
5/26/16

i love this story! it better ends with them running away to elope haha

tabbyjb tabbyjb
5/26/16
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