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Time-Bomb

"That girl, that girl, she's such a bitch."

"That girl, that girl, she's such a bitch."

Dawn’s POV
“Good morning beautiful,” Jack said before kissing my nose. Jack and I have now been back together for five days, and it feels like we were never apart in the first place. I loved the feeling that I got whenever I was around him. I can’t believe that I was such a bitch before. How could I not love this guy?
We were also the only thing that our fans were talking about. My fans seemed to accept him more than his fans did of me. Some of them saw me as just another phase. The Lunatics and Love fans saw him as a miracle. They were so happy that I finally found someone that made me happy. Apparently, most of them thought that I was going to end up alone.
“Good morning my adorkable plushie.” I pecked his lips.
“Adorkable plushy?”
“I think you are worthy of me calling you the word on my Gir jacket.”
“What about the plushie part?”
“My sister thinks you look like a plushie.”
“Why’s that?” He was smirking, so he must be finding this amusing.
“My sister says that you have big eyes like a plushie and a big head with a skinny body. I agree with her.”
“You think my head is too big?” He made a fake sad face.
“I think it’s the perfect size. In fact, I think you’re cuter than a plushie.”
“I think you’re prettier than the moon.”
“I am not prettier than Luna.”
“Luna?”
“I call the moon Luna.”
“Oh yeah, I almost forgot that. You told me on our first date. That was the best date ever.”
“It was so romantic. I couldn’t have thought of a better date. Us lying on a blanket in the park while we looked up at the stars. I had my astrology book with me.”
“You and you’re astrology and zodiac stuff.”
“Our signs go good together you know. We’re both air signs. You being a Gemini, and me being a Libra.” He chuckled. Yeah, he didn’t know what I was talking about.
“Are you two love birds up yet?” I heard Logan ask.
“I wish I wasn’t,” Luke said. “Those two kept me up all night with all that growling and meowing and… Save me God. Save me from more of those nightmares. I can‘t take it!”
“Yeah,” I answered. “I’m also going to hit Luke just to let you know.”
Logan laughed. “I give you my permission.”
“But I’m your twin! You can’t let her hit your twin!”
“Too bad because I already gave her permission.”
Those two are always fun to watch. I grabbed my underwear and Jack’s shirt that we threw at the foot of my bunk before slipping them on without hitting Jack in the face. He did the same with his boxers. Before we got out, we kissed each other sweetly and smiled. When I got out, I saw everyone dressed and waiting for us. I was confused. We don’t do our signing ‘til a little later, and we don’t perform ‘til way later.
“Why do you guys look like you’re ready to leave?” I questioned.
“We’re going to go and check out the other tents,” Care replied.
“What if some fans see us? You know that we are two of the bigger bands playing.”
“Sunglasses and luck,”
“Ok, I’m in.”
As soon as we reached the tents, I started looking for bands that I recognized. My grip on Jack’s hand tightened. She was here. I can’t believe I didn’t notice her band’s name on the list.
“What’s wrong?” Jack whispered in my ear.
“Holy shit,” Logan mumbled. “She’s here.”
“Who?”
“Our old guitarist.”
I hated every single bit of her. I hated her curly bleached hair. I hated her bright green eyes and the fact that she wore too much makeup. She was the definition of bitch. Alex thought I was one for the way I treated Jack, but if he knew her at the same time he knew me, he would be calling me nice girl.
“Look who’s here,” she sneered as she pointed to us.
“Look its Dawn and Carina!” a familiar voice exclaimed. “Come over here!”
Was that who I thought it was?! It was. It was one of my sister’s best friends that I got along with really well. Why the hell is she hanging with our enemy, Brittany, and her band? I cannot believe this. The voice had belonged to Leanna. Her once medium length blonde hair was now short and dark. We did as she said and walked over to the tent.
“What are you doing here?” Carina asked Leanna.
“I’m on tour!”
“With what band?”
“Brit’s band of course. Why else would I be here? I’m their new lead guitarist.”
“Is Dawn upset that she lost one of her friends to me?” Brittany said in a baby voice. I hated her so much. She looked over at Jack. “And who is this?”
“I’m Jack,” he answered not at all phased.
“Why don’t you dump her and come have some fun with me? I’m a lot better in bed. Trust me.”
“I’ll pass.”
“Wait. Jack. That name sounds familiar. Could you be the Jack that Dawn used to date? I of all people would know that if she ever got with a guy again she would only get back together with you.” She put her finger to her chin and smiled. “I remember all that annoying crying that Dawn did. ‘Why did he leave me? Why was I suck a bitch towards him? Why couldn’t I have just said yes when he offered those tickets? Jack. Jack. Jack. Jack. Jack.’ You were so pathetic you know. Only someone as pathetic as you would not get over a guy after years of not being together.”
“Why don’t you shut your mouth before I shut it for you?!” I snapped at her. I was not putting up with this.
“I’m soooo scared.”
“Jack will you please hold me back before I tear this bitch’s face off?”
“You wish you could.” I was about to tackle her down to the ground, but Jack did what I told him and held me back.
“I’m really sorry,” Leanna tried to tell Care. “I didn’t know.”
“It’s ok,” Care sighed. “You didn’t know, so we’re still cool.”
“Let’s go back to the bus,” Jack told me before picking me up and carrying me back.
By the time we got there, he was completely out of breath and energy. He was bent over with his hands on his knees. I felt bad. I pulled him into a hug to try to make him feel better before giving him a kiss. Maybe that will make things better.
“I’m really sorry that you had to carry me back,” I said.
“It’s no problem, but I did lose a lot of energy. I might not be able to do the signing. Maybe you can give me an energy boost by giving me another one of your amazing kisses.” I giggled and motioned for him to come closer. He did and pulled me into a passionate kiss. “That was awesome.” He started jumping up and down. “I feel so energetic. What do you put in those things?”
“Love of course.”
“How did I not think of that?” My mind started to wonder back to Brittany. “Are you ok?”
I snapped out of it. “Yeah, I’m fine. Don’t you have a signing soon?”
“You’re right I do. Are you coming with me?”
“I’m going to get more sleep before mine. You had me up really late last night.”
“That I did. That I did. How would you rate it anyway?”
“Nine out of ten.”
“Why not a ten?”
“It can always get better. I learn that every time.”
“Oh really. How would you make it better?”
“I don’t know. Maybe we could do stuff like in that lemon I made you read.”
“Kinky. Jack likes.”
“Anyway. I’m going to go to sleep now. Have fun.”
“Not as much fun as tonight.” He went off towards the tents.
Now was my chance. As soon as I got inside the bus, I grabbed my calligraphy pen out of my bag. With Jack here, I haven’t been able to do this. I went into the bathroom and did what I always did when I had something on my mind. I carved into my arm.

Prequel

Walls

Walls

PG-13 Romance

Jack Barakat/ OC Prequel to Time-Bomb

4/16/13

- 2 Votes

Comments

@Amberflorencebarakat
Oh thanks! It's been forever since I've gotten comments or anything.
And I'm happy you like this one. It's not favorite, but it's forever there for me since it was my first ATL fic.
Oh and Idon't know if you've started the prequel but I got really stuck on it, but I have thought of just putting up all the info that wasn't explained. Ex. Why they hate Brittany so much

Anyway, thanks! :)

QueenDes QueenDes
7/30/13
This is my favourite fiction on this website ever
@Dreamer182
Thanks!!!
QueenDes QueenDes
11/18/12
This is seriously amazing!!
Dreamer182 Dreamer182
11/18/12