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The Experts Say I'm Delirious

“I can do it. I’m strong.”

Aly was shaking. She tried not to show it, but was failing miserably. After moving up a little bit, Jack held onto her hand tighter and turned to face her.
“Are you ok?” he asked with a worried expressions. She nodded. “You don’t look alright.”
“I-I’m f-fine.” Her eyes moved away from his and stared at the ride that would be the death of her. Jack’s eyes followed hers and saw what she was so terrified of.
“You don’t have to go on if you don’t want to.”
“I can do it. I’m strong.”
“I’m not saying that you’re not.”
They moved up. “I can do this. I can do this.” She was shaking now, and the rest of the guys noticed.
“Seriously. I’m not going to make you go on if you really don’t want to.”
“But I can do it!”
“I don’t care! They aren’t going to let you on if you’re shaking this bad! I don’t see why you want to go on because I’m not letting you go on!”
Aly may not have been able to hear him, but it was obvious that he had been yelling at her. She didn’t like being yelled at. Of course, who does? She torn away from his grasp and ran out of the line and to an unknown destination. Tears started to stream down her face. Aly couldn’t stop them. She really wasn’t all that strong. Alesia and Echo were the strong ones. Aly was just a little girl sharing a body with them.
Now, Jack couldn’t believe that he had just done that. How could he just yell at the girl he loved? He didn’t want her to be so scared but he hurt her in the process. He just wanted to beat himself up. He did deserve it. There was no way he could miss the liquid that spilled from her eyes as she ran away from him. Jack was a monster.
He told the guys to go on without him. He was the one that made her so upset and he was going to be the one to fix it. Now, he just had to figure out where she went. This was like the zoo all over again. He started by looking around the entrance to the roller coaster. She couldn’t have gone too far, right? Wrong. He couldn't find her anywhere. Aly was no where no the entrance. Where could she have gone. Jack started to look around the other rides they had gone on. Maybe she was by that spilly ride. Of course, she wasn’t there either. Maybe it was a bad idea to have the guys not help him. Jack pulled out the map. Where else could she have gone. That was when he noticed the ride with the big circle around it. Of course!
When he got there, Jack saw that he was correct. Aly was sitting on a bench right by the ferris wheel. He let out a sigh of relief knowing that she was alright. That was good, but she was still crying which was bad. Jack felt terrible about that. He made his way over to her and sat down next to her and rested his hand on her back.
Her head shot up from the contact, but then her body softened by knowing who it was. She knew that he was going to say something, but she was proved incorrect when his mouth wasn’t the thing that moved. Jack wrapped his arms around the girl and held her close. Jack couldn’t really think of what to say so he just did what was the first thing that popped into his head.
“I’m really sorry,” she sniffled. Jack shook his head. He was the one that shook be sorry. “I am sorry though. I’m sorry that I ruined your day.” Wait. What?
Jack pulled away from the girl. “Is that why you were so set on going on the rollercoaster with us? You thought that it would ruin my day if you didn’t?” Aly rubbed her eyes and nodded. Jack just chuckled. “You wouldn’t have ruined my day. My day is perfect just knowing that you’re with me and ok. I don’t care if you don’t go on a rollercoaster or not. I love you, and you love me, and that’s all that matters.”
“Thank you.”
“Do you want to go on the ferris wheel now? I know that’s what you’ve been wanting to go on.”
Jack took her hand and led her over to the line which was rather short. Once seated, they started going up to the top. All of a sudden, the ride came to an abrupt stop. What could be causing this? Jack looked down and saw a man talking to another before they could hear a voice.
“We are sorry for the rides malfunction. One of our mechanics is coming to fix the ride now. We don’t know how long this is going to take, so just hang tight.”
“We’re stuck,” Jack signed to Aly.
“How long is it going to take?”
“Don’t know.”
“I’m really sorry for making you go on a ride with me just to get stuck.”
“Don’t be sorry. It’s ok. I’m with you, and that’s what makes me happy.”
“I want to make it up to you.”
“You don’t have to.”
“Oh, but I want to.” Jack usually only heard that voice at night. It was none other than Echo.
Echo got out of her seat and crawled over to Jack. She could do this because this was one of those big ferris wheels that didn’t have to lock you in. Once she was over to him, she straddled his lap and put her mouth on his. Her tongue was easily able to enter early on. Why would Jack even want to say no? This was Echo after all. They started to have a heated make-out session with all teeth and tongue. Echo was the only one that kissed him like that. Yeah, he prefered Alesia’s loving and passionate kisses, but sometimes he just wanted ones like this. What? He was a guy after all.
“I think I should give you your reward now. What do you think?” Jack’s head went a mile a minute. They may have only been making-out, but that was just enough to make him start to get a little bulge in his pants. “You taste so good, but I’m in the mood for a little bit of a different flavor.”
Jack knew what that meant, and that just made him harder. Echo made her way down, so she was kneeling in front of him. Her hand started to undo his pants and the whole time she was staring at him dead in the eyes. When they were finally undone, he pulled down both his pants and boxers to his ankles. As soon as Jack could feel the cold air on his erection, he felt a hand as well pumping him.
“Are you ready for me to put this in my mouth?”
Jack didn’t answer this time. He just moaned from the sensation. Echo knew what that meant, so she put the tip in her mouth and sucked hard. When she got the sounds she wanted, she slowly started to moved her head more down. She didn’t have the ability to deepthroat him, but she was able to get her mouth to go down far enough for his liking. Echo used her hand to cover the rest.
Her head started to go up and down, up and down. She started to hum as she hollowed her cheeks out. The vibrations always made everything better, and she knew that too. Why else would she have done that? Echo wanted to taste him right now, so she started to use all of her little tricks. It wasn’t too long before Jack was cumming down her throat. Echo finally got what she wanted.
As fast as she came, she left. It was a good thing that Aly didn’t come back though. She wasn’t one to enjoy looking at her boyfriend naked or taste him with her tongue. Alesia came this time. She helped Jack get his pants back on and then snuggled into his side. Soon the ride started to move again, and they continued their day together.


I'm sorry that I didn't have this up earlier. I'm really busy. I have to preform for the Christmas dinner on Saturday, and I was shopping all day with my sis yesterday. I'm going ti have more time to write though. I quit the bowling team because they wouldn't help me when I needed it or put me in. I needed to update Knots in the Ties, study for a big test, and finish my sketchbook on Wednesday. Do you know what I did for over an hour? I sat there doing nothing but watch music videos on my iPod. I mean, seriously?
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A Tongue Like a Nightmare That Cut Like a Blade

A Tongue Like a Nightmare That Cut Like a Blade

NC-17 Romance

Alex Gaskarth/OC, mute, tour, Sequel


Completed ✓
10.0 24 Votes


@Billie Joe Gaskarth
Yep. I made the fist chapter 12 pages because I'm adding a bunch of stuff. The second is 10, but it's not the second chapter of this story. It's actually her just getting her stuff and having the guy character (his name is Elijah) driving her to his place. I did the same with another one that I started writing, but I haven't finished the finally copy yet. The rough draft has been done, but I only have four and a half chapters done because I'm adding more stuff.
The main difference would be that they do call her Aly in the begining because I found a way to work with it and the chapter where Alesia reveals herself, she has nightmares, and Elijah has a backstory that is also going to be a book. That, and I don't know what to call it yet because it will have a different name.
I'm happy you like this though! :) :) :)
And that's cool about your friend!
QueenDes QueenDes
@QueenDes that's awesome! One of my friends wrote a book based in her favourite characters and people and we ended up publishing it for her birthday. And if it's a book, it means lots of chapters ;)
@Billie Joe Gaskarth
Thanks. I forgot to mention when I updated the sequel, but I'm actually turning this into a book that's not a fanfiction (obviously). You're the first to know on here. :)
But thank you. This is my favorite of all of my stories, and it makes me feel awesome when I get comments on it. :) :) :)
QueenDes QueenDes
Love it, only 1/2 way though at the moment but steaming through it.
Thanks! I might start writing the first chapter tonight. I just realized that I have two stories that are late, so I might write it tomorrow.
QueenDes QueenDes