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Throwing Stones at Glass Houses

Chapter 8

I went back downstairs and walked to the front door. I needed some air. "Hey," Christofer said. "Hey," I said sitting on the porch steps. Chris stood there with a cigarette in his hands puffing away. He considerately puffed the smoke and pointed the cigarette away from me. "So what brings you out here," he said flicking off some of the embers on the cigarette. I looked up at the sky. it was dark now. "I just needed some air," I said. He put out his cigarette, "It's nice out here." "Yeah it is," I said. He stood up and stretched a bit, "I'm gonna go inside. You coming?" "I'll be in in a bit," I said looking back at him. He smiled and headed inside. I went up to Jack's car and opened the door. I took out the new pills my doctor prescribed me to take. I locked up the car again and turned to head back inside. "Stella," I heard a familiar voice call. "Vic," I asked confused. He stepped closer to me making his face visible. "Hey, what are you doing over here," he asked me."Um, just hanging out with some friends," I said hiding my pill bottles behind me. "What you got there," he asked trying to reach for them. "Oh nothing," I said backing up a bit. "Oh," he said feeling a bit awkward. "So what brings you here," I asked him hiding the pill bottles in my back pockets. "I live in that house," he said pointing to a house two down from Zack's. "Oh," I said feeling stupid. "You didn't know," he said looking at me. He grabbed my hand, "Don't be hard on yourself." His hand released mine and found its way to my hip. "¿Quieres venir a mi casa?," he said pulling me closer to him. He pulled me close to his body, our lips almost touching. "What," I asked him after about a few minutes. "Oh sorry. Do you want to hang at my house," he whispered gently. "I really don't think I should. My brother's probably worried about me," I said still looking in his eyes. "That's too bad, we could have chilled," he paused, "and stuff." He smiled. "See you around, mi amor," he said his lips just touching mine. I watched as he headed down the street continuing towards his house and then through the door. I bit my lip and headed back inside grabbing the bottles from my pockets. "What took you so long," Chris asked me putting his arm around me and giving me a quick squeeze. "I needed something from Jack's car," I said heading to the kitchen. "How many do I take," I asked Jack looking at the bottles confused. He picked up each of the bottles, "Two of these," he said taking out two blue pills from the bottle. "And one of these," he said handing me the green pill too. Rian tossed me a bottle of water. I swallowed the pills down at the same time. "Stella I'm gonna crash here tonight. Want me to bring you home," Jack asked me putting the pill bottles in the bag with my shirt. "Stella stay the night," Kellin chimed in. "Yeah," Jordan, Cameron, and Chris chimed in too. I thought about it. "I guess I could stay," I said running my fingers through my hair. "Yay," Kellin said picking me up and spinning me around. I laughed, "Put me down." Kellin put my feet back on the ground. I yawned. "Aw, are you tired," Rian asked me. "Yeah," I said yawning again. I looked at the guys things were a little blurry. "I think the medicine isn't reacting so well," I said holding my head. "Why don't you lay down," Kellin said helping me to the couch. He sat me down and grabbed a blanket. Zack and Rian pulled out the couch mattress from the other couch. Kellin helped me lay down cautiously. He placed the blanket over my body carefully. He bend down, "Night Stella," he said kissing my forehead. My eyelids were heavy. The medicine was making me very drowsy. "Jack," I called out. The boys were all hanging out in the kitchen. Kellin came in and bent next to me, "What's wrong?" "Can you get me Jack," I said still feeling groggy. "Yeah," he said standing up and heading towards the front door. Jack came back in a few minutes later followed by Kellin. Kellin blew me a kiss and headed back into the kitchen. "Whats wrong babe," Jack asked me looking down. "Can you lay with me," I asked him. He smiled, "Of course." He laid next to me wrapping his arms on me. I placed my head in his chest and he laid there rubbing my back. "Night Stella," he said kissing my forehead. Next thing I saw was the inside of my eyelids.

Translations:

¿Quieres venir a mi casa?= Do you want to hang at my house?
Mi amor= My love

Comments

So I originally found this on Mibba, but came over to this site once I saw it wasn't finished on there (and seeing you said you had a profile on here in an author's note), to see if you maybe finished it on here...
You didn't, which is a bummer. :( But you did get one more update up on here in comparison to Mibba, so that's something.
I really like what you have of this story, and bummed that you didn't continue/finish it. Especially after reading this last update; I had a feeling what all was between her and Vic was kind of rigged, but wasn't sure. Now... :O
I'm just wondering why Alex hates her so much. I mean, at first I thought it was because he liked her, so he teased her, but then he just started getting awfully harsh and then like almost took advantage of her... like WTF. I also can't believe Jack would be friends with him after seeing him hit his sister, just because he seemed "alright"... that was a bit weird.
But I think you're a really great writer, other than those missing factors. Some of those you were probably leading into explaining more and just didn't get to, which is really unfortunate.
If you ever find yourself wanting to write for this story again, I will be here to read. I also subscribed to it on Mibba too, although this seems to be the most up-to-date version. But regardless of which platform you post on, I will read. :) I think it's a really intriguing plot line and I would love to see how it all ends.
Hoping this comment will maybe inspire you to continue. If not, just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed this and just wanted to show you that people like me are still stumbling across your story. :)

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