Throwing Stones at Glass Houses
Chapter 25
I noticed Jack's car in the driveway. "Shit," I muttered under my breath. I climbed up the side of my house into my room. I closed my bedroom door carefully and locked it. There was a knock on my bedroom door. I opened the door slowly. Alex walked in and closed the door behind him. Locking it. I backed up away from him. "Hey Stella," he said with one of his signature smirks on his face. "W-what do you want," I asked frightened out of my mind. He walked closer to me until he was inches away from my face. "I want you," he said laughing. I pushed him away from me. I swung to punch him but he caught my fist, "You're a feisty girl. Even better." Alex grabbed me by the wrists and roughly threw me onto my bed. I kicked underneath his body weight. "Stop Alex, please," I cried. He put his lips on mine in attempt to shut me up. He kept kissing me roughly. The kiss was wet and messy. Alex stuck his tongue into my mouth and in struggle I bit down on it. He pulled away and pulled his hand back. "Hey Stella, you in here," I heard Vic call. Alex smacked me in the face just as Vic hopped through my window. I felt the weight being pushed off of my body and looked up to see Alex on the floor. "What the hell are you doing," he said kicking Alex's back. Alex stood up and looked at Vic. He harshly bumped into him as he walked out glaring at Vic as he went. "You alright," he asked me. I nodded my head. I was in shock realizing what had almost just happened to me. "Well say something," he said rubbing my back. The only thing I could do is stutter trying to find the right words. I was to in shock to even formulate a sentence. I looked at Vic and shook my head. He pulled me close to him not letting me out of his grip. Why does everything have to happen to me.
So I originally found this on Mibba, but came over to this site once I saw it wasn't finished on there (and seeing you said you had a profile on here in an author's note), to see if you maybe finished it on here...
You didn't, which is a bummer. :( But you did get one more update up on here in comparison to Mibba, so that's something.
I really like what you have of this story, and bummed that you didn't continue/finish it. Especially after reading this last update; I had a feeling what all was between her and Vic was kind of rigged, but wasn't sure. Now... :O
I'm just wondering why Alex hates her so much. I mean, at first I thought it was because he liked her, so he teased her, but then he just started getting awfully harsh and then like almost took advantage of her... like WTF. I also can't believe Jack would be friends with him after seeing him hit his sister, just because he seemed "alright"... that was a bit weird.
But I think you're a really great writer, other than those missing factors. Some of those you were probably leading into explaining more and just didn't get to, which is really unfortunate.
If you ever find yourself wanting to write for this story again, I will be here to read. I also subscribed to it on Mibba too, although this seems to be the most up-to-date version. But regardless of which platform you post on, I will read. :) I think it's a really intriguing plot line and I would love to see how it all ends.
Hoping this comment will maybe inspire you to continue. If not, just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed this and just wanted to show you that people like me are still stumbling across your story. :)
4/16/17