Everything's Magic - Comments

Update please when you have time, this is fantastic !

@WeAreWhatWeLiveFor
@Jagk Barakat
@thereckless_andthebrave
Thank you all so much. c: I'll hopefully make more chapters like this then?

Ooo yaaaaaaaaaas i like this

Aye I liked this chapter!!!


(-[formerly] Jagk Skellington)

So I just did a marathon of this story... First of all HOW FREAKING ADORABLE ARE THEY?! Second of all, Poor Jacky :-( and lastly, Please give this a happy ending, i'm tired of sad tragic endings. KEEP DOING YOUR THING BEAUTIFUL! :-)

Awwww!!!! this is so cute!!! Yay!!! :3

YAY, IT WORKED! :|

@Jagk Skellington

Coffee

Tea

If you read more and maybe create mind maps on possibilities of what could happen in your story, that could help. I mainly just suggest reading stories that are similar to this and just planning it out a little more before you start writing again. Good luck. <3

for writers block i usually read a different story and then pick a random object/ animal and try to either write a short story from its perspective or describe it in the most meaningful way possible. idk man.

@Twat

ikr. .-.

Hahaha, you call THAT a chapter?

@Jagk Skellington

so no one has to.

Awe jack bby love yourself

@Twat

Mmmm, you'll have to seeee

Why? I never really understood why his parents don't live with him any more. Is there a story behind it?
is Jack now gonna break up bc his father will not approve? Questions, questions. :))

@Chloe
omg xD. Jk jk.

I want alex to comfort him

bc u should make jalex happen all z time and never stop.

@Lashaelynn_Alskarth

exuse u bith

aw jaq dunt cri let alyx comfurt u bby. he lub u. *Runs up the stairs and pushes Alex out of the way* "u 2 slow bish"

make me do that for realz doe in the story xD.

That would be insanely satisfying to me.