Manage Me - Comments

I've been stumbling across stories I've read, and checking them out again since I seem to forget them after it's been a while. This was one of those cases.
Reading this again, and after reading other stories on here and Mibba, I've realized that with my last comment, I was a bit off. Yes, Brooke and Alex's relationship was cute when they were together/sweet to each other, but reading it again, their relationship was a bit abusive. Neither is completely innocent, but the version of Alex you wrote in this took it to the next level. I realize a lot of it was because of his insecurities, what he dealt with in the past, etc., but Brooke didn't deserve any of that. When she did mess up, she definitely didn't take her anger to the levels he did.
Idk, I'm conflicted because again, when they were together, it was cute, but then it just got sad when they weren't. I'm not sure why she put up with as much as she did.
Your writing is still good, though. Just wish they didn't have so many downs in their relationship. It got really sad at a lot of points, and I just felt Alex didn't need to take it to the degree he did, I mean really.
I doubt you saw my other comment, but just thought I would comment again as an update and to possibly get you to see it.

This was very cute. I just read it and loved it. :)
You're a great writer! :D I'll probably be checking out some of your other stuff as well. :)

Wait, what? Really?! I'm coming over this weekend and eating dinner at your place! lol XD

So sad to see it go. but that was such a cute ending. (:

So sad to see it go. but that was such a cute ending. (:

<3 wonderful.
An incredible ending to a perfect story.
Love you, hon :)

@SaraBethGaskarth

@ToxicxDancefloor

can't, sorry. i have no idea what i'd do.

noo it can't be over </3
write a sequel? <3

That is a beautiful send off. A sequel would be amazing. You could write about the ups and downs of Brooke and Alex being married and raising little Ellie.

Sweet <3

If it's a boy I like the name Tom. If it's a girl name her Emilie. I love this update. I am very happy Alex has woken up to realize Brooke is the girl for him.

awww, I'm glad that they made up, cuteness again.

I'm sad this is almost over :/ because it is so awesome!

@SociallyAwkwardRocker
like how?

:) D'awwww yay.
I don't know what the baby should be named, but it should be ironic.

@SociallyAwkwardRocker
you caught that! first prize goes to you.

<33333333333333
Finally.
I like how you quoted Zack from straight to DVD in there. "We didn't want to die, so we didn't let Jack drive."
Girl, you rock. Love :)

Yay! They made up! :)

@tragic_ending
I agree pelase don't end it. Write a sequel. You're public demands an encore of these lovebirds. Oh and thank you for finally changing Alex's ways. He's a dick for too long. I love this story.

i don't want this story to end! I love it so much. I'm glad that they finally made up.