Drink Me Under, Pull Me In [BLOCKED]
Summary
-Alex-
For centuries, my kind have lived in the shadows of the world, hiding away to keep our monsterous nature away from the human population. But when my mom decides to have us move from Essex to Baltimore when I was seven, I knew nothing would come of it. Sure enough, when I got to my first day of eight grade and met my best friend, Jack, I also met the girl that would drive my senses insane, Mya Branson.
-Mya-
I was getting out of private school and I was finally joining my old neighbor and sandbox buddy best friend, Jack Barakat. I've been a trouble child for my mom since I had really bad ADHD and I couldn't stay out of trouble and for the fact that my dad wasn't the nicest guy ever and he'd hit us. I hated him when he got drunk, because that's when he'd hit us, well mainly me since I can't keep still and I drive him crazy. Now my life is a shit hole since he's decided to leave my mom without warning and now she drinks heavily and hits me. When I thought nothing could get worse, Alex Gaskarth pops up into my life and changes everything.
For centuries, my kind have lived in the shadows of the world, hiding away to keep our monsterous nature away from the human population. But when my mom decides to have us move from Essex to Baltimore when I was seven, I knew nothing would come of it. Sure enough, when I got to my first day of eight grade and met my best friend, Jack, I also met the girl that would drive my senses insane, Mya Branson.
-Mya-
I was getting out of private school and I was finally joining my old neighbor and sandbox buddy best friend, Jack Barakat. I've been a trouble child for my mom since I had really bad ADHD and I couldn't stay out of trouble and for the fact that my dad wasn't the nicest guy ever and he'd hit us. I hated him when he got drunk, because that's when he'd hit us, well mainly me since I can't keep still and I drive him crazy. Now my life is a shit hole since he's decided to leave my mom without warning and now she drinks heavily and hits me. When I thought nothing could get worse, Alex Gaskarth pops up into my life and changes everything.
Characters
Alex Gaskarth
The vampire that gets involved in Mya's problems; her new beau
Jack Barakat
Mya's best friend and sandbox buddy
Lisa Ruocco
Alex's bitch vampire ex-girlfriend; Mya's constant tormentor
Mya Branson
The girl with some many problems, and Alex adds to the pile; Alex's vulnerable girlfriend; Alex's familiar
So I just found this and I really like what you have of this so far. I'm sad it was never continued, though. :(
I found another Alex vampire story on here (completely different from yours) so I just decided to look others up and found yours. Yours is definitely different and while I'm generally not a vampire fan (due to the clicheness that Twilight brought to it and the only one I can really respect is The Lost Boys, lol), but I really like what you have of this one.
If you ever find the inspiration to one day continue this, I will be here to read. I'm not sure how subscriptions work on this site, but I'm hoping it's similar to Mibba where I'll get an email notification or something? Idk. But I am subscribed. :)
You're a really great writer! I hope you're at least still writing. :)
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