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Everyone loves the lead singer - Comments
To be honest I am actually reeaally happy you're starting it over. I just thought you added too much and tried too hard to make this interesting and exciting, so I thought it was way too much. Try to keep it exciting yet, you don't want to throw in too much at once :)
To be honest I am actually reeaally happy you're starting it over. I just thought you added too much and tried too hard to make this interesting and exciting, so I thought it was way too much. Try to keep it exciting yet, you don't want to throw in too much at once :)
I like the idea of the story & the events that are happening but the writing needs some improvement. Other than that I really like the story c:
Its gripping, i think give it another chapter or two and then see if you want to put a close to it. Completely up to you its yours, :)
ow, I love the story :( yeah! if you can continue it please! but if you dont want to... what can I do? you are the writer here :D
anyway, have a good day and hope you dont leave this really really good story :) bye!
damn the cliffhanger tho
7/26/14