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Jack's House

Ch.17: Shut Down

Nyssa's POV:
"YOU LITTLE BITCH!!!," Jack screams and tries to slap but Rian, I mean my dad, gets in front of me. Jack stares at him in shock. "Mr. Dawson. I thought we had some business. You have never brought a girl to me before. You... you usually take them to another brothel afterwards." "Thats what you think. You see Jack. I'm really a private investigator. My disguise job is as a high roller. I go to different brothels to help girls escape into a better life. Because thats the life I would want for my own daughter. I started this business when my daughter was 5 years old. But the job was taking more control over my life, and sadly I had to leave my family."

I stare at my dad in shock. "So when my daughter was 7 years old, I left. Thought I would never see her again. Until, years later. I get a call from you about a new girl you have. You telling me her name and sending a picture. My daughter, Nyssa Dawson."

Jack's face changes to horror. He stares at my dad, to me, back to my dad. "Didn't make the connection did you Jack. Her last name was changed to my wifes old last name. Thats how I knew it was her. Just by her name. Thats why I offered you more money then ever before. To make sure that you would agree for me to come for Nyssa. Thats how you didn't know that Nyssa is my daughter. Now. I'm here to take my daughter with me, and to shut down your brothel."

"YOU CAN'T DO THAT!!!!" "I can't? Ms. Niessa. Please come in." Ms. Niessa walks in, she smiles at me. "Ms. Niessa has been working for me all these years Jack, not you. Same with Alex's assistant. I have people in every brothel out there. I can't save everyone because they choose to come here. But I do make sure to save the ones who get as you call it, collected. Like my daughter was."

I couldn't believe what I was hearing. My dad. Has been saving girls who have been collected at different brothels and giving them a better life. All along Ms. Niessa knew.

"I promise everything will be okay Nyssa."

She knew. Ms. Niessa knew that my dad was coming for me.

"I am shutting down your business, and everyone will return to the outside world. My company will make sure that they get a great life." "YOU CAN'T DO THAT!!!," Jack screams. My dad smiles at him, "try me. I hav enough evidence to show that I can. After tonight. Sweet Remedy will no longer exist."

Jack stares at me in horror, "don't stare at my daughter," my dad snaps. "You are under arrest and will be going to jail for your multiple acts. And don't pretend that I don't know that you and Alex took advantage of my daughter. You better pray she's still a virgin." "I am dad," I speak up. He smiles at me, looking relieved.

"Tell me exactly, did they take advantage of you?" Jack glares at me, but there was something in his eyes that I never seen before. Fear.

"Yeah. They took advantage of me." My dad's eyes filled with rage, "ARREST HIM!!!" Cops run in and grab Jack, I hear Alex yelling. I watch them take Jack out. The last I will ever see of Jack.

I hug my dad tightly, "the plan worked Rian. Jack's business is finally shut down." "Because he did the final straw. Taking my daughter from me."

Comments

@Jack is a sparkly unicorn
thanks! i have the sequel going now, its called Freedom
brittbrattcatt brittbrattcatt
11/4/13
Wow I just read that whole thing in one go. I usually don't read this type of story but it just kept sucking me in c:
AW

THIS IS SO PERFECT THE MOVIE MADE ME CRY AND THIS STORY DID TO IM IN TEARS HELP
w0wolivia w0wolivia
4/28/13
AW AW AW AW AW
YESSS THEY'RE IN LOVE
I DIDN'T REALIZE I HAD BEEN HOPING FOR THIS TO HAPPEN SINCE IT HAPPENED
THAT REUNITION AND JACK GETTING ARRESTED WAS BEAUTIFUL
GREAT JOB
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