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Time-Bomb

"Shooting love in real-time."

Dawn’s POV
I woke to find big brown eyes looking into my hazel ones. However, I didn’t even think about the fact that some person was in my bunk with me. I needed to get to the bathroom. Now! I pushed the individual out of my bunk before rushing to the bathroom almost stepping on the stranger in the process. As soon as I reached the toilet, it all came out. I really hated throwing up. Why the hell did I even get drunk? I never even gotten drunk before! Then the situation with Jack came back into my head. That’s right. I got drunk because I didn’t want to deal with him.
I started throwing up again, and while this happened, I could feel hands hold my hair back. Whose hands were these? They weren’t Care’s. They were guy hands. They couldn’t be Logan’s because he’s probably dealing with his twin. Whose were they? How did I even get back in my bunk anyway? Who was the stranger? At least I’m still clothed.
“There there,” a soothing voice said as a hand started rubbing my back. That voice. Don’t tell me. When I stopped, I looked up at the owner of the voice and hands to find that it was indeed Jack. I panicked. I pushed him away from me, crawled to the opposite corner, and pulled my legs up to my chest. “What’s wrong?”
“What are you doing here?” I asked. “Why were you in my bunk?”
“You told me not to go.” I did? “Care had me carry you back to your bunk.”
“Don’t call her Care. That’s what I call her.”
“Whatever hangover girl.”
“Don’t call me that, and could you please not be so loud?” He nodded. “Will you help me up? I feel funny.” He did as I said. I made my way over to the sink and grabbed the mouthwash before gargling it and spitting it out. I hated mouthwash so much. I hated the taste of mint. Spearmint was even worse.
“You’re cute when you gargle.”
“Turn down the speaker.”
“Oh sorry,” he said quieter. “Do you think you’re done throwing up?”
“Yeah. The only stuff that I actually drunk was what I drunk in front of you.”
“I’m never taking you drinking.”
“Why would you even take me anywhere anyway? Don’t answer that. Just go. I’m not in the mood.”
“You sure?”
“Yes. Please go.” He looked hurt, but I didn’t care. My headache was killing me, and I could not handle being near him in this state. I went over to my bunk and sat down. Damn headache! Care came over and handed me two painkillers. I didn’t even care what brand they were. I needed them! I swiftly took the cup of water out of her hand at took them. “Thanks.”
“I’m guessing that you don’t want to hang with us today.”
“Maybe later. This isn’t supposed to last all day, right?”
“Correct. If you need us, we’re going to be at the All Time Low bus.”
“Wait. Why?”
“Luke challenged them to a video game tournament. We are all going to see him get his butt kicked. I think Logan might stand a chance. Of course we all know that Mia is second best to you.”
“Ok. Whatever. Just go and leave me alone.” She got up and left me. I lay down in my bunk and drifted off to dream world.
When I woke up, there was still no one on our bus. I looked at the time on the phone. 7:00.Where the hell could they be? I got up and went over to the All Time Low bus. I was so happy that I slept all day. I was starting to feel better. When I got on the bus, I found all my band members asleep on the couch and the floor next to Alex, Rian, and Zack. I didn’t see Jack though.
“Dawn?” a voice came from outside. I turned around to find Jack in the doorway. “I was just going to tell you that they all fell asleep.”
“Oh ok,” I said as I started down the stairs. He moved out of the way.
“Can I talk to you?”
“No.”
“Why not? I really need to talk to you about that song.”
“I don’t want to talk about it.” I started off towards my bus. Of course, Jack was following behind me. “I said no.”
“Please?”
“N-O.” I finally got on the bus. I felt him grabbed my arm and spin me around before laying a kiss on my lips. Holy mac and cheese! What do I do? I haven’t kissed anyone but him. He was my first kiss. The guy that gave me my first kiss was the only guy that I’ve ever kissed. I know I’m pathetic!
I couldn’t help but kiss back. His lips were always so soft. I could feel his tongue on my bottom lip. I granted him entrance, and let him explore my mouth. I moaned when he started sucking on my tongue and moving his tongue in every inch of my mouth. I knew that I wasn’t going to get at take control of this. He never let me before, and I doubt that he would now. His hands started to slide up my shirt. I quickly took it off right before he did the same thing. I pushed him onto the couch and then straddled him. Our lips automatically connected again, and our tongued danced. My hands went to his hair. His hands started to roam my back before finding my bra strap. I knew where this was going, so I got up and led him over to my bunk.
I woke up the next morning with Jack’s arms around my body. What the hell did I do last night? Shit! Why the fuck did I do that?!
“Jack,” I said. He didn’t move. “Jack.”
“Five more minutes,” he mumbled, pulling me closer.
“Get up now,” I seethed. He opened his eyes and looked at me with confusion. “Get out.”
He sat up. “Why is something wrong?”
“Yeah, you. Now get out.”
“Wait. Why? I thought that…”
“Get out and leave me alone!” I pushed him off my bunk. He quickly put his boxers on, grabbed the rest of his clothes, and hurried off the bus with the saddest look I’ve ever seen.
I could hear different footsteps coming onto the bus. It was Logan. “Why did Jack just leave in only his boxers?”
“Leave me alone.” I buried my face into my pillows.
“I think I understand what happened.” He ran off the bus in a fit. Great. Now he thinks something else happened.
I got up and quickly got dressed before being greeted by my sister. A look of worry covered her face. Something must be going down. “What?”
“Would you like to explain to me why Logan is over on the All Time Low bus cussing them out?” He did take it the wrong way. Of course he did. I’m always so hyper and happy, and I never do anything wrong. He would obviously never think that I was the one to blame.
“What’s he saying?” I weakly asked.
“Just that Jack had a one night stand with you somehow, that he somehow convinced you to have sex with him, and that he corrupted you.”
“What are they saying back?”
“They are yelling that he wouldn’t do it with someone that didn’t want it in the first place and maybe Logan should stop blaming stuff on other people.”
“They aren’t talking about our past, are they?”
“No, but Jack won’t leave his bunk, and it’s pretty easy to hear all that sobbing coming from the other side of his curtain.”
“He’s crying?”
“Yeah. So are you going to tell me what the hell happened?!”
“I slept with Jack, and this morning, I told him to get out and to leave me alone. I was such a bitch. I need to fix this. I need to tell him that I’m sorry and that I do still love him. I was mad. I have a temper. He should remember that.”
“You better.”
“Will you help me write a song for tomorrow night?”
“If it will fix it all, I will. How are you going to put a whole song together by tomorrow night?”
“It will be acoustic, and you’ll perform it with me. It will just be the two of us.”
“How do you know that he’s going to hear it?”
“They go on after us. We’ll do the song last, so he’ll hear it.”
“Fine then. Lets do it

Prequel

Walls

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PG-13 Romance

Jack Barakat/ OC Prequel to Time-Bomb

4/16/13

- 2 Votes

Comments

@Amberflorencebarakat
Oh thanks! It's been forever since I've gotten comments or anything.
And I'm happy you like this one. It's not favorite, but it's forever there for me since it was my first ATL fic.
Oh and Idon't know if you've started the prequel but I got really stuck on it, but I have thought of just putting up all the info that wasn't explained. Ex. Why they hate Brittany so much

Anyway, thanks! :)

QueenDes QueenDes
7/30/13
This is my favourite fiction on this website ever
@Dreamer182
Thanks!!!
QueenDes QueenDes
11/18/12
This is seriously amazing!!
Dreamer182 Dreamer182
11/18/12