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please update!! i dont care if it will shit or anything, i just DESPERATELY need to know the ending!!!
I love the end of this chapter. (Ok I loved the whole thing but especially the end because yay for semi decent Alex)
.. "What's a comb?"...sounds like me. My hair is always a mess. But I guess I like it like that. x)
I feel like I should criticize something about this story or tell you what I don't like about it or what should be different bc I love giving and getting constructive feedback and I feel like pointing out flaws is really useful for writers, but the problem is I can't find anything 'bad' to say about this yet (or probably won't ever but I promise I'll let you know if I do x)) ._.
So yeah, I can't really tell you what to change because there isn't anything wrong. Which means I'll just sit here and stare at your text and try to figure out why I can't write, I guess. :)
So yeah, this story is doing extremely well.
Thanks for fairly quick update! x)
@Pool_of_thoughts
Oh my goodness, thank you for such a lovely comment! I'm hoping to update sooner than I did this time, but you know, life gets in the way.
P.S Dont worry Alex won't be evil forever o/
This story o_o
This is a damn good story
Like the best one I've read for a looong time
I love this plot (even though there is kinda fucked up gruesome things but whatever, it's fiction)
And your writing too ( I'm kinda jealous yeah )
And the characters (even though I kinda hate Alex because he just has to be bit too badass and evil but I guess I can stand it for the sake the plot and I still kinda love him too and unlike some other stories I've read he seems to have a reason for his attitude too so really this is just so damn good like omg) (and Jack, Jack in this is awesome. Rebel characters are my new love yay)
Starthate fics are love too
And I respect everyone who is able to write them bc I'm not, I tend to make my characters always kinda kind and forgiving and boring yeah so it just doesn't work for me ._.
But yeah I don't know if I made any sense and will shut up before I start to sound like a fangirling idiot (even though I actually already sounded like one because I am one but whatever)
oops this is long, sorry (I should learn how to write short things._.)
..The point was this is amazing, yay. Update as soon as you can, please. :3
I just wanna know what happens
10/9/16