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Okay so I'm really late on this, but I totally stopped reading fics for a while. But I still love this story so so much and I really liked your sex scene! I suck at sex scenes (no pun intended!) but yours was so detailed (but not grossly so) and really well paced and idek how to describe this but you got across really well that she was a virgin and how a virgin might feel if they were in this situation like you weren't all "yup this is sex I'm totally used to it even though I've never done it lol" without it being over-the-top if you catch my drift??
Anyway I'm done fangirling and I love the sequel a lot and you should update really soon!!!
OH MY GOD SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL
I'M CRYING IT WAS SO CUTE THERE WAS A LIL TINY FOB REFERENCE TOO OH MY GOD
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@gamble with desire.
AWWWW! That was one of the sweetest comment ever! Thank you so much <3 That really meant a lot to me, especially regarding the sex scene. I was afraid it'd be too awkward, but I was surprised at the good responses I got! Thanks again <3 :)
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