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25 Signs

Dreaded Days

(Heather's POV)

Today is one of the most dreaded days in my book.Its my birthday.I secretly hoped everyone forgot about it and it was just going to be a normal day.Sadly of course I knew Alex and the girls would never forget.

"Its open!" I shouted as I heard a knock on my door.

Jenna appeared in my living room as I walked downstairs.

"Happy Birthday!" She shouted handing me a bag.

"Damn it Jenna what did I say about presents." I said as she handed me the bag.

"I don't give a shit just open it!" She replied as I opened it.

Inside was a framed picture of us four girls.The frame was decorated and it had everyone's name on it.

"Its beautiful thank you Jenna." I said as I hugged her.

"No problem now hurry up we're gonna be late." She noted as we ran outside to get in her truck.

"Cass and Tay had Rian pick them up this morning because they had to do something really early and I was not getting up." Jenna said to me as Tay and Cass weren't in the car.

I gave an 'oh' face and we continued down the road.We arrived at the school and got out.

"God I really hope today goes by fast." I say aloud.

"I don't understand why you hate your birthday so much." Jenna said to me.

"I just hate being the center of attention." I responded as we walked into the building.

"I'll see you in 3rd period." Jenna said as she hugged me and walked to her locker in the other hallway.

I hugged her back and walked to my own locker.As I finished putting my things away I heard my name.

"Heather!" I heard that familiar voice shout.

As I turned around Alex came to a halt in front of me.A wide smile on his face.

"Hey!" I said as I hugged him.

"Happy Birthday!" He shouted.

I quickly put my finger to his lips.

"Shhhh" I chuckled.

"You have more gifts at my house but I thought I would give you one before school started." Alex said handing me a $70 Starbucks card.

"Alexander William Gaskarth I am going to kick your ass! $70 dollars you're fucking crazy!" I said playfully and hugged him again.
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"No but seriously thank you I'll definitely use it." I said as the bell rang.

"Off to Hell we go." Alex said sarcastically as he took his hand in mine and walked to class.

Notes

Another short update since I want to stretch the story out more :)

Comments

@SixFeetUnderThamesStreet
Yeah, I wrote on Mibba before but it's been a minute since I have. Also, being busy with college has put a damper on my inspiration.
But yeah, I know how the feedback thing feels, that's why I always try to leave it on stories I read. :) And thanks, I will let you know if I do! :)

Nanook Nanook
2/25/17

@Nanook
I completely understand where you're coming from when you say you're nervous to put your writing out there. I was the same way when I first started :P My writing is so special to me I feel like when it doesn't get the feedback I want, I get very upset lol. If you ever do decide to post your writing, I'm happy to give it a read and feedback if you'd like. Just shoot me a message and link it to me when/if you do!

@SixFeetUnderThamesStreet

Hi there. I'm so happy you saw my comment. :) I'm sorry to hear that you're not really into the story anymore.
I wouldn't really know who to suggest to write for it. I don't feel it would personally be right if I tried writing for it either; while I did really enjoy it, it was your idea. I'm still trying to convince myself to try and start a story, a bit timid when it comes to sharing my writing lately.
But it means a lot that you offered that. But yeah, again, I don't really know who to suggest. But this story was awesome for what you had of it.
Thanks for getting in touch and giving me an update. So many authors I never hear from, so I never know if they see my comment and just don't respond, just don't get on anymore, or what. So it was sweet of you to let me know. And glad to hear you've improved as a writer, that's awesome.
If you ever do see yourself writing ATL fics again, I would be happy to read them. Just let me know. :)

Nanook Nanook
2/23/17

@Nanook

Hello, I apologize for the lack of both updating and replying to your comment. (This is my new account I lost the login info for PLJ)

I would just like to say I think it's absolutely amazing that people are still viewing and commenting on writing I did when I was thirteen years old and it blows my mind to see how much I've improved as a writer in the short three years that it has been since I've posted my work on this site. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for finding this story and leaving your uplifting feedback. Unfortunately, I don't believe there will ever be an ending to this story. I haven't written all time low related fanfiction in over three years and I just don't write like I used to. I can't complete this fic without being in that creative headspace and I've seem to have just lost my desire to write ATL fanfiction.

HOWEVER...

If you (or anyone you know) who enjoys writing and would like to, I am willing to hand this story over to someone who can finish it and give it the glorious ending it deserves. Whoever takes it will be free to change anything they want and completely make it their own without and repercussions from me. I would however ask that I am credited for the idea and given a link to read it when it's finished. If you or any of your writer friends are interested please let me know! :)

So I stumbled across this... and just wanted to leave some feedback since I see it was never completed. I think you did a great job with what you have of it. I'm sad to see it was never finished, though.
If you ever choose to pick it up again someday, I will be here to read the rest of it. I think it has a very sweet plot line, and think it deserves an ending, if you can find the inspiration to write more to it. :)


Nanook Nanook
9/19/16