There were Simpler days - Comments, page 2

I really really like this! I love the angle you've taken, its so different (: the only thing I would say is state which point of view the paragraphs are just so its easier to understand, and update soooon :3

It's a good story but I'm really not a fan of changing pov's in stories. It makes it confusing when one sentence is her perspective and then the next paragraph is someone else's. For the most part it's really not even that necessary to have both. I just wanted to try to give some constructive criticism but feel free to ignore it. I really do like the story though!

Any Ideas on how to introduce the different points of view? I like it but is it clear?

Hey you guys, Please rate! Or give me feedback! Plot ideas? speling/grammer problems?