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The Anklebiters

Pushing and Pulling Me Down to You

It was a Sunday afternoon when it happened.

Hayley sat on Alex’s bed with him, watching his facial features contort as his fingers lingered across the strings of his guitar. He hummed a melody under his breath, trying to recount the words of a song he created last night. Hayley tried to pry her eyes away as a million thoughts swarmed her brain, like one in particular.

Yep
, her conscious concluded, you definitely like Alex.

“Okay, I think I got the first verse and chorus.” He then smiled to her, quickly scribbling down the words on a random piece of notebook paper. She quickly returned from her daydream.

She gestured for him to continue. “Go on,” she beamed.

He cleared his throat as he sat up and instantly started the tune. Humming the beginning, he immediately went into the song, his soft voice filling the room:

“Shooting for the stars

Desperately reaching
For something in the dark
Pictures of memories

“Buried in my heart
Lie awake and dream of
The endless possibilities
Catch my breath and go for it

“Take apart
Everything that’s
Holding me down

“Make a point
To pick a new direction
To make a new connection …”

He smiled to himself, wondering if Hayley knew what all of this was leading too. Of course, the orange-haired girl was completely oblivious; Alex always surprised her.

“Is this what it feels like?

Finding out
That I've got the guts
To say anything

“Feels like
Breaking out
When I can
Give up my reputation

“Finally,
I can see
Honestly, I've got the guts
To say anything …”

He finished what he had of the tune and then looked at her, almost disappointed. “And that’s where I’m stuck,” he sighed.

“It’s amazing, regardless” she smiled, making him do the same. “Remember when you asked me about after high school?”

He chuckled softly. “Not this again.

“No, just hear me out!” She giggled while throwing a pillow at him. He finally shut his mouth. “What I’m trying to say is that maybe you should start considering music schools. I know that everyone tells you football should be your main goal, but I honestly think you’re way better at music and you could do something with it in the future. Not a lot of people make it in that industry, but you can, Alex.”

She glanced over at him, seeing that he was staring at her with the biggest grin on his face. “What?” She furrowed her brow.

“I just …” Was now the time? He had to do it sooner or later, or he’d just about throw up right now. Finally, he muttered, “I love you.”

Hayley’s mouth went agape. Oh, no, she thought. She was hoping this would never happen. She was hoping the Anklebiters would tell her to end this before this could happen. Shit, shit, shit, she kept repeating in her head. She knew she liked Alex―she liked him a lot―but she wasn’t sure if she was actually in love with him.

Despite the internal battle ragging inside of her, she stuttered, “I―um―I love you too.”

His smile was too large to compete with anyone else’s in the world, even showing his shiny teeth. His grin soon faded as he watched Hayley stare at him, still in her shocked state. He might as well keep going while he was at his house alone with her. He knew she was the one, so now was the time for everything.

Swallowing the lump in her throat, Hayley watched Alex inch toward her and almost instantly, his lips attacked hers. Without one thought, Alex slammed their tangled bodies on the bed. He clearly didn’t know exactly what he was doing, but Hayley went with it nonetheless. His tongue poked at her lip, and she allowed him entrance. It was when she started running her hands through his hair that she felt his hands starting to lift her top off her torso.

She was in deep shit.

Notes

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Comments

Haha, wait a minute, hold up. HOLD UP.
I started reading this story, thinking it was your other story I have yet to read with multiple installments... and then I just got to this last update, realizing I confused the stories the whole time AND THIS WAS NEVER FINISHED. UGH.
OMG. This story though...
This story is seriously amazing. Very John Tucker Must Die, but different. I've seen people take that plot and incorporate it with an ATL story before, but this story is definitely different with it; not as much of a direct influence, but kind of a similar thing going on, and able to stand alone on its own and be great. I'm really bummed that this was never continued; you're a really talented writer and I'm itching to know how this would have ended now. Especially considering I was thrown for a loop since I mixed it up with the other story, ugh! SO FRUSTRATING.
I hope maybe you still get on here, or get notifications, or are just able to see this comment... I see another person commented around a month ago, so you definitely still have readers!
That being said, I know that life can be hell with hecticness and just reality and so... that seemed to be catching up with you in your last author's note. I hope everything is okay with you. Even if this story isn't ever continued, I hope at the very least, you're still writing on your own time... you definitely have a knack for it.
And as Taylex_Jarkarth said... this story made me feel weird things as well. Maybe butterflies? Hayley's emotions definitely transpired through me as a reader; whatever she was feeling, I was feeling. You conveyed her as a very relatable character, and I commend you for that. I'm just bummed that things had to go down the way they did. :/ I'm just wondering how you planned to end it all, now. lol. I have faith that Alex still loves her, and if he knew the full truth (and Hayley plucks up the courage to tell him how she truly feels and how it changed for her), there may be chance for reconciliation. But idk. What she did was pretty big, so it's hard to tell and you honestly can't blame him for being angry. But I'm an optimist, lol.
How did I confuse the multiple installment stories. Ugh. I guess I would've had to reach the end of what you had eventually. XD But it just frustrates me that there isn't more to read!
But anyway, you are seriously an amazing writer, and I just wanted to let you know that. This story had me in with just the first chapter. Even though it's been a minute, I have faith that you could come back to it; I've seen other authors do so before. :) I will be here to read and leave feedback if you do, for sure.

Nanook Nanook
7/2/17

I just wanted to find out if you're still gonna continue this story? I know that you're busy and it's inconsiderate of me to do this but I just really love this and it made me feel weird things (which are good by the way). I admire your writing a lot and I just hope you won't discontinue this, it's been years.

@AllTimeAnna
Thank you so much for the advice! :D

Also, will you be continuing Casual Affairs?

Ellsxo_ Ellsxo_
10/10/14

Please update. I really need them to get back together! I'm literally crying rn

Ellsxo_ Ellsxo_
10/9/14