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I'm A Walking Travesty

Drown

**Alex**

I woke up with my whole body in pain, I attempted to sit up but my arms fell limp and landed back on the ground. I then noticed a blurred figure in front of me who bent down to me and I flinched away and hit myself against a locker.

The figure picked me up bridal style and took me outside I started to panic ad tried to wriggle away but couldn't. I was trying to speak but no words came out but then a familiar voice spoke as I felt myself passing out again "It's okay, you're going to be fine just calm down"

**Jack**

It was the end of the day and I was going to ask Alex over to mg house he had a sadness in his eyes but it made me want to know more about him and make the sadness go away. I wandered over to his locker I was a few minutes late so i might not catch him but it was worth a try. I got to his locker and noticed his limp body on the floor.

I ran over to him and crashed down on my knees which him jump and hit the locker. I noticed him start to lose consciousness so I picked him up and took him out side to where my car was and he started to panic so I whispered to him "It's okay, you're going to be fine just calm down"

He lost consciousness after that so I decided I'd take him to my house as my parents were out if town, even though he probably needed a hospital I figured he'd hate me if I did so if he didn't get better I'd take him then. I placed him in my car and put some music on and drove to my house.

I carried him into my house and took him upstairs, he was confused but awake, and I laid him on my bed and got some clothes to change into when he was ready. I ran downstairs and cleaned up some and got some ice and took it up to Alex who was full awake. "where am I?" He quietly spoke "your at my house" I pass him the ice and say "here this will help" he gladly took the ice and we sat in silence for a while, why did I like this boy so much? I barely knew him.

He nervously spoke up bringing me from my thoughts "why did you bring me here?" Why wouldn't someone he was hurt? "you were hurt and needed help so I brought you here I couldn't just leave you there" he looked at me with his big sad eyes and before I knew it I lent in and my lips were on his.

Notes

I know I said I'd update more but personal shit so Yeh I'm sorry but I gave you some jalex before I planned so Yeh sorry. Anyway thanks for all the views and if you want subscribe and vote or comment whatever I'm not bothered

Title Credit: Bring Me The Horizon

Comments

@RecklessButBrave
Heyyyy, you actually commented Yayyyyy..... Thank you so much. Haha.

I write a lot but its never normally all time low related so I dont upload but I won't and I promise to be better on updates :)
thank you again.

love ya too :)

Hey. I'm the new subscriber. I love this story so much. When I saw that you updated I made a very girly fan girl scream.

Please keep writing, and don't ever stop. You are amazing.

Love ya!

Thanks btw sorry I haven't had the time to read more because I just slept all day again. I'm happy if I helped I'm not finished tho I really want to know how you're gonna put everything in place through the story.
I don't know maybe I'll post something one day. But for now I need to tell myself I won't because if I don't everytime I'm gonna write something I'm gonna think about wanting to be perfect for the reader and that would fuck everything's up. Changing little things are okay but in the end you've got to do something that you like because if you force yourself it's just not worth it you know.

Costati Costati
10/10/16

@Costati

thank you so much for the advice it helped and I call everyone dude anyway so Yeh and I will try add some of these things in, I guess with my writing it comes and goes and then I have no time to write and then I post something short and and not entirely what I wanted but I had this idea a while ago so but it did take a lot to upload but I decided to get it over with before I changed my mind. Also you should post something sometime id like to read something of yours.

If you want my advice...(if you don't just don't read this I don't want to make you mad I really just want to help)..

I mean personnaly I don't like abbrevations in a book except for SMS or well dialogue. It just breaks the reality of the thing in a way. We're like projected in Alex's and Jack's head (by the way I love that we swing back and forth between the two. It's just cute and funny how it's kind of dialogue between them and their thoughts without them knowing it) and I don't think people put abbrevations in their thoughts. Speaking of thoughts explore what Alex thinks of himself or Jack, when Alex says he's stupid and other things. It would be super interesting to know more about that.
I'm going to bed, so I'll do the rest tomorrow it's 6am where I am and I have to wake up at 10 so I really should sleep.

Costati Costati
10/8/16