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Wow I just got goose bumps it was so good. I know I'm a little late but wow. I just can't believe you finished it! Please write a sequel!!!!!!!
@w0wolivia Thank you! I'm going to work on my others stories now because I was lazy and need to update them. I feel all special getting two awesome comments. Arigatou!
Yay you updated! I thought you finnished it. And Jack and Angelique are so adorable together!!!!!!!!! I really can't wait to meet her father! You're an awesome writer!
@ironi1234
I see where you're getting at. That's why I don't like Faida as much actually. Faida has had a completely different life than him plus she's not even all human. Her character really only works for a stockholme syndrome thing. I think that Dawn in Time-Bomb would fit him better if you don't count Walls. She's more like a real person. I guess Alesia and Jack are more like Ariel and Prince Eric from the Disney version of The Little Mermaid. Two different Worlds lol.
I see where you're getting at. That's why I don't like Faida as much actually. Faida has had a completely different life than him plus she's not even all human. Her character really only works for a stockholme syndrome thing. I think that Dawn in Time-Bomb would fit him better if you don't count Walls. She's more like a real person. I guess Alesia and Jack are more like Ariel and Prince Eric from the Disney version of The Little Mermaid. Two different Worlds lol.
@QueenDes
Yeah you're right. I read the first chapter and it looks great. Alex and Aurora will make a great couple. Yay a third one! Anyway about the Aly Jack thing I just felt like they're from totally different worlds and places in life and have a slight problem understanding completely each other even of they really tried. It was written great and it's really original but I just didn't really like it I guess
Yeah you're right. I read the first chapter and it looks great. Alex and Aurora will make a great couple. Yay a third one! Anyway about the Aly Jack thing I just felt like they're from totally different worlds and places in life and have a slight problem understanding completely each other even of they really tried. It was written great and it's really original but I just didn't really like it I guess
@ironi1234
I just finished The Experts. I'm writing a sequel. (Well, not right now. I mightlater tonight or tomorrow) It's an Alex/OC. I might as well tell you who the main girl is because I already put up the summary. The main girl is Aurora, Alesia's cousin.
Oh and I like Jack and Aly together a lot. Aly is my favorite because she is so cute and innocent. I also don't want to take away Aly and Echo, but I think I might make something happen towards the end or it might be in a third one if I decide to do a Zack story after this. It's not bad. It's good. I'm just not sure because it would take away part of who she is. I just heard about it workin on a human on the aol news the other day
I just finished The Experts. I'm writing a sequel. (Well, not right now. I mightlater tonight or tomorrow) It's an Alex/OC. I might as well tell you who the main girl is because I already put up the summary. The main girl is Aurora, Alesia's cousin.
Oh and I like Jack and Aly together a lot. Aly is my favorite because she is so cute and innocent. I also don't want to take away Aly and Echo, but I think I might make something happen towards the end or it might be in a third one if I decide to do a Zack story after this. It's not bad. It's good. I'm just not sure because it would take away part of who she is. I just heard about it workin on a human on the aol news the other day
@QueenDes
That's one of the things I liked, the fact your stories are different and more creative and unique. Jack and Aly do make the best couple out of Echo and Alesia. I really don't think you should heal her because it loses part of the creativity and uniqueness. It turns it into a fairy tale and not into something that might've happened. Are you going to write a sequel? That'd be awesome. This story though isn't finnished right?
That's one of the things I liked, the fact your stories are different and more creative and unique. Jack and Aly do make the best couple out of Echo and Alesia. I really don't think you should heal her because it loses part of the creativity and uniqueness. It turns it into a fairy tale and not into something that might've happened. Are you going to write a sequel? That'd be awesome. This story though isn't finnished right?
@ironi1234 I liked her as Aly because Jack can be such a kid. I thought all three personalities worked good together so in total she was more like him. Aly: child-like. Echo: a perv. Alesia: fun but mature as well
@ironi1234 Well in the beginning he was, but Alex and them were telling him to go for it. I like that one a lot because there is never any where the girl is deaf and having multi-personality disorder. If you read it, Alesia comes more and more out. Aly and Echo aren't there as much because Jack is slowly healing her. I was thinking that they might disappear in the sequel. The only reason why I don't want to is because thats what's so different about her. I also like that one because I can write a sequel. This one won't have one
@QueenDes
Yeah maybe. But it's still very good. Experts say I'm delirious is also good but this story has more suspense. Jack and Faida make a great couple but I didnt really like Jack and Alesia together. Doesn't it bother jack that she's 3 different people? Anyway even 12 subscribers is great:). I only have like 5.
Yeah maybe. But it's still very good. Experts say I'm delirious is also good but this story has more suspense. Jack and Faida make a great couple but I didnt really like Jack and Alesia together. Doesn't it bother jack that she's 3 different people? Anyway even 12 subscribers is great:). I only have like 5.
@ironi1234 It's cool. I really like this story, and it doesn't have very many readers if you compare it to all my other ones. On Mibba this has 12 subscribers while (my fave) The Experts Say I'm Delirious has 61. I don't know why. I think this story is different. Ive never read anything like it
@QueenDes
Nah im starting to feel bad. I already made you update this story like 3 times a week and tell me all these details :)
Nah im starting to feel bad. I already made you update this story like 3 times a week and tell me all these details :)
@QueenDes
Oh cool it's one of my favorites after therapy and outlines. That should be really awesome. He sounds really cool. Does he know and careabout Faidas life?Oh well at least we know what Faida is and your other stories are also great though this is my favorite.
Oh cool it's one of my favorites after therapy and outlines. That should be really awesome. He sounds really cool. Does he know and careabout Faidas life?Oh well at least we know what Faida is and your other stories are also great though this is my favorite.
@ironi1234
This will go back to weekly again. One of my stories was late by 5 days. Lol. Plus my other ones need updated. It's based off Paint You Wings by All Time Low. It's my favorite song on Don't Panic. Also she has never met her dad. He's missed her a lot though. Dang it. I want to tell you what happens. Ok. You've commented the most on this story, so I'll tell you something that will happen after a couple of chapters..... Her dad will be in the story. I haven't chosen a name for him yet, but he will be in it. That's when the story will differ from the song.
This will go back to weekly again. One of my stories was late by 5 days. Lol. Plus my other ones need updated. It's based off Paint You Wings by All Time Low. It's my favorite song on Don't Panic. Also she has never met her dad. He's missed her a lot though. Dang it. I want to tell you what happens. Ok. You've commented the most on this story, so I'll tell you something that will happen after a couple of chapters..... Her dad will be in the story. I haven't chosen a name for him yet, but he will be in it. That's when the story will differ from the song.
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I will if I can come up with something for them or their daugther like my sister told me too. I do have an idea for a story that you might like since you liked this. Of course, I want that one to be longer. It will be a super power one isn't of supernatural, but I feel that if you like the story line in this you might like that one because I feel like they are closer than my other stories. I just need to come up with her powers and one of her sisters powers because I've only thought of one.
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