Throwing Stones at Glass Houses
Chapter 20
"Come down here, I have something for you," I heard Vic's voice on the other end. I grabbed my converse and opened my window. I climbed down and walked over to Vic, shivering as I walked. He took his sweat shirt off and put it on me. It was kinda big on me. "Here," he handed me my sweatshirt. I felt something in my sweat shirt. It felt almost like a small box. I grabbed it from the sweat shirt and looked up at Vic suspiciously. "Open it," he whispered. I opened up the box and gasped. "Vic," I said hugging him. "You like it," he asked me. "Yes! Thank you so much. It's so beautiful," I said pecking his lips. "Let me put it on you," he said looking at me. I turned around as he put the necklace on me. "Love you Stella," he said kissing me again. "I love you too Vic," I said, "I should really be going back in." "Yeah you look tired," he said hugging me, "bye." I kissed him and he turned around and went into the car I noticed that Vic waited until I was back in my house before he took off. I climbed into bed thinking about how screwed up the past two days had been. I pulled the hood of Vic's sweatshirt over my head and zipped it up. I layed in my bed tossing and turning. I couldn't sleep. I grabbed my phone and texted Vic:
"Are you up??"
He answered back a minute later:
"I am now :P"
I answered:
"Oh my gosh, I'm so sorry, go back to sleep."
I didn't expect him to answer back but he did:
"You're worth being awake. What's wrong beautiful?"
I answered back quickly:
"I can't sleep."
He took a minute to answer back:
"Do you want me to come stay with you?"
I got out of my bed and looked outside to see Alex's car still outside. I picked my phone up:
"It's late and snowing again. Don't come it's okay."
Vic answered back again:
"Okay baby. Let me know if you change your mind. I love you."
I texted back:
"I love you."
I closed my eyes and tried to drift off to sleep but I didn't succeed. I ended up only sleeping for a half an hour.
"Are you up??"
He answered back a minute later:
"I am now :P"
I answered:
"Oh my gosh, I'm so sorry, go back to sleep."
I didn't expect him to answer back but he did:
"You're worth being awake. What's wrong beautiful?"
I answered back quickly:
"I can't sleep."
He took a minute to answer back:
"Do you want me to come stay with you?"
I got out of my bed and looked outside to see Alex's car still outside. I picked my phone up:
"It's late and snowing again. Don't come it's okay."
Vic answered back again:
"Okay baby. Let me know if you change your mind. I love you."
I texted back:
"I love you."
I closed my eyes and tried to drift off to sleep but I didn't succeed. I ended up only sleeping for a half an hour.
So I originally found this on Mibba, but came over to this site once I saw it wasn't finished on there (and seeing you said you had a profile on here in an author's note), to see if you maybe finished it on here...
You didn't, which is a bummer. :( But you did get one more update up on here in comparison to Mibba, so that's something.
I really like what you have of this story, and bummed that you didn't continue/finish it. Especially after reading this last update; I had a feeling what all was between her and Vic was kind of rigged, but wasn't sure. Now... :O
I'm just wondering why Alex hates her so much. I mean, at first I thought it was because he liked her, so he teased her, but then he just started getting awfully harsh and then like almost took advantage of her... like WTF. I also can't believe Jack would be friends with him after seeing him hit his sister, just because he seemed "alright"... that was a bit weird.
But I think you're a really great writer, other than those missing factors. Some of those you were probably leading into explaining more and just didn't get to, which is really unfortunate.
If you ever find yourself wanting to write for this story again, I will be here to read. I also subscribed to it on Mibba too, although this seems to be the most up-to-date version. But regardless of which platform you post on, I will read. :) I think it's a really intriguing plot line and I would love to see how it all ends.
Hoping this comment will maybe inspire you to continue. If not, just wanted to let you know how much I have enjoyed this and just wanted to show you that people like me are still stumbling across your story. :)
4/16/17