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I Did Something Bad

Summary

Violet is Jack's girlfriend, and they’re deeply in love. But this love is put to test when her boyfriend's best friend makes a move on her.

I’m terrible at summaries, but please read, haha.

Chapters

  1. I Don't Know How It Happened

    TW: cheating; Word count: 1452

  2. Everything Will Look Better in the Morning

    Violet needs some time alone to think about what she's done. Word count: 1214

  3. The Guilt is Eating Me Alive

    Violet makes a decision. Word count: 2640

  4. The Words Get Stuck In My Throat

    Violet has something to tell Jack. Word count: 2492

  5. I Can't Take It Anymore

    Jack doesn't take Alex's confession well. Word count: 1606

  6. She's Gone.

    Jack's thoughts. Word count: 2344

  7. I'm Gone.

    Violet leaves her house. Word count: 3796

Comments

Finally getting to this! XD :)
Yay, I'm glad my suggestions helped. :) I do like the Instagram type format better, it gets a bit confusing in this latest chapter especially with all the dots in the texting format you repeated, lol. Like I backtracked and thought they just meant pauses at first, as opposed to trying to align the texts in the correct places lol. Plus, it kind of gets repetitive with the texting format.
Now, as for the latest chapter...
Don't have as much to say about this one, since it's basically just a recount of the same time frame from Violet's POV, but, I'm glad we got it. I mean, how else would we have found out it was her that texted Jack? I wonder if Zack will ever realize or inform Jack that it wasn't him messaging.
I definitely think she needs to stay away for a bit, so maybe this trip to New York will help her, just until things blow over. I don't really see it being completely avoided forever, though. But who knows? She no longer has her phone, so... how will they be able to contact her? Unless they know her "sister" (it's her actual sister, right? It confused me a bit when she was explaining... because it could just be a friend that is so close she's basically a sister?). Ooohhhh and here comes a bias suggestion that just occurred to me, WAIT FOR IT XD :
Alex knows her sister, or recalls her and thinks to contact her, but Jack doesn't. XD Because Alex is just that attentive to Violet. :D And he finds her in New York. ;)
LMAO. The bias is so bad, I know. XD
Hmm... but anyway, Zack is such a sweet potato. :) I'm glad he let her stay even after she told him the truth. He could have easily kicked her out, but, it just shows how noble of a character he is. :')
Think that's all I have to report on, Captain. Until the next update! XD :)

Nanook Nanook
5/22/18

I have very conflicting feelings towards her leaving for New York. On one hand, yes, girl, run away! Get the heck away from Whacko Jacko. On another hand, I sort of feel bad because it’s her actions with Alex that turned Jack into a nut - not that it justifies his behavior at alll! And then on another hand (I have three hands today!) What happens with her and Alex? Obviously he’s gotta have at least a little crush on her or why would he have kissed her in the first place? And that becomes super complicated because he’s married. And what? They start dating and Jack is just supposed to be okay with it? That can’t end well for the state of the band. Ugh, maybe she should just go to New York!

Newyork_xo Newyork_xo
5/16/18

Noooo she can’t go live in New York. I’m so torn. I want her to be with jack, but then I don’t bc he went all Hulk. Then think maybe she should be with Alex, but that a whole other bag of shitty consequences (his marriage, the band). Can’t wait to see what happens next!

hopeless1313 hopeless1313
5/15/18

@Nanook
Yay, I'm glad you found the plot twist interesting, hopefully I can manage to make a lot of those in the next chapters :) I love that you write what you were feeling as you read, and it makes me so happy to see that you're liking this! Thanks for the texting suggestions, I switched up to one of those :) I'm glad you're obsessed with this, haha, I really appreciate it <3 Oh yeah, that's why it took me a little longer to get this chapter done, because I was working on some school stuff *yawn* but the new chapter is finally here, so I hope you enjoy this one as well :)

idkhbtfm idkhbtfm
5/13/18

OMG, speaking of plot twists...
She went to Zack. What. :O I was not expecting that at all. XD If anything, if it wasn't Alex (hehehe ;)), I was thinking her maybe going off on her own, not turning to another member of the band. So this is interesting. It's also interesting that Zack seems somewhat calm about it. But then again, in real life, he seems like a chill dude, so, perhaps you're keeping that aspect real for the story as well. :)
Ugh, she left her phone. :( lol, this shouldn't be that big of a deal, but as soon as it got to that part, it was like an itch I couldn't scratch. Especially considering Jack said NOTHING so now Alex probably thinks she hung up on him! :(
.................. do I need to say it? XD
But not only that, to try to be objective again, XD, now Jack can't contact her directly either. :/ Welp. And I just realized, I meant objective in my first comment, not subjective. XD I will blame
my tiredness at that point; I think you still understood what I meant though. XD
Ugh, this story is so good! I only get worked up over the best stories. XD Ones that influence my emotions so much, my comments are literally what my reaction is in real life, or what I would actually say, filler words and all. XD
Anyway, okay, so, going over the new update overall, I found it interesting that you switched to Jack's POV. I mean, you kind of hinted towards that, but I wasn't sure if it maybe would just still be in Violet's perspective and like there would be another confrontation or something. But this worked out better, because we were able to see his true thoughts.
And guess what? I'm still not feeling sorry for him! XD Girl. He passed that line when he got so violent. But I'm glad he's realizing his errors, though; that at least shows some growth/humanity to his character.
Hmmm... I'm looking forward to the next chapter now! :D Where Violet realizes she left her phone! LMAO. I'm thinking she probably at least realized that when she went to Zack, but who knows. XD
I'm very impressed that the irony was intentional; I wasn't sure if it was or not, but that shows how skilled of a writer you are, that you had it planned. :)
Okay, hmm... I believe that's all my thoughts. I could totally see flashbacks working in this story. :) Glad you don't mind long comments. XD
Oh! A suggestion on the texting format: in other stories, I've seen it often done like this:
From Zack:
(text)
From Me (considering they're first person POV):
(text)
I mean, this is a bit more tedious, I guess? But it's just what I've seen a lot and it makes things a bit clearer.
Orrr.... you could just label with their names in the iMessage type format:
Message Date
Zack: asadslkldasa
Me: asjdjasjalskdls

Zack: asjdlkasdsa

lol, does this make sense? I respect the fact that you were trying to do it in the true format though. This might help clarify better though, in case the formatting issue happens again. Although it was clear to me in the update, but just a suggestion if you want to try something else or in case someone else has an issue following along.
Okay, now I think that's the end of my thoughts. lol.
..... whispers.... *Team Alex*....
Okay I'm going I'm going. XD Excited to see what's next in store! Once again, seriously obsessed with this story and very impressed with your dedication. Keep it up! (But make sure you focus on school work when needed lol).

Nanook Nanook
5/8/18