I Did Something Bad
Summary
Violet is Jack's girlfriend, and they’re deeply in love. But this love is put to test when her boyfriend's best friend makes a move on her.
I’m terrible at summaries, but please read, haha.
Chapters
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I Don't Know How It Happened
TW: cheating; Word count: 1452
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Everything Will Look Better in the Morning
Violet needs some time alone to think about what she's done. Word count: 1214
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The Guilt is Eating Me Alive
Violet makes a decision. Word count: 2640
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The Words Get Stuck In My Throat
Violet has something to tell Jack. Word count: 2492
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I Can't Take It Anymore
Jack doesn't take Alex's confession well. Word count: 1606
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She's Gone.
Jack's thoughts. Word count: 2344
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I'm Gone.
Violet leaves her house. Word count: 3796
Finally getting to this! XD :)
Yay, I'm glad my suggestions helped. :) I do like the Instagram type format better, it gets a bit confusing in this latest chapter especially with all the dots in the texting format you repeated, lol. Like I backtracked and thought they just meant pauses at first, as opposed to trying to align the texts in the correct places lol. Plus, it kind of gets repetitive with the texting format.
Now, as for the latest chapter...
Don't have as much to say about this one, since it's basically just a recount of the same time frame from Violet's POV, but, I'm glad we got it. I mean, how else would we have found out it was her that texted Jack? I wonder if Zack will ever realize or inform Jack that it wasn't him messaging.
I definitely think she needs to stay away for a bit, so maybe this trip to New York will help her, just until things blow over. I don't really see it being completely avoided forever, though. But who knows? She no longer has her phone, so... how will they be able to contact her? Unless they know her "sister" (it's her actual sister, right? It confused me a bit when she was explaining... because it could just be a friend that is so close she's basically a sister?). Ooohhhh and here comes a bias suggestion that just occurred to me, WAIT FOR IT XD :
Alex knows her sister, or recalls her and thinks to contact her, but Jack doesn't. XD Because Alex is just that attentive to Violet. :D And he finds her in New York. ;)
LMAO. The bias is so bad, I know. XD
Hmm... but anyway, Zack is such a sweet potato. :) I'm glad he let her stay even after she told him the truth. He could have easily kicked her out, but, it just shows how noble of a character he is. :')
Think that's all I have to report on, Captain. Until the next update! XD :)
5/22/18