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Okay, so I just binge-read (is that a thing? haha) the first 22 chapters. I'm obsessed! I should have gone to bed an hour ago but I couldn't stop reading! I can't wait to pick up where I left off tomorrow. Well done!
@Carebear ahahaha derdick, i love that! i'm glad you're enjoying the story and i'm sorry about how long it took for me to update it, thank you for the support :)
I am throwing virtual tomatoes at Derdick. I do not like him even a little bit. I am really glad Alex got to beat him up. Lets do it again for funzies! I really like this story. Someone should probably tell Olivia that she fell for Alex a good long while ago. I think Alex is starting to figure it out. I can't wait to see Derdick and Lisa take the fall. Muahahahahaha.
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oh come on dad. such a cockblock! ughhh haha
cant wait to see what u have in store for us. i have no idea what liv's dad is like or what he's gonna do, but he better not say something that will olivia break things off with alex or leave Baltimore or anything xD
@Carebear thank u! and yeah derek is a very douchey name, i used it because of derek barry from ru pauls drag race because i hated him ahahahahaha, and i don't have an ending planned just yet so i wouldn't worry too much :)
Yeah, I could really careless about the typos as long as you are getting more chapters out. :o) I am sooooo glad this chapter turned out so well. I am glad they ended up back together. Something completely weird I thought off. I don't think I have ever known a Derek that wasn't a douche canoe. I am not really sure why that is. Huh. Anywho, I liked this chapter and I am a little worried that this story is getting near the end. That is going to be a sad day. Lol.
i'm sorry about all of the typos in the last few chapters, i usually write when it's really late and sometimes i forget to go through and check, and this website crashes whenever i try to go in and edit a chapter, so if you could just ignore any of them - they're usually tiny mistakes anyway. sorry again, i know it's annoying, it annoys me too, but i can't go in and change them, sorry!
Oh my god emily first of all ... Another chapter so soon? Wow? ily! Haha and second... Waaay to fuck things up even more! Love it. Derek IS an asshole, Liv better realize that soon :)
99% of the people on this site don't seem to know the basic rules of grammar, punctuation, or the English language in general so it's nice so read a story that is written in a more than readable manner. This is a great story with a great portrayal of characters and their personalities. Also, phenomenal job on the frequent and regular updates. This is a story that appeals to many readers and that many people look forward to reading, so nothing is better than having an author that keeps up with it. Keep up the great work!
Okay! I'm finally all caught up and now I'm sad because there's no more to read. PLEASEEEE update more soon!
9/17/16