Disenchanted - Comments, page 2

Yeah, it's going to be far from easy for Chris to recover from this, and the next story will still be full of drama, but not nearly the same level as this. Happiness can be seen in the distance, I promise. It just might take a while to get there...@aweirdkindofyellow

Haha yeah writing Jack as an asshole was such a tough thing for me...I really missed normal Jack :( I'm sure you all did too @tabbyjb

Sorry sorry sorry :( I know this was a tough read...@jacktheburritofucker

I KNEW IT! Yeah, it sucks that they lost the baby, but I just know they'll be able to get through it. They're gonna get married and have another baby and tell him or her all about big sister.

WOW OKAY. I like just got back on this site tonight and caught up on enchanted and cried while reading this and MAAAAAAAAAAN

Damn it! I don't know how to feel about this...

thank goooooooood it was just a dream! i was so worried for a second. I can't handle douche Jack hhahaa can't wait for part 3!

You're just punching me in the gut with this story, over and over! D;

You're right, that's way aggressive lol. And you won't have to wait long to find out. Just opened my document and I'm working on the next chapter right now ;) @aweirdkindofyellow

@atlfan08
I swear to god, if you end this with 'it was all just a dream' I will personally come and kill you.... ok, wait... no... that's too aggressive. But still. Don't you dare do it!

Aw thank you :)

Speaking of daily updates, I might or might not update for a few days, it being Mother's Day weekend and all. We'll see though. ;) @ComeOneComeAll

Well...it's kind of a double edge sword, isn't it? Either she really is five years in the future, or she's stuck in a coma with God knows what ahead of her.... @aweirdkindofyellow

Not when Jack is acting like a dick, she certainly doesn't need him lol ;) @katybear18

Dont push yourself to post everyday if it will get sick of writing after a while, but I post a lot too because my story is so dramatic XD
I love the daily updates though, haha and im sure everyone else does too because THIS STORY IS AMAZING

I just so hope she isn't dreaming. That would really suck.

You go, Chris. You don't need no man.

Lol yeah he had that slap coming :P I hope I haven't spoiled you with the daily updates though--that totally isn't a regular thing for me. It's just this story arc is begging to be written. I'm not complaining, as it's been 2 weeks and I already have ten chapters lol :) @ComeOneComeAll

Jack completely deserved that slap!!! I love this story so much, I always look forward to you posting everyday :D

Hahaha I'm so glad you're enjoying it ;) @tabbyjb

wait whaat? is she only dreaming the 5yrs-into-the-future world? or is she not? what is happening?? haha man this is getting so good haha love it.