More Specifically, Me Maxine - Comments, page 2

I would like to see them meet leda and Matt :)

I want option A. We need to hear from 'Mystery' on how he feels about Maxine and how far she is on her journey. I think it would be good, but maybe mix it with Maxine and the gang getting to Leda and Matt.

@Sarah's Butterflies
I would suggest less speech, maybe try and do what I do, summarize what's been said and where they're going :) Sometimes when there are a lot of characters speaking it confuses readers :) But I seriously love this story :)

@BringMeBarakat

Yeah sure, Anything

Read it all so far and I love the storyline :D But can I make one suggestion? :)

@Sarah's Butterflies
How I found out studying equals a fail for me was in my 8th grade history class. I studied for a test to appease my mom. I showed her the test a week later when I got it back and I got a D. I knew the material before I studied. Now I don't study and my mom just makes sure I go to class and I'm handling everything.

@ToxicxDancefloor

I'm similar like that, but its only in lang arts, but I'm still forcing myself anyway and I suck at math in general so I'll just leave it as that but I did ask the teacher why we had to learn this stuff, I'm surprised she wasn't mad. I studied once last year and that was for Science, but my friend made me sit down and do it, in the end I got a B on that test so I guess. Once class last year I had to study for was Theater Arts when I had to do Hamlet, one we wrote with a partner and commedia dell'arte which was fun. I had one of the best teachers I ever had out of all of the classes I took. Band is another story I will not get into, never will I touch the flute again.

@Sarah's Butterflies
I am at college, so I have more work to do than you with studying. But I'm not allowed to study. For some stupid reason its reverse for me, if I study I get bad grades. It's been like this since I was in middle school.
Update whenever you can. I can wait for more from you on this, it's just so good but I will wait if I must.

@ToxicxDancefloor

I'll write more today or tomorrow, I have a writing goal for myself so I keep getting stuff done. Once chapter must me done by 6:00 every day so I can have the rest of the night to myself relaxing or Kiking friends.
I'm going to a different school this year and I have no clue how the students are like, but the principal said everyone is nice, heck I still don't know anyone here, Oh well, just as long as my grades for this year are up I don't care. I'm not in college yet, I still got 5 more years till it. But I already know what I want to major and minor in, major: Child Services and minor: something in music. Now just to find a college that supports both.

I love this update. More soon. I know how school is like. My classes start in two weeks from today and I move to my dorm the Sunday before that. Then to add, my classes start on my dad's birthday.

@Sarah's Butterflies
HA I KNEW IT! lol sorry anyways I shall be waiting for this to be updated! :D <333333

@Heather
Yup :)
And I had to add some Jalex in it, and I'm writing another chapter so it should be up in a few hours.

so im guessing the mystery POV is Alex am I right?? :D

@Sarah's Butterflies
Make Alex contact her again or have Maxine open the letter and read it.

@ToxicxDancefloor
I'm currently writing a new chapter right now. I'm really happy you're enjoying it, is there anything you may want to see within the story?

Update more soon. This is good.

@Sarah's Butterflies
ok and no problem its great!

@JalexUnicorn
Awww thanks!
well not for almost making you cry but oh well

I love it! I almost cried!

@Heather
Expect something later today!
I have the first chapter almost written up, but because its 12:24 am I'll write later today. Or maybe now on GoogleDocs. Oh I don't know but thanks for reading!