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The Next Big Thing

Chapter 5

I stood in front of my full length mirror getting looking myself over, but something just didn’t seem right with my costume, it seemed incomplete. I knew just how to fix it. “Hey May can you come here and help me with my costume?” I called to my sister, she quickly showed up to my room, more than willing to help.

“Sure thing what’s up?”

“I don’t know I just feel like it’s not finished.”

“Alright well first what are you going as again, and second why are you so into normally you don’t give a shit about your costume, you just love the holiday.”

“I’m a rock-star and I know but I’m going to Alex and Becca’s party and I would like to look nice.”

“Do we have a crush on this Alex and I know just what you need give me a minute.” She left my room then came back a couple minutes later with blue eye shadow.

“Hell no, I’m not wearing make-up”

“Oh relax Jack it’s not for your eyes it’s for your hair now give me your hair gel, and you never answered my question. Do you have a crush on Alex?” May was the only member of my family who knew I was gay, and I kind of hoped she would let that question go, but no of course she wouldn’t.

“I don’t know, maybe… kind of… okay yeah I do.”

“Aw Jack that’s adorable, there I’m done.” I quickly thanked her as she was leaving the room.
When I looked back at the mirror I almost called her back into my room, she somehow made the blonde part of my hair blue, I figured that she wouldn't do anything permanent so I let her get away with it, plus she was right it helped complete my costume. I had black leather pants, combat boots, and a black tank top on, and with the blue hair I did look like a rock star. I made my way downstairs and to the front door, “By guys I’m going to a party.” I said hoping my parents would just let it at that, but before I could get out the door I heard my mother calling back, “Jack come into the kitchen.” I walked into the kitchen finding my mom and dad sitting at the table with May making herself something to eat. My mother than continued, “Now Jack where did you say you were going?”

“To Alex and Becca’s Halloween party.”

“Jack I don’t want you driving to a party”

“Why not?” I asked a little annoyed, when my father spoke up.

“She doesn’t want you driving home drunk.” He said, always the blunt one, he never would beat around the bush he would just tell it flat out. I was about to speak up and beg them to let me go but May saved me.

“Mom, dad how about I drive Jack there and then he just spends the night and either I will pick him up tomorrow or one of his friends can drive him.” They both reluctantly agreed and then May told me to be ready in 10 min as she went and finished the sandwich she was making. I quickly texted Alex saying I was going to spend the night with either him of Becca and got back a very flirty response of “Can’t wait ;).”

The car ride was filled with whatever music was playing and me giving her directions to Becca’s house. When I was about to get out of the car she turned to me and said, “Hey Jack, good luck with Alex.”

“What do you mean?”

“I mean good luck trying to get into his pants cause if I know you and I do that’s your goal for tonight.”

“May my goal for tonight isn’t to try to get into his pants it’s to figure out if he is even gay and then maybe if he is ask him out, I’m not a total slut like you.” I said in a loving tone, hey she was my sister we were allowed to call each other names. I stepped out the car and shut the door leaning down into the window when she just looked at me and said, “mmhmm.” I simply responded with, “Goodbye May, thanks for the ride.” With that she took off and I turned towards the house, the party was already in full swing but I was just excited to get to see Alex.

Notes

Guys I need your help with deciding when to have a smut chapter. I might do one around chapter 8 or 9 but if i'm not really sure, cause I might just do it later however; i'm not sure how i could work it in later, but i know how I could work it in now, so what do you guys think?

I'm not really sure how I feel about this chapter. I originally wanted Jack and his parents to get into a fight cause they thought he was dating Becca, and then he would sneak out ,but i don't know I just couldn't seem to get the wording right, and i really wanted to get this out cause I'm going to be busy for the next couple of days with school stuff so I wouldn't be able to write, so this will just have to do.
I'm actually really excited to write the next couple chapters cause there is gonna be some drama at this party so yeah.

Sorry for the hella long authors note.

Comments

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ATL_Hereos ATL_Hereos
1/15/15

@madisonpaige
I KNOW RIGHT

SOMETHINGS GOTTA GIVE IS AMAZING AND I CANT STOP LISTENING TO IT!

madisonpaige madisonpaige
1/12/15

@WeAreWhatWeLiveFor
Thank you so much I'm glad you like it!

I just read all of this story... And let me tell you. I'M LITERALLY IN LOVE WITH IT!! I have nothing but amazing things to say.. Bravo