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Sing Me To Sleep

Summary

- Im Awaked With Mistakes -
If you haven't read the first book, I recommend doing so before you read this one. Trust me, its way better than this one :)

Chapters

Comments

Ahhhh it's over. Great job with this story! You tear down your writing a lot, but believe me when I say I've seen a lot worse fics, lol. Like, it's definitely a step up when I'm able to actually read it, you know? But besides that, I liked the cliché parts as well, and while it was heavily dramatic at times, it was still a good read.
Towards the end here, I got a bit confused, because she was in Baltimore, then flew back to Cali, but then was in Baltimore again for the wedding? XD It just seemed like a pointless trip to go back, especially considering it was only for a few days. Lol, but I won't pick on it too much since it's over now.
I really enjoyed this! And you at least tied everything up, and I like how their first kiss song came into play again. A lot of authors don't often do that, like reflect on the beginning in the end, even though it should be obvious, lol, so I'm glad you did that even with your old writing. :)
If you write or post anything new, feel free to let me know and I'll try to check it out! There is still your other story; I'll still be reading that. :)
But yeah, overall, great job on this series! :D

Nanook Nanook
6/19/19

Ahhhhh! I'm so sorry it has taken so long to reply/update! I'm about to graduate High School and I just got a new job so I haven't had much time to finish up the story, lol. Your feedback is greatly appreciated, as always. I'm pleased to know someone has found some enjoyment out of this pretty random fic. There's only a couple more chapters left so Alex will for sure clean up his act and stop acting like such a douche haha.

Oh my... so, a lot has happened. :O
Wow... Alex just got douche-ier and then tried to make up with her and then turned into a douche again and is now... trying to make up with her? lol, he's so back and forth. It's hard to tell what he really wants. He acts like he wants her now, but then how could he do all of what he did to her? Maybe blame it on immaturity I guess, a few years have passed so maybe he's a bit different now.
But yeah, just interesting how he was upset at the engagement, considering he's had his chances and blew them. Man.
And like, that broke my heart for Allie when he so easily broke her heart, but then didn't want to ruin it with the new girl. :/ Like, what? But then he went back on that in the next chapter, lol, so it's like, what words does he even mean when he says them?
Also, even though he's sorry now, there's just something unforgivable in the fact that he missed so much of Daisy's life so far. I mean, c'mon, I can understand the heartbreak, but his relationship with Allie shouldn't interfere with his father-daughter relationship. They're two separate things, and he needs to make it up to her on a different level. Like, I'm surprised he's being forgiven so easily, because it wasn't just Allie, but Daisy was majorly affected too.
But I get that you wrote this at a different time, so you probably didn't think on that too heavily, as you've mentioned with other aspects of the story, lol.
Oh, and even though it was kind of randomly thrown in there, I loved that you finally answered the question with the Rubik's Cube, lol. So that was finally solved, and it's interesting that he's the one who did that/ruined the promise? :/ Like, it's a wonder he didn't try to mix it up again. That he just let it solved. In a way, it's showing he brought the omen onto their relationship.
But yeah, great job with the updates! Sorry for the delay in commenting, I'm still here. :) And while I'm very skeptical of Alex's intentions, I suppose I'm still with the original ship, lol.

Nanook Nanook
5/14/19

Ohhh gotcha. That makes sense, I was thinking Alex himself did something, like he called her and left her a voicemail that he didn't mean or something.
And right? lol, I've kind of hated stories like that, because especially if they kill the main character off... like that's part of the reason I was enjoying the story, if I read that far, and they just took it away. :/
Haha, I've read a lot of stories where that's his archtype. Just the bad boy or he's a douche at some point. XD I think it was pretty typical like the kill off a character thing lol.
And aw, no problem, I'm enjoying reading. :D

Nanook Nanook
3/30/19

@Nanook
Haha so basically the video on Allies phone was something her band mates sent to her as they were finding out about Alex and his other girl. I wanted to fix it but I figured it keep up with the whole corny fanfic plot so I decided to leave it how I originally wrote it.
I really am confused as to why the dramatic and untimely ending of the lead character was so popular back then...? I remember reading fics where the leads would be critically injured and change the whole plot. It was a strange time haha.
I also have no idea why my younger self decided to make Alex the worst human alive oh my gosh. It seriously baffles me sometimes.
The weird ch 7 typo was a mistake. I assume I made a change and forgot to delete pieces of the old sentence. I’ll fix it now, thank you for bringing it to my attention!
Finally, thank you for all the comments. It warms my heart knowing there’s at least one person enjoying this ❤️

AlexAllTimeLow AlexAllTimeLow
3/23/19