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@aweirdkindofyellow
I'm gonna hide at the comment about 10 chapters of being annoyed at each other...
Also, I started mine with a vague idea of 'boy meets girl' and it spiraled. Massively. I always have like... one line in my head and everything just forms around it as I go on.
And stop teasing me! Oh my God. I need to know already.
@Kurrsteee;
I started with a plot line of 15 bullet points for this story... well, look how that's going for me.
I'm all about the surprises... like for the end of this part. You'll never know what hit you. So much foreshadowing since the beginning of the story, though.
@Carebear
Thank you :)
I can never stand fanfics that have too much drama in it. Sure, they can get annoyed once in a while, but having it spread out over ten chapters with them never even showing any sign of changing their mind, gets on my nerves so much.
@aweirdkindofyellow
I'm getting to that point with mine. I was originally going to end it around chapter 30 (plot line wise, I didn't actually expect to get more than 20 chapters, but I keep rambling on), but now I feel like there's loads more to say. I do it all the time, so you're not alone.
Sometimes you've gotta throw the obvious in just to shake things up a bit, but random babies make little sense! You've gotta built it up!
I liked it! You handled this well. I think this was the right way to go. Now you have something to do in your epic tale of epicness that needs 2 more sequels. I am good with that BTW. :) I also liked that you are pulling Ireland together. She is not so whiny maybe? She and Jack are more cemented together. Even though we all know that Jack is not wrapped too tight in the head. Crazy ass goof ball. lol. Dunno but I like it. So, another chapter in the books. I can't wait to see what happens next.
@Kurrsteee;
This story is literally consuming my life. It was supposed to be a short one, but one year later and I'm still working on the first part... there were never supposed to be sequels, yet it happened that way.
I hate going to the obvious, except if I feel like it's the only way that works. I will not just throw a random baby in here! I refuse!
Ughhh. So much more to come. I need it.
Also, I'm really glad you didn't go straight to the obvious haha!
@Carebear
Hmm, true, but Barababies sounds more like Jelly Babies, which is always a good argument. As for them having kids, I never said it wasn't going to happen, nor did I say it was going to happen. Would it help if I said there will be a sequel after this? And maybe even a short one after that? Maybe that gives some idea about the time frame (so far I haven't even reached their one year anniversary yet and I'm almost finished writing this installment).
Wouldn't they be Barakittens? HAHA! Here is the thing about babies. There is never a good time to have them. There is never enough time or money or this or that. So in that right, sure, its time for a baby. It would fit into the story nicely and be super funny. In the end, its your story and I am just along for the ride. I loved everything you have done so I am sure I will be happy either which way you go. :)
@Carebear
I can't stand how fanfics always try to make sex seem perfect. Really, the chance of them always finishing at the exact same time? Really? Especially with someone as inexperienced as Ireland. So why not go full out with the awkward AF sex? When I go out, I go fully out.
Won't little baby Barakats be so cute? Barababies... Doesn't it seem so soon, though?
@Kurrsteee;
I'm not really sure how I would imagine pregnancy to smell like... something tells me it isn't a very pleasant smell. But do you really think I'd be that obvious? But it's also possible I'm trying to trick you... Who knows? The answer will come very soon (well, what's considered soon to me).
You really did a great job with that chapter! Sex is not always rose petals and candles. Sometimes its super funny and something you laugh about for years. Especially if one of you ends up with a door knob imprint in your back. Thats all I have to say about that. So, welcome back and keep up the good work. I will just be over here waiting for the baby to come...
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@Kurrsteee;
Well, being mad like how you do it is fine, but then there are the whiney ones. Like, just don't. It's one thing to get mad about something big (or if it starts small and escalates), but it's another to start from 'he said this' and then suddenly constantly being upset about it. It's more in the writing style than in the plot... There's a difference between having a fight and being a little bitch (harsh langauge, but it was the only thing that fit).
This story started out as an idea for the ending of the sequel to this... I was planning on having it done in 30 chapters. I don't know how I got here. This wasn't my intention.
YOU WILL KNOW SOON.
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