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I'm A Walking Travesty

This Means War

**Alex**

I slowly walked over to the seat next to jack and slouched down in the chair and half listened to what the teacher was saying and once she was finished everyone went back to their own conversations and then i heard jack say "hey, you okay?" I thought about what to say "yeh, I'm fine" just when i thought the conversation was over jack spoke up again "You weren't in school yesterday, what happened to you?" Well he had to ask that why does he care, he's probably being nosy "Um.. I was sick, but I'm good now."

"Oh okay, do you wanna come sit with us at lunch so you aren't on your own? Or do you wanna do something else, it was only an offer so you dont have to if you dont want to" He's so cute when he's flustered. No why am I thinking that. I half sighed and said "Sure, why not."

The rest of the day went by pretty quickly, lunch was difficult but i threw up what i ate but oh well and i was now walking to my locker as it was the end if the day i wanted to put my heavy books back. I put them in my locker and closed it, got my phone out of my pocket and turned around ready to leave when a shooting pain from my head went down my back, and 'oof' noise escaped my body and i watched my phone fall to the ground and smash, of course it would.

I then felt a pain in my ribs and looked up at my attacker who then shouted "fatty" at me, it was the football dude from earlier.

He punched me around the face multiple times and shouted other words at me and pushed me against the locker harder this time hitting my head on the cool metal and felt a the warm liquid known as blood run from my head and down my neck and my vison started to blur and i fell to the ground watching everything go black.

Notes

Not gonna bother writing a random note that you don't care about this time, so yeah hope you like it.

Title credit- Marianas Trench

Comments

@RecklessButBrave
Heyyyy, you actually commented Yayyyyy..... Thank you so much. Haha.

I write a lot but its never normally all time low related so I dont upload but I won't and I promise to be better on updates :)
thank you again.

love ya too :)

Hey. I'm the new subscriber. I love this story so much. When I saw that you updated I made a very girly fan girl scream.

Please keep writing, and don't ever stop. You are amazing.

Love ya!

Thanks btw sorry I haven't had the time to read more because I just slept all day again. I'm happy if I helped I'm not finished tho I really want to know how you're gonna put everything in place through the story.
I don't know maybe I'll post something one day. But for now I need to tell myself I won't because if I don't everytime I'm gonna write something I'm gonna think about wanting to be perfect for the reader and that would fuck everything's up. Changing little things are okay but in the end you've got to do something that you like because if you force yourself it's just not worth it you know.

Costati Costati
10/10/16

@Costati

thank you so much for the advice it helped and I call everyone dude anyway so Yeh and I will try add some of these things in, I guess with my writing it comes and goes and then I have no time to write and then I post something short and and not entirely what I wanted but I had this idea a while ago so but it did take a lot to upload but I decided to get it over with before I changed my mind. Also you should post something sometime id like to read something of yours.

If you want my advice...(if you don't just don't read this I don't want to make you mad I really just want to help)..

I mean personnaly I don't like abbrevations in a book except for SMS or well dialogue. It just breaks the reality of the thing in a way. We're like projected in Alex's and Jack's head (by the way I love that we swing back and forth between the two. It's just cute and funny how it's kind of dialogue between them and their thoughts without them knowing it) and I don't think people put abbrevations in their thoughts. Speaking of thoughts explore what Alex thinks of himself or Jack, when Alex says he's stupid and other things. It would be super interesting to know more about that.
I'm going to bed, so I'll do the rest tomorrow it's 6am where I am and I have to wake up at 10 so I really should sleep.

Costati Costati
10/8/16