The Experts Say I'm Delirious
“Your shirt’s all wet. Why don’t you take it off?”
Jack was contemplating on whether he should ask if she needed more paints and canvases. They were low on food, so he was going to go to the store before everything closed. The reason he hadn’t yet? She was in the middle of taking a bath. Jack ran his hand through his hair and gave it a light tug. He could always just slip his hands in and sign to her. Maybe that was a good idea.
He opened the door slightly and slipped both hands inside. Alesia couldn’t recognize his hand movements on account that they were sideways. He repeated it when he didn’t get an answer.
Alesia sighed. “You can come in.” Did she really just say that? “I’m taking a bubble bath, so you can’t see anything.” Jack gulped before entering the bathroom. There Alesia was, sitting in the bathtub, naked. He may not have been able to see anything, but that didn’t stop his pants from tightening. “Come closer.” She motioned for him to come closer and didn’t stop until he was right next to the big tub. “I need to tell you something.” Jack hesitantly leaned hi head over so it was by her mouth. In a seduction whisper, she said, “I want you to fuck me.” Echo.
He didn’t even have time to think another word before Echo pulled him into the bathtub and on top of her. He tried to get out, but she pulled his head down by his hair and making his mouth connect to hers. Jack had gasped from the surprise, so her tongue was already roaming around his mouth. Feeling her tongue on his again took all his strength away. He pushed her tongue out of his mouth and started to explore hers. She moaned as his tongue ran across the roof of her mouth and behind her teeth.
“Your shirt’s all wet. Why don’t you take it off?”
Jack started to then stopped. He shouldn’t be doing this. Alesia doesn’t know what’s going on. Besides, what if she came back?
“I have complete control. Don’t worry. Alesia isn’t coming back tonight.”
Jack slowly nodded before slipping his shirt over his head. He attached his mouth to her neck. He would bite down on a spot and then kiss it as if it would make it better. After every bite that would definitely bruise, he would move up her neck. When he finally got high enough, he started to bite her earlobe and then behind her ear.
Echo moaned, but this wasn’t enough for her. His body wasn’t touching hers. Only his lips were. She wanted, no, needed more. She grabbed his right hand that was on the side of the bathtub and put it on her left breast. A gasp slipped past her lips from the feeling of his calloused fingertips on her nipple.
Jack was too lost to be found. His already dark eyes became darker with lust and desire. He actually hadn’t been with a girl in a month. He didn’t know why he didn’t have a one-night stand before Alesia came. He just didn’t want to. Perhaps he truly was destined to be with this girl.
Jack continued to move his mouth down and giving her opened mouth kisses until he came to her chest. Responsible Jack was truly gone. He started to suck on her nipple and his other hand pinched the other one. “J-Jack,” fell from her mouth. He took that as a sign that she wanted more. He took her nipple between his teeth and applies a small amount of pressure. “J-Jack, I-I n-need you.”
It was about time that they moved this to the bedroom. Yeah, bathtub sex was hot, but a part of him still wanted to make this perfect. Bathtubs really aren’t that comfy. Jack lifted his lanky body out of the tub before leaning down and picking Echo up bridal style. The journey to Jack’s bedroom was quick because well, they were both fucking horny.
As soon as he made his way over to the bed, he laid Echo down and started working on his belt. That was easy. The hard part was trying to get his skinny jeans off quickly. You would think that after all the times he had sex he would be a pro at it. He obviously still wasn’t. Sometimes he wondered why he even wore them at all. “Hurry up, so you can fuck me.” With that, he finally got his jeans and boxers off.
He got on the bed and hovered over Echo. He took her in. There were scars here and there, but he still found her absolutely beautiful. There was a long scar that went from the right side of her collar bone to the middle of her chest. Jack gently laid kisses up it before finally giving her a peck on the lips.
The aura around them changed. They could both feel it, but what was it? Neither of them just wanted to fuck the other anymore. They both wanted to make love… Jack looked into the eyes of the girl that lay underneath him. They looked different. They obviously weren’t cheerful like Alesia’s. They were filled with desire, but they weren’t seductive like Echo’s. Whose eyes were these?
The unknown girl leaned up and kissed him quickly telling him that this was what she wanted. She really wanted him. Jack understood and moved his hand between her thighs. The teenager moved them apart, so Jack would have access. He quickly kissed her before sliding a finger in. Her face turned to one of discomfort. This was more than the normal though. The girl slowly opened her eyes to find Jack talking to her.
“Are you a virgin?” he asked.
She nodded. “I actually had never kissed anyone until that incident with Echo.” Jack was right. This wasn’t Alesia or Echo. Who was she? “I think… I think I’m ready for another finger.”
Jack nodded and cautiously added another one. He paused and didn’t move them until she nodded her head. He started to pull out and push back in slowly, just trying to find that one spot that would make her feel better. He knew he found it when her back arched and a loud moan escaped her mouth. “Th-there Jack.” He scissored her for a little bit before finally pulling both out. The girl whined from the emptiness but was pleased when she saw him reach into his bedside drawer and grabbed a little packet out. He opened it with his teeth and then slid the condom on.
Jack was now hovering over the girl again. The kiss they were sharing was a passionate one. He pulled away and started talking to her. “This will hurt. Tell me if you want me to stop, ok?” She nodded, so he lined himself up. He gave her one last kiss before slowly pushing in. He only made it half-way before he stopped. The girl kept her eyes closed as she tried to fight back tears.
“Go,” she barely let out. He pushed in more until he was finally all the way in. A few tears escaped her eyes, so he stopped again. He kissed her nose, her forehead, her cheeks, and finally her lips to try to get her to forget the pain.
After a couple of minutes, she pushed back. Jack got the hint and pulled slowly and pushed back in at the same speed. He continued the slow rhythm and tried to find that spot that would make her feel so much better.
“Oh my God! Right there!”
Jack sped up a little, so it was an average speed and making sure that he hit her g-spot each time. She wrapped her legs around his waist, causing him to go in deeper. The duo moaned.
“F-faster Jack.”
He did as instructed and started up a faster pace. Moans filled the room as Jack started to thrust harder after she told him to. Jack got sloppier as he got closer. Alesia was as well. With one more kiss, filled with nothing but love, they both came together.
Jack collapsed on top of her and tried to catch his breath. He hadn’t felt like that in a long time, and it wasn’t because she was a virgin. It was because there was so much more emotion in it. When Jack had enough strength, he lifted himself off of her, pulled out, and flopped down next to her. The girl turned around on her side and snuggled into his chest after he threw the condom away and pulled the covers over them.
He was about to ask her who she was but wasn’t able to. The girl’s breathing had slowed down. She was now in her dream world. Perhaps he would see her again, or he could ask Alesia about her. Not only did he want to know who she was, but he also wanted to know how she got those scars. Every clue came into his head as he tried to figure out what happened to her.
The way that she said that all the last fun things she did, she did them at age 12.
The way she always keeps her plushie close.
The fact that she never talks about her parents.
The scars.
The way she described the ocean.
The paintings.
He fell asleep before he could put the pieces together. Oh and he guessed he would have to go to the store tomorrow. Oh well.
He opened the door slightly and slipped both hands inside. Alesia couldn’t recognize his hand movements on account that they were sideways. He repeated it when he didn’t get an answer.
Alesia sighed. “You can come in.” Did she really just say that? “I’m taking a bubble bath, so you can’t see anything.” Jack gulped before entering the bathroom. There Alesia was, sitting in the bathtub, naked. He may not have been able to see anything, but that didn’t stop his pants from tightening. “Come closer.” She motioned for him to come closer and didn’t stop until he was right next to the big tub. “I need to tell you something.” Jack hesitantly leaned hi head over so it was by her mouth. In a seduction whisper, she said, “I want you to fuck me.” Echo.
He didn’t even have time to think another word before Echo pulled him into the bathtub and on top of her. He tried to get out, but she pulled his head down by his hair and making his mouth connect to hers. Jack had gasped from the surprise, so her tongue was already roaming around his mouth. Feeling her tongue on his again took all his strength away. He pushed her tongue out of his mouth and started to explore hers. She moaned as his tongue ran across the roof of her mouth and behind her teeth.
“Your shirt’s all wet. Why don’t you take it off?”
Jack started to then stopped. He shouldn’t be doing this. Alesia doesn’t know what’s going on. Besides, what if she came back?
“I have complete control. Don’t worry. Alesia isn’t coming back tonight.”
Jack slowly nodded before slipping his shirt over his head. He attached his mouth to her neck. He would bite down on a spot and then kiss it as if it would make it better. After every bite that would definitely bruise, he would move up her neck. When he finally got high enough, he started to bite her earlobe and then behind her ear.
Echo moaned, but this wasn’t enough for her. His body wasn’t touching hers. Only his lips were. She wanted, no, needed more. She grabbed his right hand that was on the side of the bathtub and put it on her left breast. A gasp slipped past her lips from the feeling of his calloused fingertips on her nipple.
Jack was too lost to be found. His already dark eyes became darker with lust and desire. He actually hadn’t been with a girl in a month. He didn’t know why he didn’t have a one-night stand before Alesia came. He just didn’t want to. Perhaps he truly was destined to be with this girl.
Jack continued to move his mouth down and giving her opened mouth kisses until he came to her chest. Responsible Jack was truly gone. He started to suck on her nipple and his other hand pinched the other one. “J-Jack,” fell from her mouth. He took that as a sign that she wanted more. He took her nipple between his teeth and applies a small amount of pressure. “J-Jack, I-I n-need you.”
It was about time that they moved this to the bedroom. Yeah, bathtub sex was hot, but a part of him still wanted to make this perfect. Bathtubs really aren’t that comfy. Jack lifted his lanky body out of the tub before leaning down and picking Echo up bridal style. The journey to Jack’s bedroom was quick because well, they were both fucking horny.
As soon as he made his way over to the bed, he laid Echo down and started working on his belt. That was easy. The hard part was trying to get his skinny jeans off quickly. You would think that after all the times he had sex he would be a pro at it. He obviously still wasn’t. Sometimes he wondered why he even wore them at all. “Hurry up, so you can fuck me.” With that, he finally got his jeans and boxers off.
He got on the bed and hovered over Echo. He took her in. There were scars here and there, but he still found her absolutely beautiful. There was a long scar that went from the right side of her collar bone to the middle of her chest. Jack gently laid kisses up it before finally giving her a peck on the lips.
The aura around them changed. They could both feel it, but what was it? Neither of them just wanted to fuck the other anymore. They both wanted to make love… Jack looked into the eyes of the girl that lay underneath him. They looked different. They obviously weren’t cheerful like Alesia’s. They were filled with desire, but they weren’t seductive like Echo’s. Whose eyes were these?
The unknown girl leaned up and kissed him quickly telling him that this was what she wanted. She really wanted him. Jack understood and moved his hand between her thighs. The teenager moved them apart, so Jack would have access. He quickly kissed her before sliding a finger in. Her face turned to one of discomfort. This was more than the normal though. The girl slowly opened her eyes to find Jack talking to her.
“Are you a virgin?” he asked.
She nodded. “I actually had never kissed anyone until that incident with Echo.” Jack was right. This wasn’t Alesia or Echo. Who was she? “I think… I think I’m ready for another finger.”
Jack nodded and cautiously added another one. He paused and didn’t move them until she nodded her head. He started to pull out and push back in slowly, just trying to find that one spot that would make her feel better. He knew he found it when her back arched and a loud moan escaped her mouth. “Th-there Jack.” He scissored her for a little bit before finally pulling both out. The girl whined from the emptiness but was pleased when she saw him reach into his bedside drawer and grabbed a little packet out. He opened it with his teeth and then slid the condom on.
Jack was now hovering over the girl again. The kiss they were sharing was a passionate one. He pulled away and started talking to her. “This will hurt. Tell me if you want me to stop, ok?” She nodded, so he lined himself up. He gave her one last kiss before slowly pushing in. He only made it half-way before he stopped. The girl kept her eyes closed as she tried to fight back tears.
“Go,” she barely let out. He pushed in more until he was finally all the way in. A few tears escaped her eyes, so he stopped again. He kissed her nose, her forehead, her cheeks, and finally her lips to try to get her to forget the pain.
After a couple of minutes, she pushed back. Jack got the hint and pulled slowly and pushed back in at the same speed. He continued the slow rhythm and tried to find that spot that would make her feel so much better.
“Oh my God! Right there!”
Jack sped up a little, so it was an average speed and making sure that he hit her g-spot each time. She wrapped her legs around his waist, causing him to go in deeper. The duo moaned.
“F-faster Jack.”
He did as instructed and started up a faster pace. Moans filled the room as Jack started to thrust harder after she told him to. Jack got sloppier as he got closer. Alesia was as well. With one more kiss, filled with nothing but love, they both came together.
Jack collapsed on top of her and tried to catch his breath. He hadn’t felt like that in a long time, and it wasn’t because she was a virgin. It was because there was so much more emotion in it. When Jack had enough strength, he lifted himself off of her, pulled out, and flopped down next to her. The girl turned around on her side and snuggled into his chest after he threw the condom away and pulled the covers over them.
He was about to ask her who she was but wasn’t able to. The girl’s breathing had slowed down. She was now in her dream world. Perhaps he would see her again, or he could ask Alesia about her. Not only did he want to know who she was, but he also wanted to know how she got those scars. Every clue came into his head as he tried to figure out what happened to her.
The way that she said that all the last fun things she did, she did them at age 12.
The way she always keeps her plushie close.
The fact that she never talks about her parents.
The scars.
The way she described the ocean.
The paintings.
He fell asleep before he could put the pieces together. Oh and he guessed he would have to go to the store tomorrow. Oh well.
Yep. I made the fist chapter 12 pages because I'm adding a bunch of stuff. The second is 10, but it's not the second chapter of this story. It's actually her just getting her stuff and having the guy character (his name is Elijah) driving her to his place. I did the same with another one that I started writing, but I haven't finished the finally copy yet. The rough draft has been done, but I only have four and a half chapters done because I'm adding more stuff.
The main difference would be that they do call her Aly in the begining because I found a way to work with it and the chapter where Alesia reveals herself, she has nightmares, and Elijah has a backstory that is also going to be a book. That, and I don't know what to call it yet because it will have a different name.
I'm happy you like this though! :) :) :)
And that's cool about your friend!
6/28/13