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"Rian You Can't Just Do This"

Carrie On Home.

Jack and Chelsea were on the couch in the hotel penthouse. Jack was sleeping and Chelsea was just looking at Jack, with a lovingly look. Alex and Jasey were in one of the beds, Alex had a shirt covering him from the hips down, and Jasey was wrapped up in blankets and snoring, her red hair a mess everywhere. Zack was with a blonde girl, who Rian had never seen, but that wasnt an uncommon occurence. Every morning Zack had a different girl, and every afternoon his girlfriend Katie called and he told her, that he loved her and that he missed her. Zack was a great liar, or he truly did love Katie, but just missed the sex. Either way he was unfaithful. That is perhaps what Rian hated about actual relationships, the cheating, the lies, and the manipulation.

The penthouse was huge, there were three beds, for Alex and Jasey, Jack and Chelsea, and Zack and mystery girl number four. Rian didn't want to bunk with the people he saw everyday so they reserved him a different room. It wasn't as fancy as the penthouse, but Rian wasn't very extrodinary. He didn't like plain either, he just liked normal things. His room was large, had a kitchen in it, a hot tub in the corner, the walls were a dark blue color and the bed was a king size that he slept alone in.

Rian had about four suitcases, all marron colors. Two held his clothes, one held some personal items that he knew he would need for the trip. He knew there were many pretty self-involved girls with brunnette hair in Texas. He packed accordingly, a 22mm gun, a few knifes, sharp prepared to stab through the stomach. He had a very sharp knife that he could use to cut the throat or anything that felt like it needed to be cut. The last thing he had packed was the one thing that Kara had wanted, Vic gave it to him. Rian had only killed one girl without any help from Vic, it was a girl in Oregon.

She had long brunette hair and it flowed down her back. Rian befriended her, he was nice, then when she found out he had money, again she got selfish. She was not as bad as Kara ever was, but he still hated the greed that girls had when they found out about him. This one, her name was Carrie. She was short, had curves and beautiful hair. Rian was always looking for a pretty girl that had long brown hair. Carrie, she wanted a cherry red motorcycle. So he got it for her, he took her for a ride on the motorcycle, had a picnic basket and a bottle of wine in the basket.

They went to a small opening in the woods, it was a small meddow. He laid a blanket out on the grass, she was laying on the blanket and Rian opened the wine. She looked at him as he poured her a glass of white wine.

"Cheers." She spoke with a voice that matched her body almost perfectly. She was thin and her voice was golden. She could sing, that was the best thing about her. Rian smiled and clicked glasses with her. He smiled a fresh white smile. His teeth had always been very white. It was one thing that basically got him every girl he wanted so he used it to his advantage. He would charm them with his smile, and maybe buy them a drink or something, and then he would slaughter them somewhere they would never be found.


Carrie wasn't different from any of the other girls, he would smile at her and you could see that she melted when he looked at her. After maybe four or five glasses of wine, she started to get more and more out there. Once Rian knew she was gone, he would strike.

It was about 9pm now, it was dark and she was gone. She was lost somewhere in space and time. She kept mumbling about love or something like that. Rian had only known her for like a week or so. She couldn't love him, and he didn't love so it wasn't going to work.

"Let's go for a ride." Rian said as he pulled her to her feet.

"I'm-I'm... Don't care! Let's g-g-g-go!!!!" She said screaming.

He put his finger to her lips and made a signal for her to be quiet. She nodded and took his hand. Rian took her to where the bike had been parked, took out the keys and had her get behind him.

"Now when I say to let go, you let go. Okay? It'll give you a rush you've never known. I used to do it with my dad all the time." Rian lied.

"Okay!!" She yelled and she wrapped her hands around him.

Rian started going faster and faster as they went down the highway. He was at about 65 miles an hour. He was coming up to a bridge, it was small and he had his opportunity. He was going have her fall in the water, once again, it would look like an accident. He was close to the bridge.

He yelled, "READY? SET? LET GO!" As they pulled up to the river he hit the brakes and she fell off and went directly into the water. Rian was out of there right after he made sure he could ditch the body. There were rocks at the bottom of it. She fell face first, it happened better than Rian could plan it. It looked like a suicide. He went back to the picnic area and picked up the things that he had touched. The basket she had carried so it only held her prints. He took his glass the plate he used and the wine bottle he wiped off with the blanket. So it looked like Carrie went out and got drunk and fell off the bridge.

Comments

@Dawsomsauce Whenever I feel like it mostly. Sorry I've been working on my other one lately :/ I can try to update today
earthtojordann earthtojordann
3/14/13
When do you update?
Dawsomesauce Dawsomesauce
3/14/13
awws Poor Rian :/ wish he didn't have to see that
@SomwhereInNeverland It'll be okay. hopefullyyyyyyyyyyyy ;3
earthtojordann earthtojordann
2/27/13
bad rian :/