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Aww, it's over. :'( Wasn't expecting it to end so quickly but I'm glad it ended happily! :)
One thing I noted that seemed off with the last update though:
The wedding was absolutely beautiful but I was so excited for our parents to take the kiddos so I could drink and dance with my best friend at her wedding.
Hopefully by "drink" she meant non-alcoholic, since she's pregnant... but generally when this is said I think the thought is alcoholic. :O
But really cute how they're having their second ones practically together.
Overall, awesome job with this story! I'm so happy you came back to finish it; it's not something I see too often if at all, so that was really cool. :) You did a great job with wrapping it up, and you did more than one update after you came back, which showed you still had a love for this story, which is admirable to see that dedication still there. Usually when authors come back, they'll do one update and that's it. And will just conclude it there.
So yeah, I enjoyed reading Ryan and Alex's story! If you write anymore Alex and OC let me know. I will happily check it out. :)
@Nanook
I actually have two more that I'm working on, they're Jack OCs so my writing wont be leaving.
Yay, baby time! :D
OMG, her name... it's so pretty. <3 I love it. Aspen Rose. :')
Alex making jokes and saying he could have her out quicker... psh. PSH. The nerve. For any man to say that, really. XD
Loved the jokes Mack was cracking though. :P Haha, leave it to her to keep it crude. Funny though.
I'm glad that Ryan's dad showed up, that was a special moment.
Great job with the update! And OMG, we're close to the end. :O I didn't even realize that. I didn't really know what all you had planned, really. Once you finish it, will that be it? I'd hate to see your writing go, but I understand if you need a break.
But interested in seeing what you have planned for the ending. :)
Loved the updates! :) Aw, that was cute how Alex set up a photoshoot. <3
OMG, though, she fell. :O I know the doctor said, but I hope her birth goes okay. :( Like why would Alex leave her to pack by herself? She's almost due to have a baby and he just lets her on her own? I found that odd. That might be an idea to mention in the next chapter or the future. Like, him feeling guilty. Because he didn't seem to feel that bad in this chapter. Or maybe it just didn't convey, not sure.
But when they reunited it was very sweet! <3 Wasn't sure if you were going to do a few fillers or what before he came back, but don't blame you for doing a time skip. Sometimes it can be difficult to find that content to put in.
Something to note: I notice you kept putting contraptions. They word you want is contractions, lol. For labor. But tiny mistake really.
Great job with the updates, though, overall! Can't wait for more! :)
Ohhh, so it was Kiss Me Again. XD Haha, for some reason I thought it was going to be more obscure. Idk.
Great job with the update! It was a cute one. :)
Can't wait for more! Wonder what the additional surprise is, hmm...
OMG girl, I am so sorry. :((
I'm still here! I've just been a bit busy lately... I've also got a new job so that's been taking up a lot of my time. So I might be a bit delayed with commenting at times, apologies for that. But I will do my best to comment asap.
I loved both of the new chapters! Hmm... interesting how Ryan's dad made an appearance... a bit sad they couldn't work things out just yet, but I guess you can't blame her.
I was so confused when they suddenly started saying her in reference to the baby, before I got to the explanation paragraph, lol. Was thinking I missed something. But aw, so sweet! They're having a baby girl. :D
And Alex is just so sweet to Ryan in this. Very understanding yet still sarcastic when he needs to be. And so caring for the baby. :') I just, love the closeness. <3
Wonder what will happen once she leaves. :O Will drama arise? More so than there has been with like her dad and then Mack's divorce? Also wondering what song she's gonna sing with Alex. Awww. :D :')
I'm surprised she's leaving already though, but can understand her reasoning.
Excited to see more! :)
:D I'm glad I could make your week! :)
You came back with a long update too! Woot! Great job with the new chapter. :)
I love how chill Alex and Ryan's relationship is. As I was reading this update, things started coming back to me... I may have to go back and reread a bit since it's been a minute since I last read it/it was updated, but I think I'm remembering most of the key things.
I love how when Ryan tells Alex she loves him, and he says "I know." XD lol. Like, he just did it multiple times and I found it funny. XD
I admire Ryan for wanting to go on tour even though she's pregnant; she still wants to work, respect. Reading this chapter looks back on Flyzik leaving, aw. :( I got to go to one tour of theirs where he was there, but I actually think it was the last because I never saw him after that. :/
Oooh, and things seem to be heating up for Mack and Jack. XD Love that they rhyme. lol, this is getting a bit confusing though since her husband also has that name. XD Man.
But yeah, awesome job with the new chapter! This is so cute. :D Excited to see more! :)
Oooh, yay, an update! And on the day another story I read on here was updated too, haha. :D
Oh, no, Ryan's dad doesn't approve. That's disappointing. :(
And now Mackenzie isn't staying with her husband? :( Or wait... I think they got married, right? It's been a bit so I'm having trouble recalling... I remember they had a baby though.
This probably isn't going to be too reassuring for Ryan, though, oh no.
Great job with the update, though. Can't wait for more! :D
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10/9/18