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I Don't Love You

Summary

"Why are you doing this to me?" She whimpered in a soft voice. "What have I ever done to you?" Alex paused at Y/N's words. "I don't love you like I did yesterday."

Alex has made a huge mistake, thinking he didn't love Y/N anymore, cheating on her and leaving her heartbroken. Years pass, and Y/N has finally moved on, and Alex doesn't like that. What will he do to get Y/N back? Will Y/N forgive give him?

Characters

Alex Gaskarth

Alex Gaskarth

Y/N's ex boyfriend. Cheated on Y/N and is trying to win her back.

All Time Low

All Time Low

Obviously the one and only All Time Low!

Ashley Pitts

Ashley Pitts

Y/N's bestfriend. Is Jack Barakat's girlfriend later on.

Joshua Jacobs (JJ)

Joshua Jacobs (JJ)

Y/n's boyfriend. Wants Alex to leave Y/N alone. Is using Y/N.

You!

You!

Ex girlfriend of Alex Gaskarth. Wants nothing to do with Alex.

Chapters

Comments

Josh is managing Sleeping w/ Sirens, because why not? But hey? All great things happen at random moments, so... <3

Oooh, okay, I see what you meant writing wise now. It flows a bit better in first person I think.
My question is, who is Josh managing? lol, because if Sum 41 or Blink 182 could be a possibility as an opener, the band must be pretty big. Just keep that in mind as you're writing. Not sure if you ever planned on mentioning who or not.
But great job with the chapter otherwise. Can't wait to see what happens next. Already reunited with Alex. :O

Nanook Nanook
4/8/17

Oh, gotcha. That makes sense.
I may have read your other story... I'm spacing on the title at the moment. lol, sorry, I've been reading a lot of stories lately so without the title reference, I'm a little spacey when it comes to remembering. Was it something with "Bite" in the title? Either way, it's okay, I understand. Sometimes you have to do that with stories, it happens. Admire you for realizing that as a writer and going with something you're more passionate for. :)
And understandable! Take your time really. :)

Nanook Nanook
4/3/17

@Nanook
I only wrote the Prologue in third to add to the fact that what happened in that chapter is in the past. Other wise, I will most likely be writing this in first person. I feel like mixing things up a bit. I'm glad that you have decided to read my story! If you were one of my readers of my other fanfic, I'm sorry for taking it down! I wanted to write a story with a better plotline, with actual protagonists and antagonists. And I also wanted to have something more interesting than the typical vampire has mate, etc; I'm glad you are sticking around to read. I will be truthful, and say that I will most likely be having slow updates seeing as I am in school, but I will try my very damned best at keeping up the updates. Thank you though!



Hi there!
So I saw this story on the homepage and decided to check it out since you're just starting it, to give you some feedback to continue.
I typically don't really read stories that have Y/N, mainly because it's more concrete with an actual name, but I'll give this one a chance because I'm interested in the plot line you have set up. The only thing slightly confusing about using Y/N, is that you're doing it in third person, when typically I see it in second, using "you" instead of "she." That might also get confusing since you're doing it that way and not just picking a name of your own.
Just some advice, it's up to you how you choose to write it, but just leaving my honest feedback. I will stick around to read, though, still. I encourage you to continue. :)

Nanook Nanook
4/3/17