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Horseshoes and Hand Grenades - Comments, page 2
It's not trash! I think it was really good! I can't get over how adorable the scene with Jack in the morning was. He's so in love with Alex it's so sweet!! Also I'm sorry for being so absent on commenting lately! College work has been taking up so much time and I just read all your recent updates just now.
It wasn't trash, it was actually pretty good and the scene with Jack watching Alex sleep in the morning is sweet and kinda poetic. I really like it. The smut was a little short and not really detailed but it was okay and you're better at it you just need to train I guess x).
@SophieGaskarth
thanks for the comment! interesting points you've got there! and yes, i'll definitely start to develop the other characters more :^)
1. I don't think everyone is over reacting max is sketchy.
2. I think sees max more as a friend or a brother.
3.id love more zack and marissa it would be read more about there relationship.
4. Yay please put more rian and cass into it.
5. I see him being a bother to everyone and ending up getting someone hurt.
6. Ooohhhh something big. I think something is going to go down between jack and max. I reckon alex is gonna end up getting hurt.
7. No idea hopefully some nice jalex and zarissa and risadee chapters. But also some drama
wow thats a long comment lol. X
@SophieGaskarth
thank you!!
@Alltimegabi
i'm working on it right now! hopefully it'll be up in the next week
@ApathyforSympathy
:^) !!!
Awww yay! I'm so glad they made up! Alex surely you can't be that blind about Max?! Haha. I'm super excited (and stressed) about what's going to happen in Europe! Can't wait for the next update!
awww they made up so glad.
glad jack hates max also.
yay the trip to europe excited to see what happens yay.
love this story glad ur getting excited about it again.
My heart :'( poor Jack! Alex, stop being like that!! Max, stop trying to ruin the Jalex!! Alex is for Jack not for you! Well, I'm definately excited for the next update whenever it comes! :D
@Costati
It's all planned!!! I'm so excited to write it!
@ApathyforSympathy
It's alright! And thank you :^)
@Alltimegabi
Thanks! And Ikr haha
I'm chill with a time skip :) whatever you do I will read bc I love this story! Omg Alex's mom is so nice, o wonder what mom would do haha
Yo, sorry for not commenting that much lately :/ anyway, I still love this story and I think that if it's easier for you to skip to the trip you should do it :)
@ApathyforSympathy
i'm glad!!
@Costati
thank you! and yes, i'm working on it!
@Alltimegabi
i'm happy you liked it!!!
@SophieGaskarth
thanks!
@ashleywinter
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10/9/16